"its not just poetry, its a plead"

[IbnAbdulHakim]

aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrgggghhhhhhh
im suffocating please give me release
im struggling to breathe, gasping for air
take off this leash n make it all cease
take me as a slave n force me into peace
if im hesitating to kneel
please don't wait for me to appeal
just take me by the neck n place a seal
so i never return back to my sins
so my face isn't darkened in front of my kins
so i don't go scavenging back to those bins
where i chucked away my past
after a long struggle at last
n now im back to square one
where it all begun
begging for help whilst im pursuing life's fun
its the deep darkness which i so happily escaped
its back again with a deeper darker more intense shape...


WHAT? do you think this is minor poetry?
i want you to FEEL THIS so u make Dua' more strongly!
please shed your tears
raise two hands and set to rest my fears
"Allah guide this bro, guide everyone around him
guide this ummah, dont let the shayateen surround him..."

Ameen Ameen.. thumma Ameen..
when will the day come when my soul becomes clean......

[Re.TiReD]

Ameen Ya Rabb! Thumma Ameen!

I really felt that 'Aaarghhhhhh' :skeleton: :ooh:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ i wanted to do a barbarian cry but what letters of the english alphabet can describe it T_T?

[FatimaAsSideqah]

Ya Allah! :ooh:

What a deep!! Thumaa Ameen!

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[Re.TiReD]

so i never return back to my sins
so my face isn't darkened in front of my kins
so i don't go scavenging back to those bins
where i chucked away my past

I like....

I dont know....That cry was enough for me though

[Güven]

^ Innit !

subhanAllah , Allahuma Amiin! :ooh:

[Güven]

This is the one!! SubhanAllah! :ooh:

its the deep darkness which i so happily escaped
its back again with a deeper darker more intense shape...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

AMEEN !!!!


jazakAllah khair for understanding everyone.


im sure most of the members can relate to the feeling of returning to the past... no wait, not returning... being dragged back to it relentlessly against your will..

[Re.TiReD]

... being dragged back to it relentlessly against your will..

If I said that I'm 100% positive you'd disagree. You'd call me an FreeB...and tell me to fly away :bump:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ why wud i do that? if u can 100% relate it to it , its khair inshAllah

[Na7lah]

i'm speechless....:skeleton:

[Snowflake]

subhanAllah - that was a tear-jerker! It's just as well I had a cup of coffee to help soothe the big lump that had come up in my throat. My duaas are always with you bro. May Allah forgive your sins, protect you from the torment of the grave and the Fire and grant you the Paradise, where you may see His beautiful face ~ ameen :cry:

[SixTen]

I feel like I inspired that barbarian cry attempt (Lol)

Anyway, very deep poem, good talent.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

jazakAllah khair all !

dua's are appreciated greatly

[Nájlá]

i

dont

know

what

to

say
:cry:

subhanallah :cry:

may allah forgive all our sins ameen.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

Ameen jizakAllah khair

[Cabdullahi]

to turn a plea into beautiful poetry is class and brother you have class...mashallah

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ jazakAllah khair bro, greatly appreciated