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[x-strawberry-x]

uhm uhm .....

praying taraweeh,
tired,angry and in pain,
cant wait to get back home again,
my stomach inside is churning,
and now my head is burning,
on my way home i pass a bridge,
suddenly i trip over a ridge,
unexpectedly i see,
something approaching from a tree,
slowly walking towards me,
a sudden voice thunders,
as i lazily lumber,
and i know this is the end of me.
and then i lie helplessy
and in vain i try to plead
with the dark shape
approaching me,
"Im Not ready
leave me be!"
"Not ready,
There is no excuse,
Death is something
you cant choose,
you had your life
you chose to cruise
you didnt try to use
your time to to good,
so guess what,
you lose"
I heard voices,
Remembered my choices,
That i made,
Felt my conciousness
Start to fade,
I tried to stand
But fell back down,
I Shut my eyes
And Without a sound,
let myself slip away,
there was nothing a could say,
It was my grave mistakes,
That led me to this pain,
Id Wondered Down
Misery Lane,
No Going Back
I Let The Darkness Smother me....



whats happened in the poem:she saw the angel of death.

:D i made it all up from scratch.... pretty good for a nine year old huh... :coolious:

[Obi97_Abdul]

mashallah, Well done! :)

[Na7lah]

:ooh:

[alcurad]

cute,

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[Güven]

:salamext:

Omg this is the BEST poem i have read today :ooh: mashaAllah rofl

[noorseeker]

Mashallah, nine years old and thinking about the angel of death

[roohani.doctor]

nice :)

[x-strawberry-x]

oh thanks all you guyys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

[Obi97_Abdul]

Lool that is good

[Soulja Girl]

:sl:

Aww... Sweet... :D

:w:

[x-strawberry-x]

i added more u pplz if u wanna read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Abu Ilyas]

nice, :)

[Sahabiyaat]

cool

how old did u say u were agen?

[x-strawberry-x]

9 years old..

[Riyadh-ul-Jannah]

:sl:

Wow! That is a good one. MashaAllah

:w:

[x-strawberry-x]

thanxx

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i dont believe your 9 years old anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



that was waaay too good, even for a 90 year old :ooh:

[chances]

really nice mashaAllah

[MO783]

:sl:

Cool!.................Strawberry

[truemuslim]

omg lol that was too awesom. ur totally not nine!

[x-strawberry-x]

i ammm omg im just a mature 9 year old!!!
mikayeel dosnt think so Grrr LOL :)

[Mikayeel]

i ammm omg im just a mature 9 year old!!!
mikayeel dosnt think so:( Grrrrr LOL :)

U r not mature!! :p, dnt try act mature in front of these people though lool :D(jookess)


Wallahi that was amazing!! It didnt know u wer at rhyming :D Keep it up man, ur bro gna b jealous :p

[x-strawberry-x]

nah i dont think so :p

[Cabdullahi]

i resign and pass the baton to strawberries

[Ummu Sufyaan]

:sl:
mashallah :D
brilliant! 10/10 :D

[x-strawberry-x]

lol thanx you guys!!!!!!!!!!

[Cabdullahi]

Its over to you know you have to keep writing poems you know lol..to become LI POETRY QUEEN

[Na7lah]

lol

i'm waiting for your next poem :)

[x-strawberry-x]

its gunna be soon :p

[Misz_Muslimah]

Beautiful poem and very talented for a 9 year old mashallah :)

[Obi97_Abdul]

U r not mature!! :p, dnt try act mature in front of these people though lool :D(jookess)


Wallahi that was amazing!! It didnt know u wer at rhyming :D Keep it up man, ur bro gna b jealous :p

Hey I am the 1 who wrote it i just didnt realize i was on ur account takin all da credit for my work :raging:

[Obi97_Abdul]

^^ IM only kiddin ;D