The Couplet Thread

[Yanal]

:sl:
This thread is about couplets please post yours or comment on others. Here's my first one,
When there's life there is death
When will come this old threat.

[Re.TiReD]

:wasalamex

This soul feels old and weary
This soul cant take no more

This heart is battered and bruised
Wanna go, cant take no more

;D lol sorry :-[

[sevgi]

out in the forest where we sold our beliefs,
up on the hills where we found our release.

[Güven]

:salamext:

in the Darkness I found a fading light
In the Light I found a rising darkness

lol i dont get it :confused:

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[Sahabiyaat]

this dissertation is doing my head in
any minute now its gna go in the bin
why wont it just leave me to chill
man im sooo stressed, i cud actually kill

:D

[Ibn Abi Ahmed]

:sl:

The soul wishes, and the heart aches,
bitter revenge, time takes.

Standing at the edge of this frozen lake,
the world within my heart begins to shake.

[Re.TiReD]

You know, it hurts so much
Yet I aint crying
Want it to end
But for some reason I aint dying

And the rest is in my fone but I killed my fone, sorry.

[sevgi]

these arent couplets dudes...

[Re.TiReD]

Sorry, quadruplets

[Faith.]

Is this the beginning of my test
Or have I reached my end
Is it time to lay my deeds to rest
Im getting driven round the bend......
:sunny:

[Yanal]

MashAllah. Couplets or quadroublets would be fine
To dine:)

[sevgi]

it's like nails under your skin,
it's like that lump in your throat,
it's the coldness in the breeze,
it's knowing you'll never win.

[ghengis]

wealth and abundance for me are due
the chosen of god we know are but a few

nobilty my cloak in the rain, in shadows i shine
i walk on glass, no pain, the aim to be divine

[ghengis]

raw and ready,
out of a *****s belly, i landed in flames
god and his grace,
with a smile on my face, the fire i tamed

i branded iblis with my knuckles and ran to the grass
when i stumbled god helped and exalted me fast.

[Muezzin]

Little Miss Muffet
Ate at a buffet...

Aw, crap.

[Re.TiReD]

^ Her stomach then exploded
And her head imploded

And she lived happily ever after :-\

[IbnAbdulHakim]

oh how my nose so freely runs
giving way for such cleverly puns



;D

[Re.TiReD]

Your nose is like a tap
Which runs without end to eternity
It's squeaky cry I can hear
'please dont forget to wipe me!'

[IbnAbdulHakim]

hark quoth the raven
to all those men clean shaven
it is better to be bed-ridden
then striving to fit in Sodoms haven

[Space Chimp]

Your mom looks so calm.
But really there's a lot of sweat in her palm.

[Ibn Abi Ahmed]

:sl:

Do you envision us meeting, or has it already,
Taken place in the land of the mirage;

Then it withdrew and its shadow vanished,
And turned into torturous memories;

Thus asks my heart whenever,
The days grow long, after your absence;

When your shadow stares, smiling,
It is as if I am listening to the response;

Not mine..but these lines are so beautiful and deep that they're stuck in my head and I wanted to share them. It's from Hal Turana Naltaqi.