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Cabdullahi
11-04-2008, 08:12 PM
here i was:(,caught up in the boxing ring
,im too scared i cannot think
humungous scary(shaytan) fellow with horns
i physically feel weary and hollow,
feeling like a quietus leaf being pushed around by a ferocious wind...even spit i couldn't swallow:(
the bell rings
DI DI DING DING!
the tension
i try to clinch my fists but i can feel the gripping absence of my tendons
the other dude is fictionally redundant-
in ability,
one sledge hammer of a left hook in my vicinity
as i drop my sweat shudders
close to concussion my brain bounces like rubber
My consious friend
comes along and slowly counts to ten
and between each number was an encouragement
somehow i grew stronger
the term of my vision went from short to longer
i could see more clearer
i think im ready now as he draws nearer
i supplicated
and with one blessed punch i had him temporarily eradicated:)
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Güven
11-04-2008, 08:16 PM
:salamext:
wooow MashaAllah :ooh:
You heavyweight champion! :p
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Cabdullahi
11-05-2008, 12:15 PM
bump
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IbnAbdulHakim
11-05-2008, 01:37 PM
kool rhyme bro!!! :ooh:
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Cabdullahi
11-05-2008, 01:39 PM
Thanks Brother MZ
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Periwinkle18
11-05-2008, 01:41 PM
nice post bro
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Obi97_Abdul
11-05-2008, 04:28 PM
nice poem! :)
kermit's not a heavyweight champion hes a featherweight champion lol :giggling:
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Cabdullahi
11-05-2008, 04:30 PM
who's kermit
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Obi97_Abdul
11-05-2008, 04:33 PM
ur avatar that green froggy muppet thing
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Faith.
11-05-2008, 04:35 PM
Lol Cool poem :sunny:
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Cabdullahi
11-05-2008, 04:38 PM
Thanks guys..i never knew my raps make ppl laugh
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Na7lah
11-05-2008, 05:27 PM
i like this one :D
Ma'salamah
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Cabdullahi
11-05-2008, 05:39 PM
Thanks
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