Wrecked

[Cabdullahi]

from the start of my life....my birth
and the strife duration i was on earth
I’ve tripped over the same hurdles
got straight back up even if i had experienced an increased burden
things seemed hard at first, when i was startled
but i have come to realize im weak and that im a mere mortal
forget it! i think i am defeated,
zombie like and depleted,
has evil truly superseded?
my mistakes are in plurisy
im a hypocrite... i guess knowing that i have two angels either side of me
writing all my deeds using super stenography
i couldnt stay clean and on that reason i think come under the description of casuistry
im prone to tendencies wer ever i go,the devil keeps stalking me
see making poems was my talent
ive left it vanish unchallenged
perished and now im sitting here like hapless kid that lost his very first toy...
hopeless in rhetorically asking himself what has happened
as problems increment i have turned self assailant
so myself i have destroyed
feeling like i am standing in the way of a tonne of bricks that i cannot avoid
how do i reduce this subterfuge
and seek refuge
cannot stand this silly captivating life thats terrestrial
and its bewitching materials.....
dam.n! all of it..im not interested in bogus surpluses
im here for a purpose
if there's any such thing as happiness i want to purchase it
but as a matter of fact its within and to get it we have to chase it
Allah's grace is ample
so therefore there's light at the end of the tunnel

[Na7lah]

nice we hav 3 members back =)

[Cabdullahi]

bump

[Al-Zaara]

MashaAllah, cool one. :thumbs_up

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[true believer]

BOOM-i liked it. at first i was :O!
long poem
but i read it anyway..(my poems r long sometyms too, u just get carried away in the moment init?! loool) i like the wide range of words u string up together, nice!

[Cabdullahi]

Thanks guys i rapped this while i heard the toy soldiers beat...i dont listen to music but it was just out of the blue and it got me going

[Olive]

Good stuff bro. Keep it up! :)

[Cabdullahi]

cheers

[true believer]

YAH MAN
thats wat im on about! lol
did u change this ? :S