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true believer
11-24-2008, 08:06 PM
whoa, im on fire today! lol
jk, these are some old poems i wrote, just posting a few. :)

ENJOY :D

everything is hard and its getting harder.
one mistake and ur out in the gutter.
the world's so cold it makes u wanna shudder.
i have come to reliase the are no such things as "friends", just foes who wanna take ya for all ur worth,
but it aint about that as im proud to stand alone any day, dont need no foes.
but i just wanna be free. from all these problems bombarding me. everything seems to be haunting me. i wish to be free. free as a bird flyng over the sea.
its getting deep, im losing sleep. as my dark secrets lay above me. i close my eyes. refuse to cry. just be strong and hold on. but its tough when theres no one to talk to, just a pen to let it out, a pillow to drown it out....the sound of my aching breaking heart. as i close my eyes, silent in the dark.

peace xx
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true believer
11-24-2008, 08:07 PM
Darn it!
I was supposed to change the title
ohwell.
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kwolney01
11-24-2008, 08:08 PM
Wow...sister thats deep!!

Keep it up!! :D

Jazak Allah Khair
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Güven
11-24-2008, 08:10 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by true believer
Darn it!
I was supposed to change the title
ohwell.
Ill try , What did you wanna change ?
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true believer
11-24-2008, 08:19 PM
i wanted to change the title...to something related to the poem
but i cant think
betrayal is another poem i wrote..(i'll probably post that later)
think of a title den put it up if u can PLZ.
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