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true believer
11-25-2008, 06:26 PM
broken heart-broken world
no one to talk to when ur alone
cos no one cares and no one knows
but the one thing that really kills u is
that the ONE person u loved left
and ur world felt cold eva since
the memories that fill ur eyes wiz tears- somtyms happy-cos u were gratful
sometysm sad cos it will neva happen again
and u felt ANGRY cos this is happenin
cos now u regret every bad word that escaped ur lips
in the moment of madness
and now ur filled wiz sadness
the tears, the smiles, the laughter
that echos in ur eyes and mind
as u cry. then u look around this empty room
alone with nothin but grief by ur side.
and u grit ur teeth and clench ur fists
as wetness is felt upon ur cheeks
u look ahead, cos life is a hard road, with lessons to learn.
and love is the hardest one-whether its ur lover or ur mum
love is everwhere, but once its gone-its gone forever.
PEACE XX
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Faith.
11-25-2008, 06:59 PM
Assalamualykum,
Subhanallah, that poem brought tears to my eyes....:cry:
So beautiful..mashallah
Did you write that yourself?
:w:
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true believer
11-25-2008, 07:44 PM
yh i did. thank u :)
im glad it touched ur heart.
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Riyadh-ul-Jannah
11-25-2008, 07:55 PM
:sl:

MashaAllah
That is very Beautiful.
And you write it all by yourself. Wow!

:w:
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Faith.
11-25-2008, 08:06 PM
Assalamuaykum,
yh i did. thank u
im glad it touched ur heart
Wow you have a amazing talent for writing:)
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Ansariyah
11-25-2008, 09:33 PM
that got me teary. thanks for sharing sis, deep.
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Olive
11-26-2008, 08:25 AM
:sl:

Masha'Allah, there's some real talent in this section...

Keep it up sister! :D

:w:
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