empty-poem

[true believer]

empty blank pages
empty words wizout meanin
empty world
empty heart wizout a soul
just write rhymes to pass the time
gives me somethin to do when i feel weak and blue.
as my days r filled wiz gloom
nothin ahead but doom
as i block my problems out.
keep stress and presure away
focus on the task ahead as i will try ma best
even tho everyday brings a new test, so i gotta find some strength
to be straight and true no quick and easy shady routes
no seconds thoughts
keep it a void in ur mind
keep it empty for all of time
so nothin hurts
but the hardest is letting go
dettach and cut off- quick and sharp
no ill feelings as we part
no chocked up throat-no battle wiz the tears
no second thoughts to ur fears-cos they're already here.

peace xx
drop me ur comments and let me know ur thoughts...hope u liked it x

[Faith.]

Assalamualykum,
Wow thats a really heartfelt poem...:statisfie
I felt as is if it applied to me when I was reading it...Cause thats exactly how im feeling at the moment...lol

hope u liked it x

Yeah I loved it Sis...:thumbs_up

:wasalamex

[right path]

thats really good sis mashallah i wish i could make sense like you when i write lol