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[Cabdullahi]

predators that look sweetly innocent
sweepingly super tacticians who arent impeccant
promters of conundrums
pleasant on the eyes and ear drums
deceptive.. always one step ahead.. to your every move receptive
even as infants through puberty and maturity
while we egoistically dance in obscurity and lucidity
these chatter box species with everything they say emotions-
are linked... we? just cant handle the commotion
they moan and say we are too timid
but its a contradiction because chivarly... they've killed it
our test in life are these predators and their's? ....materialism
they had us buying big houses,cars and a great loss of pragmatism
so if you want to preserve wisdom
either choose a religious one
or get played son!

[Olive]

Wow! That's amazing bro.

Keep it up! :p

[Faith.]

^Wow bro
You have an amazing talent..

[Cabdullahi]

thanks

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[true believer]

i love the different words u use
sounds intelligent lol

[Cabdullahi]

im directing this to the killer species out there

[Faith.]

Killer species?..

[Cabdullahi]

lol never mind

[Faith.]

Lol..Sorry..:-[
I think im getting it...
Are they...A group of people:?..Women mabye?.....Or am I talking complete nonsense?

[Cabdullahi]

uve gt the correct answer women*

[Faith.]

Lol^
I think I got confused as you've used words beyond my minds capicity:D
lol
Nah Mash'Allah I understand It now.

[Olive]

so if you want to preserve wisdom
either choose a religious one
or get played son!

My fav lines. :D

[Somalina]

Tailor made for the Capitalists or Bankers I reckon.
Mashallah,'tis well done.

[Cabdullahi]

thanks 4 tha reps guys

[Sahabiyaat]

uve gt the correct answer women*

ya rabilalameen .....*rolls eyes*

[Cabdullahi]

huh? whats up^??

[Zahida]

:sl: Not all men/women are the same.............. You have a talent did you write that yourself or get any kind of help?........:w::)

huh? whats up^??

[Cabdullahi]

sister i got help from my brain alhamdulilah

[Zahida]

:sl:MashaAllah............... do you eat alot of badaam(almonds)..............I hear that they are good for your brain:D:w:

sister i got help from my brain alhamdulilah

[Cabdullahi]

lolol i used to eat everyday a bag of 200g of mixed nuts....when i used to go gym and train but now that stress has verily kicked in ....i quit gym and the nuts :(


badaam=urdu?

[Re.TiReD]

AsslaamuAlaykum

Yah Badaam is urdu.

I have a comeback to this poem, I'll see if I can find it insha'Allah :p

WassalamuAlaykum

[Cabdullahi]

okay...go ahead sister ...hope it doesnt to turn into a quarrel :(

[Ansariyah]

either choose a religious one
or get played son!

wicked endin. amazin poem, ur becomin a pro.:peace:

[Cabdullahi]

thanks yannie!

[Re.TiReD]

okay...go ahead sister ...hope it doesnt to turn into a quarrel :(

Lol nah I just found it after ages of searching and its lame ;D lol urs is good though masha'Allah :thumbs_up

[Cabdullahi]

phew.....thanks for the complimente

[Na7lah]

lol nice mashallah specially the last few lines

[Cabdullahi]

old poem i did a while back BUMP!

[~Raynn~]

:giggling:...Amazingly written, though...

[true believer]

oh ur junior :)...i thought so..but now im SURE lol :P

[Cabdullahi]

bump.......

[☆ღUmm Uthmanღ☆]

:sl:

very gud masha'Allah...neva read ur poems b4:embarrass

keep it up:rollseyes

[Ansariyah]

so if you want to preserve wisdom
either choose a religious one
or get played son!

Unforgettable

words..

[Hayaa]

:sl:

Whoa nice vocab. I have dictionary.com opened up when I'm reading your stuff :D MashaAllah

[Rasema]

:sl:
It gets serious, at the end, it makes you laugh. Good job. These woman increase poverty in the world. I mean, a bunch of people preach and complain that woman should not be forced to cover but then a bunch of woman would get pragnant and left with babys which increases poverty.

predators that look sweetly innocent

Hey, this applies to some hijabies as well.

Marvelous brother
:wa: