POINT OF NO RETURN- my poem

[true believer]

gone astray
lost my way
cold & empty inside
now im trapped

caught up between a truth & a lie. unsure of wrong and right
lost in the dark, blindly tryna find my way on shaky ground of
uncertainty and fate. my imaan was once a solid form, missed a couple prayers and its shivveled into its worst

raw, cold and empty. point of no return. its time to be an adult and learn that life's road has bumps everywhere u go.

gotta wake up and read the signs, before its too late and my turn's up to die.
cos right now, im heading to a the soul frightening fire. danced with the devil, and now the music's gone.

just fire in my eyes and sadness at what i've become. a shadow in the light, forced to walk only at night. hide in the day from evil prying eyes. the red fire burns inside. sweating up to my ears, tears flood at my neck. tryna work out how i ended up at this place of no return. one way ticket to toture and pain, got lost in the game now i gotta pay. had my fun and got carried away. the darkness is all i know. sorrow is all i see. hollow is all i've felt. now i got my one way ticket to the never-ending burning HELL. :skeleton:

PEACE XX

[Cabdullahi]

lol i see you have been influenced by immortal technique,i was the same but although he says alot of good things he contradicts himself sometimes especially after he did that playboy shoot

[Souljette]

:sl:
Nice poem but lol to the above post.

[Cabdullahi]

whats so funny??

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[Whatsthepoint]

is immortal a person?

[true believer]

lol i see you have been influenced by immortal technique,i was the same but although he says alot of good things he contradicts himself sometimes especially after he did that playboy shoot

yh true junior
i just like his titles cos they seem really catch 2 me

[true believer]

is immortal a person?

yh its IMMORTAL TECHIQUE
its some underground rap dude in america
he talks bout polical stuff in his songs and da gov etc