random poem

[Ummu Sufyaan]

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subhanallah, sometimes emotions stir in your heart that will tire you to perfect them into words...so i think this poem will sound random and complicated...i attempted one similar before...that one also didn't make much sense...

a blackened heart
a weakened soul
a susceptible being
rotten fruits on a silver plate

a slip
a sin
a mark
an impression
for satan, a win

a deviance from true reality, a lapse from eternity

a heart illuminated with guilt
tearful eyes, uncontrollable emotion
a river
raised palms
a pleading, desperate voice
received high above

[Caller الداعي]

wow dats brilliant mashallah!!!

[☆ღUmm Uthmanღ☆]

uve got a talent there sis, masha'Allah! *thumbs up*