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Sawdah
05-23-2010, 04:40 PM
Here's a poem I like. Very interesting, please read.


The Cold Within

By: James Patrick Kinney


Six humans trapped by circumstances,
in bleak and bitter cold.
Each one possessed a stick of wood,
or so the story told.

Their dying fire in need of logs,
the first man held his back,
for,of the faces around the fire,
he noticed one man black.

The next man looking across the way,
saw one not of his church,
and couldn’t bring himself
to give the fire his stick of birch.

The third one sat in tattered clothes
he gave his coat a hitch.
Why should his log be put to use,
to warm the idle rich?

The rich man just sat back
and thought of the wealth he had in store,
and how to keep what he had earned
from the lazy, shiftless poor.

The black man’s face bespoke revenge
as the fire passed from his sight,
for all he saw in his stick of wood,
was a chance to spite the white.

The last man of this forlorn group
did naught except for gain,
giving only to those who gave,
was how he played the game.

Their logs held tight in death’s still hand,
was proof of human sin.

They didn’t die from the cold without,
they died from the cold within.


Sources:
http://www.islamicpoem.com/?q=node/106
http://www.all-creatures.org/poetry/coldwithin.html
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-Elle-
06-03-2010, 01:47 AM
OH wow! That was a great poem! Wonderful! Jazak'Allah kheir for sharing!
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glo
06-03-2010, 10:04 PM
Nice poem. How much people could achieve if they could bring themselves to share with those who they don't consider to be 'their own'!

Strange to find it on an Islamic poem board though, as it makes references to a church.

Apparently the original was written by a guy called James Patrick Kinney.
http://www.all-creatures.org/poetry/coldwithin.html
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Sawdah
06-03-2010, 10:47 PM
Thanks for commenting everyone. =)

format_quote Originally Posted by glo
Nice poem. How much people could achieve if they could bring themselves to share with those who they don't consider to be 'their own'!

Strange to find it on an Islamic poem board though, as it makes references to a church.

Apparently the original was written by a guy called James Patrick Kinney.
http://www.all-creatures.org/poetry/coldwithin.html
Your right, unfortunately there are still people out there that won't accept the people for who they are...

Maybe they interpretated it as being of a different faith. I don't know. It's still a nice poem though nonetheless.

Thanks for the name glo. I'll be sure to add it and the link to the post. =)
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