07-23-2010, 08:12 AM
I am an amateur poetry writer,I dun dare calling myself a poetess-I dun think I really have a knack for that.So those of you who have kindly help me improve and esp with the rhythm(its so very difficult to grasp)So here's my first Offering:Reply
O God!My Merciful Lord!
Prevail Your love over Love of all,
And Your displeasure feared above,
Every mundane insecurity and juggernaut.
So I plea You not to let them interfere,
With my resolute heart
Leaving me to suffer,to fail,
In Your Sight,
Qualmish now,I ask You set me right!
My Lord!My Ever-forgiving God!
None but You know,
That with my Nafs I brawl to the best I can,
Day and Night
A mortally wounding fight
My God!My Benevolent Lord!
Help me!!Save my feeble soul,
Against the plots of my Nafs and Shaitan
Its too weak to fight them at its own
I don't want to be defeated and lose my Imaan
My dessicated eyes and anemic heart
Aren't competent enough to resist,they'll fall apart
If You leave me at my own devices
I am only to fail and oddly to deal successfully with the crisis
O Guardian!O Sustainer!
I've always found You there,
I've never witnessed You not responding to my prayers,
You stand by me in happiness and despair,
Yet you know,that when I prostrate
Its mainly due to weakness and fear
And not because of love or care
But I know You do as you're always there
So I beseech You O Compeller!!
As you've set an skeptic's happiness and serenity,
In his ignorance and crave for the material-all flam!
Put mine in acquiring Your pleasure
And vivify this heart's infarcted realm.
-Bintulislam July 2010
07-23-2010, 10:00 AM
It is very beautiful!
Maybe you can showcase your talent here http://www.islamicboard.com/creative-writing-art/
07-23-2010, 10:14 AM
thankyou :)But somehow I am unable to get access to that,may be becoz I am a limited member.Reply
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