FORBIDDEN DREAM(poem)

[peace_maker]

FORBIDDEN DREAM


Just looking at her makes me smile

I want to keep hugging her for a while

Her touch is so caring and warm

Her presence around makes me calm

But suddenly the pleasure began to fade

I called out but it was too late

I woke up with a gasp to see

Darkness surrounding me

Sadly I caved back into my old wooden bunk

My possesions are only three set of clothes locked in a broken trunk

It is very hot making it hard to breathe

We are packed so close, that my hair brushed my mate's feet

Once again thoughts began to fill my head

What else could happen if one hasn't been fed?

My wish to see my mother is a forbidden dream

Only I can hear my heart scream

The love of a mother is what I long for

Some ignorant fools, only with their mothers they pick a war

I have friends, infact many

All us orphans are like one family

One can replace any relationship to keep their lives stable

But a mother's position is not substitutable

Everytime I think about her

Makes me only weaker

I know I must be happy with what I have

But I don't think anyone should feel happy without their mother's love

I know my wish is nonsence

I can't help it, even if I want, I can't mantain abstinence

It is forbidden to ask for someone who can never return

But I believe everyone has the right to dream without any concern

Truly, having a mother gives you tranquility

We must utilize the opportunity

Although I know my dream will never come true

My forbidden dream shall always continue...



I need you people to tell me how it is. Comments, please.

[Riana17]

Salam Sis
Excellent work once again, Masha Allah
But is it personal to you? Inshallah your mom is okay

you remind me about this (if im not mistaken, a cute littel girl sing it):

She wakes up early in the morning with a smile
And she holds my head up high
Don't you ever let anybody put you down
Cos you are my little angel

Then she makes something warm for me to drink
Cos it's cold out there, she thinks
Then she walks me to school, Yes I aint no fool
I just think my Mom is amazing

She makes me feel
Like I can do anything
and when she's with me
there's no where else, I'd rather be…


After School, she's waiting by the gate
I'm so happy that I just can't wait
To get home to tell her how my day went
And eat the yummy food, only my Mom makes


Then I wind her up cos I don't wanna bath
And we run around the house with a laugh
No matter what I say, she gets her way
I think my Mom is amazing


Then I wake up in the morning, she's not there
And I realize she never was
And I'm still here in this lonely orphanage
With so many just like me


And as my dreams begin to fade
I try hard to look forward to my day
But there's a pain in my heart that's a craving
How I wish I had a Mom that's amazing
Would be amazing

[Souljette]

Asalamualaykum
Mashallah amazing poem

[Haya emaan]

MASHALLAH! nice poem.. may Allah(SWT) shower his mercy on our mothers..

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[peace_maker]

Salam Sis
But is it personal to you?

Walaikum Salam
It's nothing personal to me. Alhamdulillah, Allah has blessed me with mom, dad, four siblings and numerous relatives. Alhamdulillah.

The poem is from a view of a boy. He only had his mom in this world, and later even she died. So, basically, it's an orphan's story.
Did I mention, it's fictious?

you remind me about this (if im not mistaken, a cute littel girl sing it):

Mashaallah, that was sweet. :wub:
Did you make it?

[peace_maker]

MASHALLAH! nice poem.. may Allah(SWT) shower his mercy on our mothers..

:) Aameen :)

[Riana17]

Walaikum Salam
It's nothing personal to me. Alhamdulillah, Allah has blessed me with mom, dad, four siblings and numerous relatives. Alhamdulillah.

The poem is from a view of a boy. He only had his mom in this world, and later even she died. So, basically, it's an orphan's story.
Did I mention, it's fictious?


Mashaallah, that was sweet. :wub:
Did you make it?

Looooool sis you are so funny I like you hahaha!!!
How could you think I can make such?? Oh I am only gifted in EATING loool

alhamdollelah , i dont have special skills like you but I have an open mind (Allah blessed me with so much), that's more than enough for me

Alhamdollelah rabil alameen, for a while I worry It was personal to you, coz you wrote it with feelings, nice one really, i hope people in such situation can read your beautiful poems.

Since I become Muslim, I appreciate and love my mom more than before, altho I hadnt had the chance to have this mother & daughter bonding, my love and care for her is never been this better, alhamdollelah, may Allah guide her to the right path, it's my daily duaa, I HOPE YA RABB!!! She accepts Islam before she leave this earth,,, inshallah

[peace_maker]

Looooool sis you are so funny I like you hahaha!!!
How could you think I can make such?? Oh I am only gifted in EATING loool

LOL ;D So you're foodie?

alhamdollelah , i dont have special skills like you but I have an open mind (Allah blessed me with so much), that's more than enough for me

Mashaallah. I'm guessing that's what led you to Islam?

Since I become Muslim, I appreciate and love my mom more than before, altho I hadnt had the chance to have this mother & daughter bonding, my love and care for her is never been this better, alhamdollelah, may Allah guide her to the right path, it's my daily duaa, I HOPE YA RABB!!! She accepts Islam before she leave this earth,,, inshallah

Aameen. Inshaallah, Allah will guide her to right path. :)

[Riana17]

Salam sis, you can say that, loool but my BMI is normal, husband is wondering where i am keeping the food lol

INSHALLAH my mom will be a true Muslim before Allah takes her soul, inshallah all our mom will be in Jannah

[peace_maker]

Salam sis, you can say that, loool but my BMI is normal, husband is wondering where i am keeping the food lol

Yeah, I get that a lot too, from all the elders in the house. Guess, it's pretty common. :hmm:

INSHALLAH my mom will be a true Muslim before Allah takes her soul, inshallah all our mom will be in Jannah

:amin:

[Riana17]

Yeah, I get that a lot too, from all the elders in the house. Guess, it's pretty common. :hmm:


:amin:

Yah I guess when we are young our metabolism is good, and so we can take advantage of it
LOOOOL

[Mashura]

Allaahu Akbar! Being a mother that really touched my heart. I could just imagine my son saying that. Although he is just 6. SubhanAllaaah... very touching!!!

[LifeIsAHighway]

FORBIDDEN DREAM


Just looking at her makes me smile

I want to keep hugging her for a while

Her touch is so caring and warm

Her presence around makes me calm

But suddenly the pleasure began to fade

I called out but it was too late

I woke up with a gasp to see

Darkness surrounding me

Sadly I caved back into my old wooden bunk

My possesions are only three set of clothes locked in a broken trunk

It is very hot making it hard to breathe

We are packed so close, that my hair brushed my mate's feet

Once again thoughts began to fill my head

What else could happen if one hasn't been fed?

My wish to see my mother is a forbidden dream

Only I can hear my heart scream

The love of a mother is what I long for

Some ignorant fools, only with their mothers they pick a war

I have friends, infact many

All us orphans are like one family

One can replace any relationship to keep their lives stable

But a mother's position is not substitutable

Everytime I think about her

Makes me only weaker

I know I must be happy with what I have

But I don't think anyone should feel happy without their mother's love

I know my wish is nonsence

I can't help it, even if I want, I can't mantain abstinence

It is forbidden to ask for someone who can never return

But I believe everyone has the right to dream without any concern

Truly, having a mother gives you tranquility

We must utilize the opportunity

Although I know my dream will never come true

My forbidden dream shall always continue...



I need you people to tell me how it is. Comments, please.

:salam:

Reminds me of the song "My Mum Is Amazing" by Nadira Ali..

​Beautifully written MASHALLAH...

[LifeIsAHighway]

Salam Sis
Excellent work once again, Masha Allah
But is it personal to you? Inshallah your mom is okay

you remind me about this (if im not mistaken, a cute littel girl sing it):

She wakes up early in the morning with a smile
And she holds my head up high
Don't you ever let anybody put you down
Cos you are my little angel

Then she makes something warm for me to drink
Cos it's cold out there, she thinks
Then she walks me to school, Yes I aint no fool
I just think my Mom is amazing

She makes me feel
Like I can do anything
and when she's with me
there's no where else, I'd rather be…


After School, she's waiting by the gate
I'm so happy that I just can't wait
To get home to tell her how my day went
And eat the yummy food, only my Mom makes


Then I wind her up cos I don't wanna bath
And we run around the house with a laugh
No matter what I say, she gets her way
I think my Mom is amazing


Then I wake up in the morning, she's not there
And I realize she never was
And I'm still here in this lonely orphanage
With so many just like me


And as my dreams begin to fade
I try hard to look forward to my day
But there's a pain in my heart that's a craving
How I wish I had a Mom that's amazing
Would be amazing

Yeah that's by Nadira Ali "My Mum Is Amazing".. Seee...! :)