VERY OLD love poem.....

[Mustafa16]

that I wrote on July 13, 2015, according to my computer...

tell me what you think...

Shall I entrust you with my heart and key
As your eyes do, promise, solace and warmth
Or will you let me down and let me be
As your lips’ crease itself bring pleasure forth

Or shall I wait and wait with lover’s strength
Thy shining name bring forth a gushing stream
Your spark’ling name was life which grew in length
And stars lie outshined by lovely eyes that beamed

For I know I’d hold you in, rad’iant rose
Friend of early times who taught love to me
My sweet friend of whom I had rightly chose
Who I carry, in rad’iant sight, I see

I know you as my secret first, friend to bloom
You are a part of me in mem’ry room

[Huzaifah ibn Adam]

that I wrote on July 13, 2015, according to my computer...

tell me what you think...

Shall I entrust you with my heart and key
As your eyes do, promise, solace and warmth
Or will you let me down and let me be
As your lips’ crease itself bring pleasure forth

Or shall I wait and wait with lover’s strength
Thy shining name bring forth a gushing stream
Your spark’ling name was life which grew in length
And stars lie outshined by lovely eyes that beamed

For I know I’d hold you in, rad’iant rose
Friend of early times who taught love to me
My sweet friend of whom I had rightly chose
Who I carry, in rad’iant sight, I see

I know you as my secret first, friend to bloom
You are a part of me in mem’ry room

Take it easy, akhi...

No love poems till after you get married.

You write well, though.

But don't think on such things. No good in it.