YouR PaiN

[H4RUN]

:sl:
YouR SoRRoW, YouR PaiN,
WILL GO, BUT WILL COME AGAIN.

Oh brother/sister, I know it hurts.
Right now even breathing seems like a curse,
And waking up to life each day is even worse.
I know you’ve just about had enough,
Life’s journey has been real rough
But you’ve always remained so tough.

It seems this day will bring tomorrow,
But each minute deepens your sorrow,
I would lend you my happiness if it were to borrow.


There is so much to thank Allah for,
Yet right now to you the future seems unsure,
And this pain you feel seems to have no cure.

Oh brother/sister, I wish time treats you gently,
I hope fate has mercy,
And I pray Allah guides you tenderly.....

we have all lost a loved one some time or another, their mere pitstop in this duniya has finished, thier journey has continued. they have surpassed into a better place, inshallah...:w:

[786rani]

mashallah...jazakallah khairun brother. did u write it?
rani

[Samira_01]

Nice poem ..bro ...

It seems this day will bring tomorrow,
But each minute deepens your sorrow,
I would lend you my happiness if it were to borrow.

i like it alot ..Jazakallah!!

[H4RUN]

:sl:
unfortunately sis, nope i didn't write all of it, i saw it, read it. conquered it and pasted, oh and added the end and a few other words here and there...
:w:

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[x Maz x]

:'( MashAllah nice stuff akhi, JazakAllah for sharing Peace and blessings x

[Re.TiReD]

:sl: beautiful!! which are the words you added here and there...as you put it!! lol :happy:

[Muslim Soldier]

nice poem

[H4RUN]

:sl: beautiful!! which are the words you added here and there...as you put it!! lol :happy:

:sl:
shhhhhhhhhhhh u trying 2 blow my cover????? erm erm erm lol the title 4 starters lol, 1st couple of lines, and a few other words here and there (im not saying i totally changed everything or re wrote WHOLE passages lol) and erm 35 other words :okay: :smile: :p :thumbs_up
:w:

[Re.TiReD]

:sl: ooooopss!!! sorry, dint realise!! :giggling: its good anyway..and by the way...i'm lookin for the 35 other words!! ;D

lol actually...i think i've found them...we have all lost a loved one some time or another, their mere pitstop in this duniya has finished, thier journey has continued. they have surpassed into a better place, inshallah...

am i right??? :w: :sister:

[asma2]

well thought of brother thanks for ssharing it

[H4RUN]

:sl: ooooopss!!! sorry, dint realise!! :giggling: its good anyway..and by the way...i'm lookin for the 35 other words!! ;D

lol actually...i think i've found them...we have all lost a loved one some time or another, their mere pitstop in this duniya has finished, thier journey has continued. they have surpassed into a better place, inshallah...

am i right??? :w: :sister:

:sl:
you'll make a good explorer/archeologist....im not sayin anything else lol:X :okay:
:w:

[Kittygyal]

salam.
aw bless ta bro for sharing it, aww i know when it hurts i can feel it at the moment i am in pain! :'(
ta bro for sharing once again may god increase your knowledge and lead us on the right path.
didn't expect this from you cause your not in pain always bring the smile on people's face ;)
w.salam

[afriend2]

salaam,

mashAllah good poem! jazakAllah for sharing bro

wassalam :peace:

[Re.TiReD]

:sl:
you'll make a good explorer/archeologist....im not sayin anything else lol:X :okay:
:w:

hmmm....now there's an idea...i can just imagine maself goin up to my dad and tellin him i want to be an explorer!! :giggling: lol anyway i think we're going off topic so :w: :brother: and :sister:

[eylul]

It seems this day will bring tomorrow,
But each minute deepens your sorrow,
I would lend you my happiness if it were to borrow.

nice poem... maasallah brother...

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Oh brother/sister, I know it hurts.
Right now even breathing seems like a curse,
And waking up to life each day is even worse.

Mashaa Allaah..........that was nice.

[skhalid]

nice one...

[Have Faith]

Mashallah .. very beautifull poem ..
Jazakhallah qhayran for sharing akhi!

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[Souljette]

Mashalllahhh reallyyy nice poemm

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[Pen Marks]

mashallah really nice poem Akhy