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He lit me
Like a candle
And let me shine bright
When he left
I was out of light
I no longer could handle
Him not being there and
Not witnessing my smile…

He gave me wings
Like a butterfly
And let me fly high
When he left
My wings grew weak
I no longer could stand
His good-byes and
Not witnessing my smile...

He let me dream
Like a little girl
And live in this huge world
When he left
There were no more dreams
I no longer could see
Him taking care and
Not witnessing my last smile...​

Is this any good?
 
thts wicked ! excellent ! n true for maaaaaany ppl i shud say !

thnx for sharing :thumbs_up
 
Asalaamu alaikum,

Very beautifull, shukrahn for sharing.
 
ya_Giney said:
do you wright many poetry? i love to raed more if ya do!:happy:
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All of you make me feel so good about myself. That is why I love this place so much. You all are so awesome and respectful. I'm glad I got that history project because if I didn't, I probably would have never came here and met all you. I'll see if I have the ability to write you a poem. It will never measure up to how much I appreciate all of your wonderful comments and thoughtfulness, but thats all I got. lol

:) You all always find a way to brighten up my day even on the cloudest day of the week!
 
Jeness18 said:
All of you make me feel so good about myself. That is why I love this place so much. You all are so awesome and respectful. I'm glad I got that history project because if I didn't, I probably would have never came here and met all you. I'll see if I have the ability to write you a poem. It will never measure up to how much I appreciate all of your wonderful comments and thoughtfulness, but thats all I got. lol

:) You all always find a way to brighten up my day even on the cloudest day of the week!
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awwwwwwww! bless ya! we try our best!lol:happy:
 

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