Ameeratul Layl
10-25-2006, 04:16 PM
:salaam:
The day before Taraweehs were to finish, I had a sudden urge to put pen to paper. The words came and I wrote them down:
~~~~****~~~~
God is the Owner of the sun and moon,
He is the Owner of me and you
He owns the light
And He Owns the dark,
He Owns my life
He owns my heart,
When He Wants,
He will call for me,
But for now,
I hope He loves me,
His Messenger is not far from my heart,
But, he is when I stand in the dark,
I really hope to see you,
But aren't so sure when I will meet you,
So, for now I will stop
And wait for the call,
Because, when the time comes,
I will surely know!
~~~~~*****~~~~~
I agree, it isn't the best of poems...but I'm not a professional!:)
:w:
ReplyAl-Zaara
10-25-2006, 04:52 PM
:sl:
Awww sis, I loved your poem! :wub:
Mashallah, you got poetry in you! lol :D :D :D
Edit: AAARGGHH!! Can't rep you, I have to waaait... :'(
:w:
ReplyAmeeratul Layl
10-26-2006, 12:33 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Al-Zaara
:sl:
Awww sis, I loved your poem! :wub:
Mashallah, you got poetry in you! lol :D :D :D
Edit: AAARGGHH!! Can't rep you, I have to waaait... :'(
:w:
:sl:
Oh jazakAllah ukhti. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't worry about the rep, you have repped me enough. Now its my turn :D
:w:
Replyfatimah
10-26-2006, 12:52 PM
:sl: mashaallah very well writen sis.:w:
And i disagrie with this comet
(Quot)I agree, it isn't the best of poems...but I'm not a professional!
I think u write like a professional so mashaAllah to u.:awesome:
ReplyWelcome, Guest!
Hey there! Looks like you're enjoying the discussion, but you're not signed up for an account.
When you create an account, you can participate in the discussions and share your thoughts. You also get notifications, here and via email, whenever new posts are made. And you can like posts and make new friends.
Sign Up
Ameeratul Layl
10-26-2006, 01:05 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
fatimah
:sl: mashaallah very well writen sis.:w:
And i disagrie with this comet
(Quot)I agree, it isn't the best of poems...but I'm not a professional!
I think u write like a professional so mashaAllah to u.:awesome:
:sl:
Oh jazakAllah ukhti. :wub:
*I write like a professional?...maybe taraweehs should come more often :D *
:w:
p.s: JzakAllah to all for the reps. You know who you are.
ReplyAl-Zaara
10-26-2006, 02:06 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Ameeratul Layl
:sl:
Oh jazakAllah ukhti. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't worry about the rep, you have repped me enough. Now its my turn :D
:w:
LOL ;D I don't even remember who I have repped the last time.. I just like what I read and rep. lol :D
format_quote Originally Posted by
Ameeratul Layl
:sl:
Oh jazakAllah ukhti. :wub:
*I write like a professional?...maybe taraweehs should come more often :D *
:w:
p.s: JzakAllah to all for the reps. You know who you are.
Yes, maybe it should! :D
And sis, I just wondered, is this your first poem? :?
You sure must have had some practice... :uuh:
If you've got more poems, bring them on! :D
:w:
ReplyAmeeratul Layl
10-26-2006, 02:12 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Al-Zaara
And sis, I just wondered, is this your first poem? :?
:sl: I don't think it is my first, but I THINK it is the first (of my own) I have ever posted on Li. I usually posts stories!
format_quote Originally Posted by
Al-Zaara
If you've got more poems, bring them on! :D :w:
I have been thinking of one lately. It is not Islamic and it is not haraam either. Not sure if I'd be allowed to post it.
:w:
ReplyAl-Zaara
10-26-2006, 02:15 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Ameeratul Layl
And sis, I just wondered, is this your first poem? :?
:sl: I don't think it is my first, but I THINK it is the first (of my own) I have ever posted on Li.
I have been thinking of one lately.
It is not Islamic and it is not haraam either. Not sure if I'd be allowed to post it.
:w:[/quote]
LOL Sounds DANGEROUS... ;D Ask a admin if the poem is appropriate to post somewhere on LI. :)
But I don't think any other than Islamic poems are allowed in this section... :?
So maybe the General Section? Dunno. :hiding:
:w:
ReplyAmeeratul Layl
10-26-2006, 02:21 PM
format_quote Originally Posted by
Al-Zaara
LOL Sounds DANGEROUS... ;D Ask a admin if the poem is appropriate to post somewhere on LI. :)
But I don't think any other than Islamic poems are allowed in this section... :?
So maybe the General Section? Dunno. :hiding:
:w:
:sl:
I can assure you, it is not dangerous. The again, it depends on how you define 'dangerous'. :D
:w:
ReplyAzhar786
10-26-2006, 03:19 PM
salaam mashallah its nice!!!
ReplyAmeeratul Layl
10-29-2006, 10:21 AM
format_quote Originally Posted by
MusLiM 4 LiFe
awwwwwwwww datz so nice!
:sl:
JazakAllah sister. I am glad you enjoyed it!
:w:
ReplyHey there! Looks like you're enjoying the discussion, but you're not signed up for an account.
When you create an account, you can participate in the discussions and share your thoughts. You also get notifications, here and via email, whenever new posts are made. And you can like posts and make new friends.
Sign Up
Powered by vBulletin® Copyright © 2024 vBulletin Solutions, Inc. All rights reserved.