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IbnAbdulHakim
11-02-2006, 09:10 PM
I wrote this ages ago, but i jus realised that no-ones read it lol and ... well... :-\

this!


one day i got bored so i wrote this
only for my lord i wrote this
coz everytime i pray i think this
in a humble way i bow my head n i think this
out of fear of Allah i think this
out of Love n devotion i think this
sittin in this illusion called dunya i write this
before i get absent minded i write this
before the shaytaan whispers i write this

now listen carefully coz only love, hope u feel this,
4 Allah n rasullulah can help u reach high above, try 2 feel this
a place ur imagination cant comprehend, think bout this,
but jahannam is below so lets not pretend, dont deny this,
now where in the dunya can u experience this!
so no matta what try to avoid this!
and wallahi i pray that u get bliss!!!

AMEEN!!!
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Sum-Muslim-Gal
11-02-2006, 09:13 PM
:sl:

aaw mashaAllah bro thats really good!:D...the heading says it all..i like the way you end each sentence with the word'this' kinda sticks to ur head..:D..

cant rep gota spread 1st...:)

:w:
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Pk_#2
11-02-2006, 09:17 PM
AsalamuAlaykum :)

aww keep em cumin

mashaAllah really well written :D

tc
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The Ruler
11-02-2006, 09:20 PM
:sl:

masha'allah brother....a nice poem...why dont you try using metaphors...am sure you could start building a career by writing poems :happy: :thumbs_up

would have given you reps...but just gave you one on a diff post :-\

:w:
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TheRightPathI
11-02-2006, 09:26 PM
Salam, hey that was pretty good. Really cool poem.:wilted_ro
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Helena
11-05-2006, 12:29 AM
wow......

mashalah......it certainly woke me up.....

makes moi think.....about certain things in life....

cant rep u again....
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Nσσя'υℓ Jαииαн
11-05-2006, 12:42 AM
aww how nice. keep em comin =D
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Sadia25
11-05-2006, 01:07 AM
awwww how nice it is mashaallah!! write more poems!! inshaallah!!
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Umm Safiya
11-07-2006, 04:59 PM
:salamext:

How cute.. Hehe.. Jazak Allâhu khayr for sharing.. :thumbs_up
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amirah_87
11-07-2006, 05:03 PM
As Salaamu ALaykum,

Lol Akhee, It's Pretty Good MashaAllah!! :thumbs_up
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Kittygyal
11-07-2006, 05:42 PM
Assalamualikum warhmathullahi warbarakathuhu

aww bless subhnallah, it's fab keep more coming inshallah :)

do me a favour remember me in your Du3'ah!

walikumassalam warhmathullahi warbarakathuhu
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IbnAbdulHakim
11-07-2006, 07:10 PM
jazakAllah khair for all the nice comments.

All praise is 2 Allah

:salamext:
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Pk_#2
11-07-2006, 07:23 PM
barak Allah fik, now post sum more pwease! :)
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amatu
11-07-2006, 07:25 PM
aww mashallah that was great jazakallah for sharing
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IbnAbdulHakim
11-07-2006, 07:34 PM
i jus write it when im bored, and i dont get bored much :p
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Pk_#2
11-07-2006, 07:37 PM
InshaAllah soon den? nah jkes, when possible inshaAllah, dun hesitate to post sum more, if not atleast one more hehe

Tc AsalamuAlaykum!
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peacechaser
11-12-2006, 04:20 AM
:salamext:

Well i advise you to always get bored :D !! Kidding..

Even when you're bored you can make that so cool and beutiful poem Jazakallah... Keep going!!
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