Pre-Islamic Poetry lol

[Umar001]

I see hell fire infront of me
I dwell entire in sin like idolatry
And I desire to move away but you see
I aint no what path to take logically
Holy spirit aint moving me so I might make a mistake
Feel hell fire hot enough to bread bake, my head ache
Cos I fret on what choice to make
Until I depart Ima never be rippert apart
a part of a bright spark is instialled so for I fold
I'll continue to be bold rip like a double edged sword
Hear the word for I aint speak of my own accord
disown gold but keep hope, fall face first like the pope
pray that god might provoke change
his might be so imense its strange
Materialistic possesion will perish
Idealistic progression I will cheris


So many paths to take only one be right other negate
My mindstate nearly disintagrate guess fait offered me this plate
wait, still confused why so many religions but only one true
Was a protesting protestant a Martin luther guy
But they not protecticting whats relavent and changed thy-skripture
Why oh Why I cry over the trinity theory
Truthfully I cant see that clearly
See I sit back and merely reflect
G-d gave me an intelect
whats love without respect
Cos James said faith without deed is dead
So why belive without the intention to be
Christ like seen christians smoking a crack pipe
But I aint judge the religion by its belivers
Rather by what it teaches and features
From authentic scriptures
Got adoration for Jehova Witnesses' dedication
I seek elavation beyond temptation
designation into a nation ordained by the creator of creation...

I wrote this before I became Muslim, totally tells you my mindstate.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

WHOAH BRO THAT IS WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICKED!

mashaAllah, REEEPSSSSS.. oh wait i jus gave u one lol, well nex time inshaAllah :p

[Umar001]

mashallah glad you liked it, an insight into my mind that noone else has seen not even my family, feel privalaged :p

[MinAhlilHadeeth]

Wow, that's deep. You've got a talent mashaAllah.

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[Umar001]

This is another piece I wrote before Islam, though as you see in the second part I was leaning towards Islam in the end, enjoy,

Lead me st.Michael to death if you have to-
Coress my heart as I detest the dark this worlds so spite~full-
I grab a hand~tool cos this lands~cruel wish i could understand~you-
Among few to belive past the grief grasp the peace-
Grieve the last deceased memories of late infantries-
Help to comfort me confront heat and conform gs-
Dont condone condom torn families and controversial tragedies-
Be like commercial rivalry I strive you see my strife be a plight-
Turn the other cheek 'for I fight take flight when I grab the mic-
Waiting for resurection God is loving trust I felt the affection-
I wanna be rightgeous so I might just drop the dutchess-
And clutch less of the demon possest for I posses fitra in me nevertheless-
Believe me I seen thee for he in me though i been filthy i feel free
Cos of GOD mercy



I Was....
Taught the bible was your word and Jesus was your son
But as I grew old that seemed reiducolsly wrong
I mean inherited sin dont seem like a thing from a just God
I'm just lost like that sheep that strayed from the flock
Just as the Jews did to Jesus now Christians Mohamed they mock
See when Jesus came people said he was from the devil
Now with Mohamed we see the same story unrevelled
All I see is hippocracy so I keep careful
But i strive you see with a tear full eye
cos Many taken by satan mistaken with no guide
But you said 'Who ever God guides noone can misguide'
And whoever God misguides noone can guide'
So please God supply 'em with an open view
That they may see there be no J.C in you
And I've come to a conclusion that some be under Illusion
disillusioned still thinking I'm in the dark still sinning
But my heart still sinkin when I hear...

You should be able to see the changes I went through, from the first verse to the second. I hope.

[Asyur an-Nagi]

I see hell fire infront of me
I dwell entire in sin like idolatry
And I desire to move away but you see
I aint no what path to take logically
Holy spirit aint moving me so I might make a mistake
Feel hell fire hot enough to bread bake, my head ache
Cos I fret on what choice to make
Until I depart Ima never be rippert apart
a part of a bright spark is instialled so for I fold
I'll continue to be bold rip like a double edged sword
Hear the word for I aint speak of my own accord
disown gold but keep hope, fall face first like the pope
pray that god might provoke change
his might be so imense its strange
Materialistic possesion will perish
Idealistic progression I will cheris


So many paths to take only one be right other negate
My mindstate nearly disintagrate guess fait offered me this plate
wait, still confused why so many religions but only one true
Was a protesting protestant a Martin luther guy
But they not protecticting whats relavent and changed thy-skripture
Why oh Why I cry over the trinity theory
Truthfully I cant see that clearly
See I sit back and merely reflect
G-d gave me an intelect
whats love without respect
Cos James said faith without deed is dead
So why belive without the intention to be
Christ like seen christians smoking a crack pipe
But I aint judge the religion by its belivers
Rather by what it teaches and features
From authentic scriptures
Got adoration for Jehova Witnesses' dedication
I seek elavation beyond temptation
designation into a nation ordained by the creator of creation...

I wrote this before I became Muslim, totally tells you my mindstate.

why didn't ya make a book of such collections:p you are talented, bro!

[Pk_#2]

mashaAllah

[Souljette]

Mashalllalhhh the transition is prettyy obvious mashallah

[chacha_jalebi]

these are proper heavy bro :D

[Alim Apprentice]

MashAllah, thats beautiful.

[syilla]

owh...there is Asyur an-Nagi post.

Lets read al-fatihah for him InshaAllah. He has passed away while on duty on a helicopter accident :(

anyway bro al habeshi...wicked poem. long time no see akhee....

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:salamext:

Bro....I'm speechless. MashaaAllaah.... This is why people say that poets that have been through experiences write poetry better than people who haven't had those experiences.

Stay strong :)

[Souljette]

Truu say sis ^^^...and Innalillahi wa inailayhir raji'un for the brother who passed away :( May he rest in a better place Ameen