Continue the Islamic Rhyme

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:sl:

Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.

Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.

So then the person after that says:

Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink

And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.

[Umar001]

Tea For two
Two For You
You Love Me
Me Love You:lol:

Lol

Check Islamic Poetry, then look for some stuff called Pre Islamic Poetry theres my rap/street poetry :p

Here's a couple of lines:

I was a dirty dirty mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem
Musta been keen to be clean
Uttered the shahada, became a brother free from sin

[no1_outbider]

i cum from germany
trying to be hijjabi

this aint the place for trial&fame
maybe ya'll do it in forrest gate!

do try and get me off the hook
cuz this aint my brotherhood

watch you all im gona getcha
and know that im sachha (lol one who says the truth)

Yah you all might be tight
but know that this aint a fight

[no1_outbider]

I finally escaped from the rule and regulations of my LORD
Forget learning and teaching ABROAD

It didnt take a minute or TWO
in joining the worldy CRUE

So easily i indulged myself in so called minor SINS
Mostly consisting of music,tv and smoking 10 SLIMS

Never experiencing such amusment as TODAY
Banging music was deffinantly the cure of
last so islamicly fanatic dull DAYS.

Clock hit 3 in the MORNING
when people left half SNORING

Making me realise what i had been upto all night
and now it was home time

Sounds of music shut DOWN
messing me up and in sins DROWNED

And there i thought it was for freedom and peace,the SOURCE
Shame, that certaintly is in remebering your LORD

Yasmin beat that LOOOLL!!Nah man!!! :D

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[chacha_jalebi]

awwww heavy thread mujhahid kid :D:D:D lemme spit my lines :p

its like on a joypad A,A,B i batter all fake and all wannabeez :p
press pause u dont wanna start me
u cant categorise me in a category, im in a leaugue of my own
now gimme my crown n pass me my throne,
im a prosecutaa, eliminataa i take all manz lik dey minor, :p:p:p

lol back in d dayz :p every1 was a rapper :p :D:D:D

[no1_outbider]

BRAP BRAP Chacha_jelebi :D

What is it about the young youth
for they know the truth
yet run towards rotten old fruit
forgetting the real juice!!!!

[Mu'Min]

Lol

Check Islamic Poetry, then look for some stuff called Pre Islamic Poetry theres my rap/street poetry :p

Here's a couple of lines:

I was a dirty dirty mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem
Musta been keen to be clean
Uttered the shahada, became a brother free from sin

LOL! You got more... cuz from what I read you're the best!

[chacha_jalebi]

^^^^ hevyyy :p

da youth is lost, they think they kick back, chillin, they havin a larf
if dey dont fix up, they will be outkasts
they wana b slick and sleen, they wana b funny & popular lik mr bean
on that day, when there wont be a screen, Allah (swt) will ask them what they did for d deen :(

:D:D:D:p

[no1_outbider]

da youth is lost, they think they kick back, chillin, they havin a larf
if dey dont fix up, they will be outkasts
they wana b slick and sleen, they wana b funny & popular lik mr bean
on that day, when there wont be a screen, Allah (swt) will ask them what they did for d deen

Allah gave chances for them to say
the word written back on clay
also the quotes of our beloved
but they werent intrested
the Angels will come- Man Rabuk?
they have no answer, confused n stuk

[Umar001]

We should do word jugglin'

Its a 'game' where a person starts off with a couple of lines, and the person follows and has to rhyme that, also, for those more advance, you should try to 'multi' which means a rhyme within the line, examples:

I was a dirty Mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem

Thats a basic line, heres a Multi,

I 'pray-salah' and 'say-Allah' guide me~
The 'day-aint far' I wont 'stray-Nah!', proudly..~

Used to do this alot before Islaam, sure did increase my vocabulary.

[Mu'Min]

"I 'pray-salah' and 'say-Allah' guide me~
The 'day-aint far' I wont 'stray-Nah!', proudly..~"

Mine:
I strive to become a righteous Mu'minah
Pray to my Lord to make me like Rasulu'Allah
For my only goal is to reach Jannah

I hope this is right...

[Umar001]

Allah gave chances for them to say
the word written back on clay
also the quotes of our beloved
but they werent intrested
the Angels will come- Man Rabuk?
they have no answer, confused n stuk

Then bang, struck, by angels deaf and blind,~
Because they strut their adornments, 'front-and-behind'~ ;D
They 'want-to-rewind' to a time, back in the dunya~
So they can obey the way of Muhmmad, and have a beard and kunya~

'Waking, weeping' been dragged by chains,~
'Shaking, seeking' from Ar Rahman's Grace,~
Pace Picks up, disgraced they end up, in the depths of hell,~
Outa luck, face that time is up, into their abode they fell,~
As proclaimed, and named in Al Qariah,~
Their Mother, Ummuhu Hawiyah~

(peace be upon Muhammad)

[Yasmine018]

Man is my darling, my love and my pain,
My pleasure, my excitement, and my love again,
My wisdom, my courage, my power, my all,
Oh Man, do not come to me until I call.

In man is my life, and in man is my death,
He is hazard, my pride and my breath,
I sought him, I wrought him, I pant on his worth,
In him I experience indeterminate growth,

Oh Man, Man, of all my animal dearest,
Do not come till I call, though thou weariest first.

:shade: :shade: :shade: :shade: :shade:

[Yasmine018]

Shall I tell you the signs of a New Age coming?
It is a sound of drubbing ans sobbing
Of people crying, We are old, we are old
And the sun is going down and becoming cold

Oh sinful and sad and the lastof our kind
If we turn to God now do you think He will mind?
Then thry fall on their knees and begin to whine
That the state of Art itself presages decline
As if Art has anything or ever had
To do with civilization whether good or bad.

Art is wild as a cat and quite separate from civilazation
But that is another matter that is not now under consideration.
Oh these people are fools with their sighing and sinning
Why should Man be at an end? he is hardly beginning
This new Age will slip in under cover of their cries
And be upon them before they have opened their eyes.

Well, say geological time is a one-foot rule
Then Man's only been here about half an incj to play the fool
Or be wise if he like, as he often has been
Oh heavens how these crying people spoil the beautiful geological scene:coolious:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

some good stuff, im respectin bro Isa, keep it up akhee :)

and some of the stuff lol, lets maintain hayaa inshaAllah :thumbs_up


coz wivout hayaa we aint nothin
and no i aint bluffin
see those half dressed fakes out there
those that r supportin mr blair
coz THEY DONT CARE... about the akhiraah
THEY DONT CARE, about performin a single sajaadah
THEY DONT CARE, about Allaah ! subhana wata'ala !
Glory be to him our only creata
produca,directa and provida
SUSTAINA, so bow, n say Alhamdulillaah !

[Umar001]

coz wivout hayaa we aint nothin
and no i aint bluffin
see those half dressed fakes out there
those that r supportin mr blair
coz THEY DONT CARE... about the akhiraah
THEY DONT CARE, about performin a single sajaadah
THEY DONT CARE, about Allaah ! subhana wata'ala !
Glory be to him our only creata
produca,directa and provida
SUSTAINA, so bow, n say Alhamdulillaah !

Alhamdulilah, La Ilaha Illa Huwa ~
La Ilaha Ill Allah, what words could be purer?~
Light on the lips, heavy in the scales~
Angels with Tight grips, gonna take you to hell~
If you don't pray in humility get down on it, and testify~
That he inspired to His prophets, theres Noone worthy of worship but I~
Instead you making profit, on riba only to wither back to Him above the Sky~
Whislt we back to Him whilst still alive, attached with sin but still mad high~
Cos am strapped with mercy until the end of time~
That's cos He's merciful to those who bown down to Him only, right?!~

Peace be upon the prophets, and may Allah have mercy on us!
:happy: :happy:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

and may Allah have mercy on us!

may Allah have mercy on us
wiv him belongs our truss
weneva shaytan comes u jus gotta dust
b4 he fills u wiv dat lust
your heart he will rust,
layers upon layers till you bust !
so audhubillah is what we say
to keep that horned freak at bay
comin around and causin dismay
but our imaan shall remain firm till the very last day

inshaAllah we shall follow the prophets way

[Umar001]

may Allah have mercy on us
wiv him belongs our truss
weneva shaytan comes u jus gotta dust
b4 he fills u wiv dat lust
your heart he will rust,
layers upon layers till you bust !
so audhubillah is what we say
to keep that horned freak at bay
comin around and causin dismay
but our imaan shall remain firm till the very last day

inshaAllah we shall follow the prophets way

Till the last day, I pray, we guided the right way,~
The Siratal Mustaqeem, on the straight deen, 'Hey..!'~
'Have you ever seen, him who denys the blessings of Ar-Raheem, could you,~
Show me the way, to a brighter day, never guide me astray~
From the right'a way, lets fight'a elevate, the Kalima~
Best Ummah from mankind, we different callibre~
We The Majority of Jannah, With A Leader who Leads Prophets~
Our Priority is to Enter, that place we bright prospects~
Where every soul shall have what it desires, no backbiting, rude words or liers~
The population aspires to see it's Lord's face and admire~
A place of peace, security, ease, opportunity to speak with those of old~
Eesa, Nuh, Musa, Lut, Ibrahim, Idrees, Harun, Yacub, Sulaiman, Yahya, Zakariya, cant wait to see ya~
Aadam, Ishaaq, Shuaib, Dawud, hey can you? Wait to see the beaty of..~
Yusuf, Ismael, Hud, Salih, who'd think we'd get to see Muhammad, sadly, not all mankind will make it~
Those who hear and obey, provided they bear witness, pray,~
Do hajj, fast and pay zakat, wont be astray inshaAllah.


Am too tired to write more lol.

[seeker_of_ilm]

:sl:

A pirate I was meant to be,
Trim the sails and roam the sea.
We'll all avoid scurvy if we eat an orange..
erm...erm....what rhymes with orange...door hinge?

I give up imsad

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

harrr harrrr loooooooooool ;D

some one give this brother a medal for makin me laugh so much ;D

[chacha_jalebi]

home of the believers is jannah
truss me ova ders its much funna :p
inshallah we will all goo der one day
and Allah (swt) will put on the st8 way
so to work for jannah should be our duty
so we can see all its beauty

lol dat sounded chavish :p lol and inshallah no more rydem ryda stuff :p lets keep it islamic :D:D:D

[The Ruler]

i stand here tall and proud, above the ground
amongst all the descending crowd
they shriek and they speak (how do you spell shreik/shriek :?)
drives me crazy like a geek (:?)
yet i stand there strong
with ma veil all around
protecting and shielding
from their careless bangs of gongs :confused:

did i make any sense :?

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i stand here tall and proud, above the ground
amongst all the descending crowd
they shriek and they speak (how do you spell shreik/shriek :?)
drives me crazy like a geek (:?)
yet i stand there strong
with ma veil all around
protecting and shielding
from their careless bangs of gongs :confused:

did i make any sense :?

:w:

:salamext:

yup that was :thumbs_up

bangs of gongs or worse yet bombs
they be droppin not only in tombs
but at every new mothers wombs
not a single care for the booms
they release throughout the rooms
they wanna unleash such gloom
just makes me wanna grab my broom
and make them taste doom


i know broom was dry but meh, i dun it in 5 seconds lol

[Umar001]

Anyhow,

"and make them taste doom"

Zoom, the life of the dunya is but a flash,
Most dash for cash and grasp it fast,
Only to die empty handed back to dust,
Some trust in He who lives Eternally,
Others percieve themselves to be the opitamy of diety,
But can they make the sun rise from the west?
Can they bring to life a human from the deathbed which in he rest?
Can they possibly show Mercy to the quantity of Ar Raheem?

NO!!!

So I disown gold, keep hope and fear
Hope for mercy and fear that I wont be near
To see His face in a place of peace
To be disgraced suffering never at ease
Man Please! give me a break,
shaytan scheming and plotting willing to take
Any and every son and daughter of Adam,
with the inticing voice he fires at them
So becareful, steady steps should do it
dont be mistaken by satan only to be left screaming '**** I KNEW IT!'

[Re.TiReD]

:sl: so what are these lines supposed to be about...?


here I go anyway...

We know we’re gonna go
But we choose to ignore
Only waking up
When the angel’s at the door

When you’re six feet under,
With the earth blown asunder,
Every mistake every blunder
Will attack you like thunder

I guess you no wot its bout....:w:

[Mr. Baldy]

This is a little something something we call freestlye...

God save the deen,
From puppet regimes,
Ya Allah, Ya Hakim,
For Rahman, the Reheem,
From the day I woke in my mother’s womb,
To the day I lie cold in my tomb,
Islam runs in my blood to my soul,
Down to the earth to my brothers bones,
And they say blood is thicker than water,
Well my blood is Islam positive,
Every Muslim brother, sister, son and daughter,
And like mystic Zam Zam my blood flows through each of your souls,
And if they spill a Muslims blood, they spill mine,
So, with my next breath I bring apocalyptic forces,
To breathe life into Islam,
And with the next death, lives unprotected by UN knights,
On peace keeping missions to the Middle East,
Bending over to Shaythaan form there knees,
So with my hearts next pulse I’ll bring a war of passion that’s gone rancid,
But still burns like the fires of hell against the devils forces, that wanna crush Islam,
So I pray,
God save the deen,
From puppet regimes,
Ya Allah, Ya Hakim,
For Rahman, the Reheem,
Its time to bring a poet to the masses,
Revolution from here to Damascus,
Time to bring poetical Islam with poetical warfare,
Raise an army of minds to instil raw fear,
Into mens souls, down to their core layer,
Resurrect deaf hearts and deaf ears,
Bring men to cry tears,
Time to offer them prayers,
To Allah to bring the Haq here,
And to rise the cries of a nation,
Against the lies of an administration,
Who take lives and spread there disease in my lands,
And incriminate me, my blood on there hands,
But that’s not there only tool, they attack in stealth,
Play you like a fool, while they amass there wealth,
Attacking you in there Friday Khutbah,
Puppet Imams take agendas and make Duah’s,
For the three blind mice, who control my lands,
Bruv speak my language, I don’t speak deceit,
Sold your soul to Johnny Cash, I hope you kept the receipt,
There Fearing for there moneys life,
From the oil farmers wife,
Brandishing a butchers knife,
So pray that,
God save the deen,
From puppet regimes,
Ya Allah, Ya Hakim,
For Rahman, the Reheem,

[IbnAbdulHakim]

thats :coolious: bro !

because we're all one nation
Al-Islam !
wiv kalimah as identification
we'll avoid jahannam
as the best of creation
in jannah :D

[no1_outbider]

Hay mate listen up this my place in jannah
for i listened to my lord allah
you disobeyed him so your at the hell of Jahannah
Since you decided to be 2pacs imitater!!

[Mr. Baldy]

You’re a diamond in a hijab,
An emerald in a jilbab,
Liberation scarved,
And mens preying eyes barred,
Your Muslimah,
your my sister,
sticking to quran and sunnah,
gotta make it to jannah,
gotta take me with ya...

i would love to finish this, but alas time is not on my side

[Re.TiReD]

:sl: :)

ur wastin yo time
with this rap and rhyme
we got ppz out there
but nobody cares
locked up, beat up
hancuffed, caged up
yo we gotta ease the opression
the misery and depression
destruction and corruption
of this kuffar system

I could go on but no time.....

[Re.TiReD]

:cry: :heated: imsad :hiding: :grumbling :offended:

the dead cry for justice in their lands
but our hearts are dead, unwilling to lend a hand

[IbnAbdulHakim]

its because they all wanna follow the trend
if the kuffar bend then with them they bend

Audhubillah :offended:

[Re.TiReD]

the trend that will lead straight to the fire
you gotta wake up or the result will be dire
you wanna follow the shaytaan, Astaghfirullah!
help those is need an 'll see the reward from Allah!

[IbnAbdulHakim]

reward from Allah? you mean Jannah !
if we strive then mayb we get there inshaAllah
as long as we keep straight and dont falter
to all the evil you just gotta say KALLAA !!!

[Re.TiReD]

lol thats funny bro
and there's one thing we should know
in helping others is a reward
Allah doesnt give to those who hoard
so open up your hearts and give to those
whose lives are filled with misery and blows

:) gotta go soon, but good stuff

[IbnAbdulHakim]

do what the rhyme above me shows
to enter palaces beneath which river flows
do it fillah so your imaan grows
do it for all your sisters and bros...

[Re.TiReD]

:sl:

...all the brothers and sisters living in misery
we gotta stop it, put an end to all the tyranny
we think we got it nice
but dont stop to realise
that we cant take these pleasures with us when we go
it'll only be our good deeds, nowt and nuffin more...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:sl:

they take bullets with a smile
while we're away by miles
their taking bombs by the tons
an all we can do is sit and moan...

[Re.TiReD]

:sl:

we're living lives full of peace and bliss
just sit and wonder, how did it come to this?
we... letting our lives go by
but leaving the rest of the world to cry
dont think you wont be asked on the Day
what you did for those in need and how you helped ease their way

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

only 9 people of thumud
were bad while the rest were good,
so a time will come when,
we'll end up just like them,
because this systems so messed,
and all we wanna do is rest...

[Re.TiReD]

...HOWEVA...
you gotta realise things are not foreva!
if you put the hard work in
and stop livin a life of sin
you may be of those
who Allah chose
to live in the time of Isa
dont be ungrateful, coz as Awlaki said
we're one lucky ummah!
all the hardships we face
will only help us pave
our path to Jannah
INSHA'ALLAH!

[IbnAbdulHakim]

InshaAllah, if we just opened our eyes
realised, ALlahs watchin from above the skies
despite our sins he sustains us
respite he gives and guides us
but do we love him like we should?
would you do more knowin that you could !

[Re.TiReD]

we need to do more, with the hereafter in mind
forget the kuffar ways, coz they'll only bind...
...your heart and soul in the ways of Iblis
remember Allah and your heart will find its peace
when you feel you cant go on and nobody sees to care...
you gotta pray to Allah coz He's always there
but when things go good
you forget who helped you when things were rough
you play your partwhen others find it tough
and you'll see the blessings from up above :)

[IbnAbdulHakim]

these words givin me a strong feeling
but how long will it last
i wanna help this ummah in its healing
but my heart keeps sealing
wiv all this fitnah subhanAllah
wiv all this how can i get to jannah..

[Re.TiReD]

when we're faced with troubles we moan and lament
but yo, you gotta grieve and repent
when seeing the troubles that are sent
to our brothers who are innoCENT!

[Mr. Baldy]

i was weaned on them hip hop streets,
with them hip hop beats,
now, hip hop meets islam,
greets it with open arms,
this is my way of dawah,
some say its a waste of time,
when they see me spit a rhyme,
say my dawah aint worth a dime

why dont we do a freestyle competiotn? split into teams? whos up for it?

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i only rhyme hoping to wake
those who treat islam like its fake
for gods sake
who gives much more then he takes
so stay strong and dont let yourself break

[Umar001]

i only rhyme hoping to wake
those who treat islam like its fake
for gods sake
who gives much more then he takes
so stay strong and dont let yourself break

But brake from cake high stakes state our fate
Dont wait 'for it'll be to late to escape
Take this moment dont postpone it till a later date
Allah be great my mate Allah be the highest companion
Above horizons 7 heavens see His hijab light of many colours
A fright for disbelievers a joy for many scholars
The day not long away
To be dealt the reward of the good and punishment of those astray

His hijab refering to Allah usin light on the time when the Prophet peace be upon him went up to Him

[Daffodil]

Salaams

here is something i wrote a while ago.

please do NOT COPY!

I'm like a reason for treason,
All cuz I didn’t please em,
Ull never hear me cry,
I never give up after the first time I try,
I’m out to win against the jinn,
Life without sin,
I’m ur neighbour, it don’t cost anything to smile,
His love lasts longer then the river Nile,
More valuable then a golden mile,
I stacked up and packed up cuz my life’s on trial,
Allow living in denial,
Time flies and every one dies,
There will come a time with truth will be victimised by lies,
Already ur parents have become spies in disguise,
And ur only ten,
Not even wise women or men,
Honesty and dignity step aside,
The Satan we abide,
Let sin take our pride,
Drink, sex and drugs on our mind,
Continue committing crime,
Disown ur parents,
Live life against the 10 commandments,
Snakes and crooks working for the government,
Brothers and sisters living under feuds,
Creating anger in ur moods,
Shed a crocodile tear,
God we longer fear,
Shed tears of blood,
Uve become a wanted thug,
Create pain, make ur prey insane,
Allow the weed to mess up ur membrane,
U aint no different ur the same,
Satanic mind frame, u think this’ll bring u fame,
Don’t worry,
One day we’ll all see how u used to be,
The Satan will applause ur cause,
Eternity in the seventh hell is ur destiny,
Don’t recollect Islam for weeks,
Ur future looks bleak,
Quran always speaks, calls out ur name,
But to u its only another mind playing game,
It brings u and ur peers shame,
Ur parents dnt know where u are cuz u so far,
U used to be their shining star,
Now uve left then with an inerasable scar,
Like a footprint in the tar,
Before u know it, the angel of death is here,
Too late to fill up with fear,
Or even shed a drop of tear,
Nothing u can do about it, its here,
Its crystal clear,
U just wanted the best,
U failed to realise life’s a test,
Behind u and in front of u is a big mess,
Ur mum and the rest weep at ur death,
The sharp claw snatches ur soul,
Drops it back into the ground from the pits of hell,
U scream, but no one can hear the sound,
No one can help u now,
Now’s ur chance to take a bow,
Show all the crowd how high u is now!

[Umar001]

I never knew daffodil could be so real,
Still I chill, spill then refill my mind,
With composed composition of greater admission,
Bear Shahada knowin Allah is far from a lier,
Picturing promises pertained within pages,
Of Mushafs passed through the ages,
Anyhow, Copy Rights in Islam?
Am not a copy cat but I understand!
Sister still stands that for peace in Afghanistan,
They should bring back the taliban,

[Re.TiReD]

i was weaned on them hip hop streets,
with them hip hop beats,
now, hip hop meets islam,
greets it with open arms,
this is my way of dawah,
some say its a waste of time,
when they see me spit a rhyme,
say my dawah aint worth a dime

why dont we do a freestyle competiotn? split into teams? whos up for it?

but whats the use of all the rhyme
if you not even gonna take the time
to act on your words bro
you can spit, you can write
but its only gonna show...
...when the orphan child aint crying no more
when the lil Palestinian girl doesnt have to witness all the gore
of murder and people dying
of broken hearts and families crying
whats the point of all the ryhme when you do it just for fun
I know you gotta spread Islam with each rising of the sun...BUT
dont you think it'd work better
if you took each and every letter
out onto the streets
combine it with hiphop beats
and show em what Islam teachs (had to make it ryme! :okay: )
theres no use if it's all under cover,
ther's no use if it dont tell no real story
you wanna make it worthwhile, dont censor all the gory
the details that the media cover
coz I aint no kaafir lover
you gotta show em what we're all about
you gotta shout it from the rooftops, yo you really gotta shout
if you wanna be spittin yo life story thats kewl
but these lines are a gift, yo they're a real tool
so use em, abuse em, just make sure you dont lose em...
lose em to the hip hop on these mad streets
Islam dont need hip hop
Islam juSt needs PEACE!

yeah am up for the comp :)

[Sabbir_1]

You call urself a poet
i dont feel it
its a waste of time writing it if has no meanig to it.
Your a fake
you might as well drown urself in the lake.

But my rhyme is deep
maybe weak
but im trying
without copying

this is to hard i give up
its hard to write a rhyme
it takes time
this i my rhyme.

[-Shakirah-]

Salaams

here is something i wrote a while ago.

please do NOT COPY!

I'm like a reason for treason,
All cuz I didn’t please em,
Ull never hear me cry,
I never give up after the first time I try,
I’m out to win against the jinn,
Life without sin,
I’m ur neighbour, it don’t cost anything to smile,
His love lasts longer then the river Nile,
More valuable then a golden mile,
I stacked up and packed up cuz my life’s on trial,
Allow living in denial,
Time flies and every one dies,
There will come a time with truth will be victimised by lies,
Already ur parents have become spies in disguise,
And ur only ten,
Not even wise women or men,
Honesty and dignity step aside,
The Satan we abide,
Let sin take our pride,
Drink, sex and drugs on our mind,
Continue committing crime,
Disown ur parents,
Live life against the 10 commandments,
Snakes and crooks working for the government,
Brothers and sisters living under feuds,
Creating anger in ur moods,
Shed a crocodile tear,
God we longer fear,
Shed tears of blood,
Uve become a wanted thug,
Create pain, make ur prey insane,
Allow the weed to mess up ur membrane,
U aint no different ur the same,
Satanic mind frame, u think this’ll bring u fame,
Don’t worry,
One day we’ll all see how u used to be,
The Satan will applause ur cause,
Eternity in the seventh hell is ur destiny,
Don’t recollect Islam for weeks,
Ur future looks bleak,
Quran always speaks, calls out ur name,
But to u its only another mind playing game,
It brings u and ur peers shame,
Ur parents dnt know where u are cuz u so far,
U used to be their shining star,
Now uve left then with an inerasable scar,
Like a footprint in the tar,
Before u know it, the angel of death is here,
Too late to fill up with fear,
Or even shed a drop of tear,
Nothing u can do about it, its here,
Its crystal clear,
U just wanted the best,
U failed to realise life’s a test,
Behind u and in front of u is a big mess,
Ur mum and the rest weep at ur death,
The sharp claw snatches ur soul,
Drops it back into the ground from the pits of hell,
U scream, but no one can hear the sound,
No one can help u now,
Now’s ur chance to take a bow,
Show all the crowd how high u is now!

wow! what a talent sis!

[Umar001]

I was going to say before,

I think a Topical Freestyle would be best,

Compatition could be to have two people who are online, and a third member to post a topic, then both the people have 10 minutes or what ever time limit to compose a x amount of lines on that topic alone, then people vote on which verse is better, there could be a voting structure too.

[jzcasejz]

^^ Sounds Good...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

ok let me know tomorrow when its on, tonight aint happening.

[SirDemonic]

You call urself a poet
i dont feel it
its a waste of time writing it if has no meanig to it.
Your a fake
you might as well drown urself in the lake.

But my rhyme is deep
maybe weak
but im trying
without copying

this is to hard i give up
its hard to write a rhyme
it takes time
this i my rhyme.

Your ryhme is deep? go swim in it :okay:

[Daffodil]

lol

[The Ruler]

:sl:

ermm...ok i do get the freestyle thingamajig...so ermm...should we start now...and err...can i use the poems i have already written and posted :?

:w:

[Umar001]

:sl:

ermm...ok i do get the freestyle thingamajig...so ermm...should we start now...and err...can i use the poems i have already written and posted :?

:w:

It wouldn't be freestyle if you did lol. The aim of freestyle is to put something together on the spot.

------------------------------------------------

Ok, is anyone online now that wants to do a verse, two people, when they both reply I will state a topic and then you both need to have your verses of lets say 10 lines within 5 minutes of the post of my topic.

[Sabbir_1]

someone post a freestyle, so we'll all kow how its supposed to be, some will get confused and think its same as poem..

..Whos gonna start off...

[H4RUN]

:sl: again i think i'll swiftly leave this thread:p leave it to the pro's....run along Haroon :p
:w:

[The Ruler]

:sl:

its more than five minutes i know...but hey

can i be among the candidates :?

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

and it gets deeper
at times i feel like taking a leaper
but shaytaan comes like a seaper
seaping inside destroyin me like a reaper
i dont roll up hate you n your rizzler
know your waste but im a bit busier
strivin for haq inshaAllah gettin happier
recitin the quran straight 2 ur ear

i dont really kno how to freestyle
movin my fingers faster then miles
i dont care i wanna give dawah
thats the road to the power
so dont be sour brother
understand that with ibadah you'll get further
stop slippin cuziiin, make a move before i start dissin cuziiin,
need to realise that this aint nothiiin !



assalamu alaikum, mods may edit if they feel its necessary inshaAllah

[The Ruler]

:sl:

so erm...whats the topic?...would you give a topic bro mazed so maybe we'd start?

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

and i notice that you been slacking
with your boyz round da corner nuckles cracking
im sry to say you need a real smacking
at least this way u wake up to one thing

if u gota mother
get bak home n tell her you love her
giv her a hug, giv her a kiss
let her kno shes the one you miss

coz bro, thats wat matta'z you kno
end of the day to Allah we go
so spend your days the right way
forget the fightin that is the shyte way

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i dunno, if they mean freestyle then thats what im doing right now. If they mean diss each other (MC battle) then its unislamic lol

[The Ruler]

i dunno, if they mean freestyle then thats what im doing right now. If they mean diss each other (MC battle) then its unislamic lol

:sl:

not exactly diss each other...as in someone says a topic and mentions a certain amount of lines and allocates certain time...and two people post their own 'freestylr writing' and the one who set the thing chooses the winner...its not really what you would call 'diss each other' :)

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

lol k, mayb 2moro, 2nites jummah night inshaAllah.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

jazakAllahu khairan ukhtee :)

[England]

Scribble, scribble on my face,
Who will win the 2nd race? :shade:


That's one I made up when I was about 7. I thought it was good at the time. It doesn't wear off :)

[jzcasejz]

Any1 Know Why Mujahid_Kid's Account's Disabled?

[The Ruler]

:sl:

anyone up for the 'freestyle' competition :?

:w:

[SirDemonic]

:sl:

anyone up for the 'freestyle' competition :?

:w:

I am :D ill give it my best u start ill finish LOLLLL :okay:

[The Ruler]

I am :D ill give it my best u start ill finish LOLLLL :okay:

:sl:

i cannot decide on a topic for myself since if i do, id obviously choose one that i can write better about...thus it wouldnt be fair...if there is another competitor, you and that other person may write...i can give the topic and the certain amunt of lines that you must write...

:w:

[SirDemonic]

:sl:

i cannot decide on a topic for myself since if i do, id obviously choose one that i can write better about...thus it wouldnt be fair...if there is another competitor, you and that other person may write...i can give the topic and the certain amunt of lines that you must write...

:w:

Atcha... no rules ok :D

u start.... ;D

[The Ruler]

Atcha... no rules ok :D

u start.... ;D

*sigh*

here goes mine...

a seed planted deep in my mothers womb
i was there, a lifeless piece
until i was breathed upon...
my roots and stem beginning to grow
i felt them...they would grow strong and healthy....oneday

my brain isnt working properly sorry....last day of school...so yeah :uhwhat

:w:

[SirDemonic]

*sigh*

here goes mine...

a seed planted deep in my mothers womb
i was there, a lifeless piece
until i was breathed upon...
my roots and stem beginning to grow
i felt them...they would grow strong and healthy....oneday

my brain isnt working properly sorry....last day of school...so yeah :uhwhat

:w:

Nice here goes mine, Ahem Ahem.....

U where a seed i was a baby We both got blessd by lord above
Now we breathe the air that was sent from above,
Ur roots grow longer mine grow thicker
not left longer till we..... :grumbling

:okay:

[H4RUN]

u talk about a root, hek was i the juvenile shoot?
growin up seein wat i see, saying wat must be said
i see my so calld brothers at the time of congregation jus chillin playin all dead
life's short, a test no less
jus a matta of who worships n tries there bes'...

[i really should give up:p]

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ ye bro its like watchin a disease
spreadin through both ma friendz n enemies
so ma bruvaz please stop sippin on dem keyz
u cant take nothin wiv all u can take iz ur deedz !

[The Ruler]

:sl:

it certainly is amazing
the metamorphosis of a being
from an innocent angel of brilliance
to the darkest of devils
why is it that this takes place?
is it what we do?
or is it what we were destined?

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

aint we suppose to be rhyming? lol

u did it again you've mentioned that devil
stupidest creature against Allaah he rebelled
his pride surfaced jus coz he was told to bow
banu israel went thru a mission for a cow
its coz they denied our rasool
ye they acted the fool!
so before you move n make a decision
recognize that rasool makes the intercession !

[The Ruler]

aint we suppose to be rhyming? lol

:sl:

are we :uuh:...but i dont like rhymes :-\

nw dat ya kno..take heed
kik em out...de greed
wt u gotta v is piety
ya cuz das gonna make jannati
its al dat counts...n its al das wrth
so liv ya lyf n b sfe from de wrath...(oops dont rhyme...ma bad :D)

:w:

[SirDemonic]

u talk about a root, hek was i the juvenile shoot?
growin up seein wat i see, saying wat must be said
i see my so calld brothers at the time of congregation jus chillin playin all dead
life's short, a test no less
jus a matta of who worships n tries there bes'...

[i really should give up:p]

You grew up seeing what u saw I grew up feeling what i felt
You see your brother asking for forgivness while their withholding their happiness and a place in heaven
Dont we all know its a test yet we dont put enough to pass the Dajjals nest
Life's long if u fulfill the test Life's short if you fall in the nest
We worship one god only so morally, mentally, physically we inshallah will pass the heavenly gates to a place in heaven..

:okay:

[Snowflake]

I'm too old for rappin
I prefer to be nappin! ;D
life flies like a rocket
then u kick the bucket
don't live like a muppet!
stick ur finga in the socket!
get a buzz from religion
don't act like a pigeon
closin ur eyes to reality
to the devil's mastery
following in hot persuit
give him the boot!
he's pushing you to Hell
dat where u wanna dwell?
God made us for Jannah
We da Prophet's Ummah!
So listen to your Lord
act upon His Word
cuz if your misbehave
you'll stink in ur grave!

whao this rappin is fun! :giggling:

[Sabbir_1]

lol.. that was gd sis..

[H4RUN]

:sl:
theres no easy way out
theres aint no short cut home
home sweet home is when we've reached jannah
just gotta live life and prepare for the akhira
my homies liv life as though ur a travella
if something's worth fightin' for
guide the hearts which are sore
spread your deen to the instigator
show him the way, show him the light
last week, yesterday, today, and it could be your last night.
it's a rough road, smooth it wern't eva neva mean to be
get together my ummah, help the fam-i-lee
as u can see i aint no rappa
aint no freestyla
aint neva gonna be one
this chapter is over and done
:uuh: :playing:
ma'salama
:w:

[Sabbir_1]

''theres no easy way out
theres aint no short cut home''

Aint that from rocky soundtrack, no easy way out...how,long does it take for you guys to write these rhymes.. do u write it on paper before you type it up...

[Snowflake]

lol.. that was gd sis..

hehe tnx!

[Mr. Baldy]

but whats the use of all the rhyme
if you not even gonna take the time
to act on your words bro
you can spit, you can write
but its only gonna show...
...when the orphan child aint crying no more
when the lil Palestinian girl doesnt have to witness all the gore
of murder and people dying
of broken hearts and families crying
whats the point of all the ryhme when you do it just for fun
I know you gotta spread Islam with each rising of the sun...BUT
dont you think it'd work better
if you took each and every letter
out onto the streets
combine it with hiphop beats
and show em what Islam teachs (had to make it ryme! :okay: )
theres no use if it's all under cover,
ther's no use if it dont tell no real story
you wanna make it worthwhile, dont censor all the gory
the details that the media cover
coz I aint no kaafir lover
you gotta show em what we're all about
you gotta shout it from the rooftops, yo you really gotta shout
if you wanna be spittin yo life story thats kewl
but these lines are a gift, yo they're a real tool
so use em, abuse em, just make sure you dont lose em...
lose em to the hip hop on these mad streets
Islam dont need hip hop
Islam juSt needs PEACE!

yeah am up for the comp :)

ok, lay down some rules... lets say 16 lines?

[Re.TiReD]

u didnt write that, u probably copied it off someone.. no way.. not saying u stupid or anything...

lol if i knew how to neg rep I'd give you one now...I made that up on the spot...in response to the bro...if something makes you angry...or gets you going you have no trouble in puttin it into words or rhyme....:offended:

[Re.TiReD]

Assalamu3laykum

Kinda had an idea…slightly crazy but there you go :okay:

Here’s the deal...we drop lines bout one particular topic/subject and see how long we can last, make the worlds longest rap/rhyme sorta thing…you get me? Kinda like Bro Mazed and I were doin ages back

It’ll be sick; we can put it together at the end and walaa! Best piece of dawah work ever! Hehe… :giggling:

[Daffodil]

i used to love rap n used to rhyme my self but i gotta say, after reading this thread, rap has got to be the tackiest art form ever!!!!!

[Re.TiReD]

what makes you say that sis? :?

[Sabbir_1]

What going on
whers everyone gone
this thread is dead
everyone gone to bed

hmm cant think of anything else to say.. someone should give a topic to rap about and then someone should write about it.. e.g. jannah.. ok now someone write about it.. like a poem/ rap whatever u like.

[Umar001]

How about this form of jugglin words:

Im, Purposly Providing Provisions
So you can, Inevitably Invite me to make Inscions
Deadly Discions Desicevly Deletin you like Demolition
Rappin Repetition got me Reattractin your Revison
Causin Rapid Reactions like a Relative payin Ransom
Relativly handsom so I Run-some gun ran Random activities
Activly Activating Simplicity Cultivating Supremecy
while Aggravating Superiority of a Subliminal Authority
Athour be me who Authored an Authentic Article at Velocity
Virtuesly Vairyin in Variety of Valid Technicality
Validly Validates and Perpetually States Fait
No Debates Perpetrating Hate Swining Swords
At Foes Like Perpella Blades
Oh I'll Go Acapella Hey
Griviously Guided Guilitines
Maliciously Sever Intestine
Interesting Im Inconclusivly Manifesting
Intergalatical Spirits Exclusivly Molesting
Ears and Mindstates On Radio Airwaves
Cut Crime Rates Leave em without hands hey

[H4RUN]

:sl:
ma brother above is goooood!
keep it up
fiamanAllah
:w:

[Al_Imaan]

^^that really is nice...did u write it urself:?

[Umar001]

:sl:
ma brother above is goooood!
keep it up
fiamanAllah
:w:

Harun bring doom quicker than a delivery delivered real soon,
Stats enter in at 1,018 posts, 3449 reps,
I'd turn him into a ghost, in 3.79 secs,
Yet I use my force to enforce a fotress of old,
Where His dragon cant enter, i'll tear his jargon agenda,
And render his profile, nothin but letters formed by a senile in denile.

:p

[Umar001]

^^that really is nice...did u write it urself:?

Yes I'm a ghost writer who writes in a state of death alive like a martyr,
Parta' me is sucessfully wanting to be a bird green on a heavenly tree,
Yet I go on killing sprees with my artilery made of words,
As the opitamy of good versus evil in my own world,
Keep cold, feel old, peep as i reveal the real Lord,
The one who Istawa, over, His Throne,
In a way which befits His majesty, always remember there is none like He,
So when I state I did rake my mind and wrote the above lines will you believe me?

SubhanAllah the last too post are keystyles, cant believe how sharp my mind is mashaAllah. :p

[Al_Imaan]

^^lol....thats wat i call talent....wish I could do even half of that....i think im gonna add that in my 7 things thingamajig...:D

7)can't rhyme for life....:p

[H4RUN]

Harun bring doom quicker than a delivery delivered real soon,
Stats enter in at 1,018 posts, 3449 reps,
I'd turn him into a gost, in 3.79 secs,
Yet I use my force to enforce a fotress of old,
Where His dragon cant enter, i'll tear his jargon agenda,
And render his profile, nothin but letters formed by a senile in denile.

:p

:sl:
;D in the words of Chris Tucker in Rush hour..' Ima WOOOP yo ***' [posteria aka gluteus maximus]lol
Truly we have a linguistic magnifiiiigue on Li
:w:

[Umar001]

^^lol....thats wat i call talent....wish I could do even half of that....i think im gonna add that in my 7 things thingamajig...:D

7)can't rhyme for life....:p

Dont wish for it, its not very beneficial trust me! Its more of a bad temption than anything!!

[Umar001]

:sl:
;D in the words of Chris Tucker in Rush hour..' Ima WOOOP yo ***' [posteria aka gluteus maximus]lol
Truly we have a linguistic magnigiiiigue on Li
:w:

compared to days of old it took my rusty old mind a whle to think of that! but yes Harun,
I'll bring doom to you real soon if you dont cease and inciate peace treaties!

[Sabbir_1]

Dont wish for it, its not very beneficial trust me! Its more of a bad temption than anything!!

How do you write like that man, you got talent.. man use it..write islamic poetry and stuff...

[Al_Imaan]

Yes I'm a ghost writer who writes in a state of death alive like a martyr,
Parta' me is sucessfully wanting to be a bird green on a heavenly tree,
Yet I go on killing sprees with my artilery made of words,
As the opitamy of good versus evil in my own world,
Keep cold, feel old, peep as i reveal the real Lord,
The one who Istawa, over, His Throne,
In a way which befits His majesty, always remember there is none like He,
So when I state I did rake my mind and wrote the above lines will you believe me?

^^that rite there...is words of art....that is ill....like bro khalil said....use it for like islamic poetry.....u can even publish a book...

"100 Top Ill Islamic Poems" .....
By. Al Habeshi....:D

[IbnAbdulHakim]

ye al-habeshi's rhymes get me all :eek: :eek: lol

[IbnAbdulHakim]

hmm...


how comes no-ones rhymin anymore! Al-Habeshi bring some more on!!


because there are certain rhymes
that make you think
it'll all be over by the next wink
so you kno u can eiva swim
or deep as hell you can sink :offended:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:sl:

I've not really freestyled before but i'll try my best
Try not to ignore the fact that life is a test
U don't realise but some things are for the best
Just keep ur deen strong, forget the rest

This world is nothing compared to the Hereafter
If u believe it is, u couldn't be dafter,
Don't u understand the purpose of life
The reason behind all these wars and strife?

Worshipping Allah the Almighty is before
You do anything else, this is the core
Belief for a Muslim to have in their hearts
From Islam, don't keep yourself apart....

:w:

P.S. What dyou think :?

i think you smacked it sis with a great message :D
this whole life is just a mere passage
that we all must go thru like travellers in a carriage
so brothers n sisters realise lifes not all about marriage :P


ok lol i kno that was weird but still mashaAllah sis your rhyme was good

[IbnAbdulHakim]

at times when u get bored
shaytaan comes as sharp as a sword
sikko wants to mislead u causin discord
but u kno ur protection is in Allahs words

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:sl:

...Marriage is still part of life they say
As long as you do it the right way
With the help of Allah Subhan Wa Taa'la
U do nothing wrong and you'll find a good partner

Just have your trust in Allah Almighty
Leave all your worries and Anxiety
Make a promise to yourself this day
You'll follow the teachings of Islam straightaway...

:w:

:sl:

mashaAllah my heart says your right
how can we deny this bright light
im talking about islam sublime in its plight
nothing else can make u reach greater heights..

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

^ sry im out of reps, but mashaAllah...

[Umar001]

The back is best, I mean the best is back,
An attitude grotesque but Id guess you'd expect that,
From iblees the 1 who feasts on evil feats,
Pleading please give me respite that I might miguide the least,
Of mankind who sway away from the righta way,
Hey, I pray autho Billahi minash shaytanir rajeem,
I been cleen since utterin that noone is rightfully worhiped but Him.

Know what I mean?

[AHMED_GUREY]

i like this one

u think ure cool
ure so fool
ure so bad
u end up sad
i get my knife
and end ure life

:D :D :D :D :D

[Umar001]

:sl:

...I know what u mean but don't put me down
I'm just a beginner trying ma best not to frown
Yes the Shaytaan, known as Iblees
Trying to fight him to get some peace...

:w:

Read Surah Ar Radd, Ayah 28 then contemplate with ease,
It thus states that in rememberance of Allah do hearts find peace,
We all begginers belonging to the best ummah,
Longing for paradise on this day of jummuah,
Remember dont take leaps only baby steps,
Then take heed of the need for that which is correct,
Don't conceed to greed lest you disconnect,

From Ar Rahman's Rahma
Which Is What We Need For The HereAfter

[Ra`eesah]

Assalamu'Alaykum

How about this form of jugglin words:
Im, Purposly Providing ProvisionsSo you can, Inevitably Invite me to make InscionsDeadly Discions Desicevly Deletin you like DemolitionRappin Repetition got me Reattractin your Revison...

I got a headache reading that. I only read about 4 lines, not saying its bad its really good maasha`Allaah but it was justmind boggling.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

Al-Habeshi you are like the halal version of blakstone!!!!! LOL :D

mashaAllah broo!!


because halal is the way we been instructed
we want good deeds without it gettin deducted
by this dunya we'll never be seducted
wen we get to jannah inshaAllah we'll hav clamped it!!!
stamped it! our passport to jannah!
strivin 4 haq, believin in Allah
sadaqAllah, may Allah accept it
we wanna be winners may Allah protect it!!!!!!
ALLAHU AKBAR :D

[Umar001]

Al-Habeshi you are like the halal version of blakstone!!!!! LOL :D

mashaAllah broo!!


because halal is the way we been instructed
we want good deeds without it gettin deducted
by this dunya we'll never be seducted
wen we get to jannah inshaAllah we'll hav clamped it!!!
stamped it! our passport to jannah!
strivin 4 haq, believin in Allah
sadaqAllah, may Allah accept it
we wanna be winners may Allah protect it!!!!!!
ALLAHU AKBAR :D

And protect our souls,
Till He resurect us all,
Keep me a fan of emaan and a man not sold,
To the discord of the bold of old,
Free from his plan at hand to disrupt man,
I read nuniyah an inspiration to write poetry,
Dedication to poetically potray the destination of the pious.

[Kyubi]

Old nursery ryhme, and yes with the right beat it could just be a rap song...

Simple Simon met a pieman,
Going to the fair;
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Let me taste your ware."
Says the pieman to Simple Simon,
"Show me first your penny,"
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Indeed, I have not any."
Simple Simon went a-fishing
For to catch a whale;
All the water he could find
Was in his mother's pail!

[IbnAbdulHakim]

Old nursery ryhme, and yes with the right beat it could just be a rap song...

Simple Simon met a pieman,
Going to the fair;
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Let me taste your ware."
Says the pieman to Simple Simon,
"Show me first your penny,"
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Indeed, I have not any."
Simple Simon went a-fishing
For to catch a whale;
All the water he could find
Was in his mother's pail!

but oh wait the story hasnt finished yet
a beautiful muslim simple simon met
he told him to look around and take a glance
could all this have come out by chance?
isnt it foolish to worship a partner
besides the one whos likeness can be matched by no other
simple simon thought and said oh yes
a muslim i'll be today god blessh :D

[IbnAbdulHakim]

Halal Fun
Is No Fun
When This Thread
Goes completely Dead

:rant:

[Re.TiReD]

heheh ^^

:sl: I've soo lost the knack of this freestylin' bussiness,,used to post loads before but now....:blind:

ok...

I may not be Palestinian
but I aint sayin same for ma heart
coz it bled along with those
when wid der land they had to part

my sig...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

sis thats in ur sig so ur cheating
but i feel u wen u say their bleeding
while we sit here, dunya seeking
earning flabs, we sowing wat we reaping...

[Mawaddah]

^ You mean we're reaping what we're sowing right?

[Re.TiReD]

woah you can say that again bro
coz Iman is sinkin... itz never been so low
tears fall but we're too blind to see
the misery, destruction, lack of humanity
tear free to fall, down the cheek of a baby
seen by ignorant eyes, ppl ignorin the story...

(I'm not cheatin...still freestyle) : )

[Re.TiReD]

^ You mean we're reaping what we're sowing right?

lol I think the bro means that ..yeah :p

[Mawaddah]

sometimes it's not that we dont see
but it's just that we're too greedy
"So long as it aint happenin' to me"
Then we just flip channels on the TV
Watchin comedies and love movies
Whilst our brothers and sisters drown in their miseries...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ You mean we're reaping what we're sowing right?

yeah :hiding: (i had to make it rhyme!!!)

woah you can say that again bro
coz Iman is sinkin... itz never been so low
tears fall but we're too blind to see
the misery, destruction, lack of humanity
tear free to fall, down the cheek of a baby
seen by ignorant eyes, ppl ignorin the story...

you kno why that is, they want the glory
forget the zuhd, bring out the wahn,
forget the fard, do wat you can,
its this mentality bringin us down
this mentality taking us undergroun.. (to hell)

[IbnAbdulHakim]

sometimes it's not that we dont see
but it's just that we're too greedy
"So long as it aint happenin' to me"
Then we just flip channels on the TV
Watchin comedies and love movies
Whilst our brothers and sisters drown in their miseries...

mashaAllah, didnt know you had it in you.

:salamext:

[Re.TiReD]

you kno why that is, they want the glory
forget the zuhd, bring out the wahn,
forget the fard, do wat you can,
its this mentality bringin us down
this mentality taking us undergroun.. (to hell)

are you my brother or ma 'bruva' my sister or ma 'sistah'
you're livin this life, yo you wanna be a gangsta
think you can outdo the one and only Creator...:offended:

but the woman next door her pockets are empty
and her kids are going crazy coz they never been so hungry
but you dont think its your duty to help the poor and needy...:cry:

not you btw...just in reply to the mentality thing..

[IbnAbdulHakim]

one organ, i mean the central heart
if it goes black then the rest fall apart,
one nation, i mean poor palestine
its in pain, but do our hearts pine?
if one part is ill the whole body is achin
but look at our bros out there n all those excuses they makin...

[Re.TiReD]

woah!! you're good bro, Masha'Allah...dunno what to say to that..not nearly as good enough :omg:

erm....

I'm so tired man, of livin this life
the misery and destruction
the constant strife
tryna make my way but ppl attackin from behind
wanna hold fast to the rope
but gettin caught up in a bind

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ mashaAllah, and ur rhymes smasssshhhh it too sis mashaAllah.

forgive me for all this negativity
but i feel the need for some positivity
it makes it easier to appreciate Allahs sublimity
when you think bout his favours upon humanity
constantly, seein the mercy on our family,
so lets show Allah sum gratitude for our happiness :)

[Re.TiReD]

lol!! good idea bro
coz appreciation we're slow to show
we've been blessed with health and hapiness
but dont forget the plight of those below us
we can thank Allah for each rising of the sun
but what bout the damage soldiers may have done
that river of blood, flowin down the street
or the burnin sun that upon the orphans head does beat...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

once again i jus might
hav to say that your so right
so empty your wallets and dont let ur left hand know
and this time i say it coz we REAP WAT WE SOW
so on yawmal qiyamah our faces will GLOW
on that day when ALlah will show..... (Himself)
gettin now emotional i jus wnna bow... (to Allah..)

[Re.TiReD]

jzk bro
these rhymes really open my eyes yo
but now I really gotta go

lol so dry....:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

jzk bro
these rhymes really open my eyes yo
but now I really gotta go

lol so dry....:w:

uzkurni fi dua' ukum

fi aman Allah

:salamext:

[The Ruler]

:sl:

can we not do in unrhyming thingamajiggies :? :uhwhat

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:sl:

can we not do in unrhyming thingamajiggies :? :uhwhat

:w:

:salamext:

defeats the title of the thread but go ahead

lol even that rhymed :X

[The Ruler]

:sl:

i can see it,
deep shades of pink, orange and red.
at the horizon,
it tells a tale untold,
a tale about to unfold,
a tale of mystery,
an unfurling rose.

^ 1st stanza of the poem i wrote called destiny.

:w:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

audhubillah i think i was veiled,
from seein ur poem, i was hailed
in an audience of the shaytaan, audhubillah
may ALlah protect us from him, inshaAllah

but fi-sabillilah is how we shud be spendin our time
qiyamah is haq, the mountain of hasanah we need to climb!
ma sister its deep the way you rhyme,
its tru wat u say, to not see it is a crime...

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum.
^ subhanallah i love that one did you write it up ya self ?
ma'assalama

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum.
whoa subhnallah subhnallah! are you lot writing these up ya self or what?
ma'assalama

[Umar001]

salamualikum.
whoa subhnallah subhnallah! are you lot writing these up ya self or what?
ma'assalama

Wa aleykum salam,

and yep they do

[Kittygyal]

Wa aleykum salam,

and yep they do

salam.
akay kewl some good talents we have here
ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

To be a Muslim by name, oh please,
Can't u see by doing this ur giving Shaytaan ease...?!

:wasalamex

subhanAllah what can i say,
powerful words n thoughts, my knees give way
but wat can i do, ma imaan will sway!
i kno its a weak excuse im not here 2 play...

THOSE LYRICS ...> SUBHANALLAH :uuh:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

underachievers, isnt dat wat we all are?
all we wanna do these days is spar.
like u say wannabe gangstarr
always wanna ride the new ride all wannabe starrrs...

but subhanALlah we need to look deeper
dunya;s nothing, akhira's a keeper
we all suppose to be unique weavers
weavin out deeds to the highest level of jannah!!

inshaALlah...

:salamext:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

comprend this, u kno u'll stand
Before Allah, deeds at hand
deeds? no i mean sins by the strand!
hundreds no thousands do we even understand?

barefoot and naked, shaken we'll be!
by the beard, we'll be dragged, do u see wat i see?
no more chance, pulled the plugged towards destiny
send me back, this i cant hack,to your lord you will PLEA!

[Re.TiReD]

I'z forgotten how to rhyme
eyes cryin all the time
dun wanna drop lines
when they dyin in Palestine...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

they got their test and we have ours
think wat we've dun during the last hour
Allahs given you knowledge, given u the power
so dont be sad, but think bout how you can help em

this dunya's temporary, be sad for those who fail
be sad for those when in battle, turn tail
be sad for the fake who inhale
smoke 24/7 uttering that which pleases shaytaan...



rememba we might end up in hell whilst those in palestine might all be in jannah..... may Allah protect us!

[Re.TiReD]

hmmmm....been sinking lately....
been thinkin crazy
forgettin I gotta pass ma own
before I help ma bro's, sistaz..alone

How to be happy wen you're seein it all?
li'l boy dragged thru the street and the tears that fall
But I know I gotta sort maself and think before i moan
Say Al7amdulillah...I'm happy, make it known...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^from this its clear u've grown
and u've made it known, made it shown that
whilst they suffer we shudnt forget
inconsiderate we aint, but we need not fret
sillhouette silk sheets in gold palaces they might be
paradise, above seven skies they might dwell in peace


INSHAALLAH

:) subhanAllah...

[Re.TiReD]

insha'Allah

We dun need this lavish luxury
all I want is simple simplicity
no porshe, mansion, plasma screen T.V
just me an my buk..(of deeds) wen ma Lord calls for me....

palaces belong to those who dun give a second thought
to the Akhirah...to Our Lord...tthey think the world can be bought...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

wallahi i feel da same dream
dont need the benz wiv crem de la cream
its enuff to sit by a flowin stream
wiv ma mother in jannah, this is ma dream....

[Re.TiReD]

dreams will come and dreams will go
you just gotta hang on to yo one main goal
itz Jannah...Allah's Rahmah and success in the hereafter!

Insha'Allah...gotta run..wasslam

[piXie]

:sl:

MashaAllah, u ppl are good!

ermmmmm let me try...:p


th sister wore a scarf, and covered her shakal [face]
but wen it came to backbiting, she had no islamic aqal :rollseyes [sense]

the brother was too lazy to go to th mosque and pray
n wen his dad came wid a joota, he ran away

i worshipped Allah, all morning, and shaam..
but with regards to parents rights, i was totally nakaam. [useless]

do we think we'r great, if we just pray ?
is tht enough to save us, on judgement day ?

we dont listen to music, coz we think tht is bad..
wat abt upsetting our neighbours, or obeying our dad ?

dressing and acting just like th kufaar
walking in tight pants, instead of tht jubba n shalwar

during a game, if we miss a goal tht we just hit..
instead of saying 'inna lilla...', we use th word 'shi*' :offended:

what brothers n sisters ? u think ur so cool ?
following ur class mates, instead of Allah's rasool ? :mmokay:

dont be a loser, dont let yourself go
to all tht is forbidden, learn to say "NO"

or u can do what u want, n listen to the shaytaan
but let me tell u this,
he's the biggest baymaan [cheater]
n if u let him win, ur th weakest insaan :cry:

so brothers n sisters! follow ur islam fully
n wen it comes to tellin others, DONT preach like a bully :p

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i feel like i just been knocked out the game :offended:

nice reminders sis :thumbs_up mashaAllah

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

Knocked out the game? Nah nah not yet
Theres more to learn about Islam, don't be upset
Try ur utmost to freestyle Fi-Sabilillah
And you will get the reward for it Insha'Allâh...

:wasalamex

:salamext:

fi-sabillilah, inshaAllah wont ever stop
im greedy for hasanah, i want the whole stock..
hell... dnt wanna think bout it, cant handle the shock
inshaAllah i hav my brothers n sisters to help me rise to the top



Alhamdulillah for such a beautiful ummah....

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

but u kno wats worse, sis
the fact that they gonna miss
out on seein Allahs blessed face,
the regret, remorse, such disgrace

may ALlah save us....

:wasalamex

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

but passing this long test aint simple
consecutive like skipping stone rimples
the tests come one after one
till the day from the west rises the sun

its only begun the day your born
living thru the days your hearts torn
days your mother passes away and u mourn
its a test take it easy
we only live 4 Allahs pleasure :)
may he grant us Jannah...

[Mr. Baldy]

salaam

its been to many days since i've been astray, and its been ages since i sent up my last praises, they say allah saves, but who knows if he'll will forgive my ways, running my mouth just to bring the fists out, survived the ordeals just about, come home bleeding every night withouth a doubt, never touched the drink though, that or the hos, probably would have though, had i had more dough, this aint just a story this is my life, but i guess thats just how life goes, somethimes i dont know myself no more.

sorry for the lame free-style im in a lesson (plus i had to restarain myself from swearing)

[IbnAbdulHakim]

with patience REALLY? COZ U KNO WAT!!
Allah is wiv you, i can guarantee that :D
and i kno ur tru your gnna get the highest stat!
inshaAllah you'll go far, in jannah u'll be a star!

:D

u kno the small deeds like smilin
and preventin urself from enticin
allowin a babyboy to be glidin [when u lift him in da air]
lettin ur lil baby niece go slidin
things like this which build up take you nex level
may you rise to the top, i pray 4 all of ma brothers n sisters...

:wasalamex

[dream gurl]

wow wher do u get all dis rhymes is der any web?holla

[IbnAbdulHakim]

mujahida why u edit it sis?
what u sayin is deep its bliss
these rhymes are comin out of the heart
if u feelin it then u shud also make a start


lol

[Umar001]

Lol

[IbnAbdulHakim]

interest i detest,
protest coz riba we dont ingest
ma muslims i cannot digress enough
the lack of understandin when it comes to interest


lol that one goes out to all the interest takers :p

[IbnAbdulHakim]

you want some islamic insight
but then u notice that its copyright :heated:
now u tell me shud i fight
for my knowledge of the deen for the light
its wrong i kno that but they persist
but 4 the knowledge i wud even pay coz i insist
desist, somethin i cant do so again i persist
and i dont care if they call me terrorist [had 2 b said :p]

[Umar001]

Seriously what's hapnin, This rappin is slackin,
Pack that stuff up like you goin backpackin,
Please no nursery rhymes, call the nurse cos my lines,
Slice those who oppose with the force of 4 swords combined,

Aite, let me re-cap, so read-that which I write, I'll de-tach,
Any crap rap from the forum, but still keep the door open like Li's got a lach.

C'mon guys you all can do better.

*Walks off*
"This zone be non smokin, except when we grill shaytan like George Foreman..."

[IbnAbdulHakim]

but u see we aint rappin 4 nothin we rappin 4 a reason
we rappin 2 bless wiv knowledge those who listen
may our lord giv us the ablitity to keep it slick n
keep it full o wisdom so we can be reminiscin....

[Umar001]

but u see we aint rappin 4 nothin we rappin 4 a reason
we rappin 2 bless wiv knowledge those who listen
may our lord giv us the ablitity to keep it slick n
keep it full o wisdom so we can be reminiscin....

But, you need to drop knowledge, like this be hip hop college,
A ripty rap nursery rhyme, will fail to attract an inquisitive mind,
Your stanza units should make your students visualise,
Scense of paradise, then you apply the right,
Balance of Hope and Fear in the One Who Sees and Hears,
Promote tears, in rememberance of He.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

hip-hope collij, i'll upgrade it to uni,
coz u see, my influential methodology with limitless storij,
careful not to be dodgy, becoz if you get too metaphorical,
people get skeptikal and if u aint careful u will definitly LOSE IT ALL
becoz the message is simple, clear in its beauty,
so i say it like this in hopes that you see...


lol bro im still learnin chill :p

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

felt a push? minor, jus dont fall
ur rhymes aint weak, ma sista they are... subliminall
constructive criticism might seem a little bitta
but its better then mysticism coz it makes our deen richa
so if our bro says "fix up", then ima brush ma shoulders
rise up stronga, this time round ready to move boulders


lol :p

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

eyelids heavy, heart is poundin,
sleep's creepin in, thoughts resoundin,
can i really afford this wink?
am i even guaranteed the next blink?
in sins i sink and i think that im at the brink
wat audasity man has to endeavour in procrastination
doesnt he kno that DEATH IS HIS FINAL DESTINATION?
and the situation audhubillah after could be eternal D4mNation :(
plead 2 ur lord ma muslims plead for mercy
and dont gimme that, "its too late for me",
gimme a break, u think ur sins are greater then Allahs rahmah?! :eek:
coz im tellin u, wiv that attitude u headin the opposite direction of jannah....

audhubillah!!

:wasalamex

[Mr. Baldy]

there are those,
who oppose islam,
but **** it thats just how it goes,
in world where girls grow up to bhe video hoes,
so i compose, a verse or two,
waiting patiently to debut,
spit with breath thats toxic,
words that come to quick,
praising allah and all islam stands for

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

maybe you aint noticed, but you know its,
sad to see brothers also fallin for this glamour spree,
spreadin across our society,
those with intelligence are mindlessly followin desires,
morals n values valued in islam, released without care but do they giv a d*m?

[...]

Be one soul one heart and all
then if you stumble at least you wont fall
Remember this ummah is one unity
and thats what we should all aim to be

All the mercy bestowed on us,
and the blessings surrounding us
are there to help fulfill the purpose bound on us

We are but travellers on this short journey
one day we will reach and yet be yearning
for another chance another morning
to wake up again and re-begin our learning

[Re.TiReD]

:sl: oooohh amby!! didnt know you had it in ya ukht!! lo0o0l! good one Masha'Allah :okay:

man you people are darn good! *walks off* can't compete with that sis
Muj4h1da :-[ :w:

[Re.TiReD]

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! am so happy! :)

am Dreamin of days gone by man
but anticipatin the one to come
praisin Ar-Rahman
for each risin of the sun...

When life's all rough an you're bein hit by dilemmas,
you dun know where to turn an you wish yo life was over
not knowin that its these that gather the rewardz
Praise Him when you can, dun be the ones that hoard

Coz Allah only tests those worthy of His love
but how often do we forget the one das watchin from above...

(ahh I can't be bothered...am jus happy coz I got an offer from uni!!!) jzk for the rep btw sis :okay:

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

Lets not be so quik to admit defeat,
sure some might be elite and some learnin
but trus in abit its them u'll b burnin
wiv ur flows and ur messages
impact a deep wound, make them need bandages


lol wound = islamic knowledge which they cant forget inshaAllah :D

[Re.TiReD]

oh :sl: bro..I wanted to say summin but I'll say it in rhyme :D

there's this sis yo,
here's your chance to gain
receive a Du'aa from the heart bro
an put an end to people's pain

what I mean is that this sis was lookin for som1 hu goz UCL

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

it didnt look like she was in pain
nevertheless its bless, i hope i gained
some reward for my small support
maybe this is the stamp for my jannah passport


:im losin it!!!!:

[Re.TiReD]

lol!

when you feel you're losin it
itz probz coz you are (kiddin!) :D
but look to the heavens bro
and ask from Allah....

bein pagal comes from Him
as does sanity
praise Him coz you've been blessed...
with a degree of normality!!

muahahah! :D

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

i fear looking up lest a bird poops
but i'll walk into this building
and thank Allah with ma muslims in a group

from the heavens come all the baraka
thats why we should all give sadaqa
we have beautiful examples like waraqa (ibn naufal)
of people on the right path, mashaAllah


lol see i told u , im losing the flow!

[Re.TiReD]

I heard that our brains switch off every 45 minutes..maybe it's the 45th minute for you!! hehee nah kiddin...derz nufin rong wit that rhyme up der! :rollseyes

anyhoo....

If a bird poopz bro it's coz it was meant to be
so don't be angry, don't be sad at nature and harmony :D
puttin aside the poop and all things dizguzting
think of the tranquility, and the bees that be buzzing...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

think of the tranquility, and the bees that be buzzing...

and then when they sting ya you start cussing
"come back here you fat bee" you be bus'sing
but you cant see the tongue he pulls out at you
its too smALL!! n u cant hear him tellin u to sniff glue!

but thats ok coz we have sabr
gotta be good till the day we meet our qabr (grave)
like the examples of salahuddin ayyubi
fight 4 Allah, may he grant us victorY!

[Re.TiReD]

salahuddin and nurrudin! yo what bravery
put their faith in Allah and that got em victory!

and now I gotta go bro...
Good Luck with the rhymes and Good Luk with the flow :)

[Mr. Baldy]

its time to spread your wings and start flapping,
coz its time for war when the guns start clapping,
i see a boy in my dreams the one i used to be,
asking me,
how i got to where i am from where i used to be,
try to cleanse myself with sweat of the shaheeds,
but the devil speaks to me with ideas of evil deeds,
'come murder one, come murder one, murder them all'

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

::: Warning ::: it gets a little deep

Ok. Im going to drop it excessive,
freestylin so im not bein selectiv
electiv, i elect my muslims!
my mu'mins, gather together
so we can spark it like some buff rims
hair trims, hajj is done so perform jihaad until we meet grim
eject all the cowardice, u kno how we power this,
emotion be our catalyst, islam be our strategy,
to the kuffar we causin tragedy,
its a part of me, we born 2 fight, we born to die,
i feelin it start in me, we learn to think we learn to rise!
i kno its not kind of me, but u can bite me coz u dont kno whats inside o me....



:wasalamex

[IbnAbdulHakim]

was raised up dumb deaf and blind,
tradition, fabrication rampant in ma mind
but now i left it all behind, its about time
that this little boy grew, mujahid in my prime

[IbnAbdulHakim]

I hate IT
i love IT
i jus dont kNO!
iblis expertises in makin sins seem tiny
so when that music pumps up you seem to say "so?"
its like bro, wake up and listen 2 the lyrix,
dont u understand that these gimmicks go against our teachings!



sry if that was lame :hiding:

[Umar001]

Professing to believe while we live under guidance of Greed,
Proclaiming the creed yet we forget when we proceed to feed,
On institutionalised money making obession our expression,
Prophesiced by our Prophet in a breath taking mention,
That some will try to make halal the haram like Music,
We read, smile, think of no harm, 'cos we stupid,
Enveloped in our self proclaimed 'developed' society,
Where profanity is profound,
And he who guards his chastidy is hardly found,

[Sabbir_1]

Professing to believe while we live under guidance of Greed,
Proclaiming the creed yet we forget when we proceed to feed,
On institutionalised money making obession our expression,
Prophesiced by our Prophet in breath a taking mention,
That some will try to make halal the haram like Music,
We read, smile, think of no harm, 'cos we stupid,
Enveloped in our self proclaimed 'developed' society,
Where profanity is profound,
And he who guards his chastidy is hardly found,

mashallah bro thats is wicked. how you learn to write like that. amazing..

[Umar001]

And he who guards his chastidy is hardly found,

Yet he who is bound by desire,
Will be bound in the fire,
With chains and shackles, pains be ample,
Brains will sample,
Torment meant as an element of punishment,
Allah if You punish them, they are Your slaves,
And if You forgive them verily You are All Mighty the All Wise, (5:118)

[Umm Yoosuf]

:sl:

Masha Allah. some good stuff. I wish I could write.:blind:

[Umar001]

Instigating Intolerable Ideaologies,
Whilst, Am Infiltrating the Improbable, Probably,
Pertaining To Propaganda Proclaimed, By,
Professional Persevering Pathalogical People who, Lie,
So Spillin Spooky Spine Chillin Squirts,
Of Truthful Tongue Twisting Blurts,
Destroying Derogatory Details That Entail False Tales.

[Mr. Baldy]

woke up in the morning in a cemetery,
smelled the air someones just been freshly buried,
look down at my body oh my oh my it was me,
this cant be right,
just yesterday i was being rock a bye bye,
never thought that today i might die,
something aint quite right,
i was at home just last night,
no memories of how i might,
have got here,
only lived just 18 years,
this has to be some type of nightmare,
this is getting kinda scary,
and im getting kinda weary,
somebody tell me whats going on, coz i dont know,
burried under six feet of soil yo,
life was just begining fo' sho',
no place to run and hide,
coz now im locked inside,
will i be saved or will i be fried?
i dont know why,
i never tried harder to pray,
now im lying dead in my grave,
and i dont know whats going on,
somebody save me or im gone.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

its a 2 second thing!
you think its longer? bro your imagining!
into the grave, YOU, they will fling!
jus to think only yesterday was instigating
how much to bun and how much to bling
n my gf, how i miss the way she use to sing

how i miss, and yes i miss, you wanna know why?
because now in the grave i lie, and i wasnt truthful,
i use to deny whats true, wasnt one to comply.
i belied the rules so now its my turn to cry.

i had my warning, and now fire will be my auning....





Audhubillah, may Allah protect us...

[Re.TiReD]

Made a mistake today :-[ shaytaans got me caught
thought my Imaan was smooth sailing but he's rockin dis boat
a minute is all it takes to build the path to the fire
but a second of repentance to elevate you higher
so heaven or hell, yo it's all up to you
just make sure it's you in control and not the one who's made of fire (shaytaan)

[IbnAbdulHakim]

its not jus you i been there too
sometimes that shaytaan can stick on like glue
but let the blowtorch to melt that glue be belief
when shaytaan comes causing grief its dhikr that makes all the diff
so my sister kno ur not alone, we'll stand strong
as an ummah like the united (islamic) nations before us to which we belong



Audhubillah , may Allah protect us from the shaytaan

[Re.TiReD]

He's vowed to lead astray and so lead us he shall
but only if we digress and forget Allah AzzaWaJal
mistakes we gonna make but there's one thing of importance...
we gotta feel the pain of our sins and make repentance

[IbnAbdulHakim]

repentence requires sincerity
so make sure you do it with clarity
theres no parity
from Allahs chastity
its a crime to even want to flee
from him, ar-rahmaan, the almighty!

[Re.TiReD]

lol thats good bro but the rhmyer in me's died
In attaining Allah's forgiveness I think Ima spend my time
this world is nothing, just the blinking of an eye,
a non-existent future bro, a regretfull sigh...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

mashaAllah!

[Re.TiReD]

What was that bhai? you want me to ryme summin wid 'Masha'Allah'?

[IbnAbdulHakim]

lol no i just thought the meaning to the last rhyme was extremely deep. made me think therefore i exclaimed "mashaAllah"


because its so true, this world is glamour
it'll pass away quick like a forgotten summer.....

[Re.TiReD]

lol no i just thought the meaning to the last rhyme was extremely deep. made me think therefore i exclaimed "mashaAllah"

^^ hehe i know bhai...juz kiddin..

a word said to another
a smile to a brother
yesterdays snow (:D )
and the things we know

yo they're all gonna go but we choose to ignore
only waking up when death is at the door...
but what you gonna do then, wen there's not time to repent?
are you from amongst the pious..are you really innoCENT?

[IbnAbdulHakim]

innocent, hah far from it
commiting sins is getting plutonic
out of hand and dangerous at fast rates like super sonic
its amazing! isnt it? when we think about it!
the amount of plunges we take yet Allah makes us rise
he could have easily let us fall to our demise
if only humanity realised that Allah is truelly the only one to be cherished...

[Re.TiReD]

dat RocKzZ! :thumbs_up

Just saw the rep bro, (Ameen) the Du'aa goes back to you
it's amazing wot we overlook yet we act as tho we in wudhu...
and by that I mean...we think we're on the path, on the straight and narrow
when we see people hurtin we know how to display the sorrow
but wot bout our deeds, dont we need to build em up?
we think our duties are complete when we put some money in the cup (Sadaqah)
but thats isnt the case..its each man (or woman) :) for himself
practise Jahad of the nafs and purify your wealth...

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum
you lot should do a competition somwhere
ma'assalama

[Re.TiReD]

lol!! :okay: I gotto go...wassalamz all..keep me in the du'AAS insha'Alah

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum
^ inshallah you do the same Quad :)
Ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

jihad un nafs is important yes
but what about our brothers and sisters gettin shot in the chest?
what about our young muslims who have no food in their breasts?
they oppressed so jihad un nafs i shall do wiv every breath
until death inshaAllah but jihad fisabillilah cant be forgotten
when its our babies that the kuffar have trodden
it saddens me to see that our brothers are begetting
children who dont help the ummah in its tragedy...

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum

always look after your health...

we always have had ups && downs
but we always hear sounds
never know who's there whats there
but your heart is bare
am telling you right here && now you need a change
by REding your all point of veiw you gota reange

why don't yh wana be ma side time is flyin sudennly am bounic don't see you don't make don't make lose da faith in me

;D ;D ;D ROFL!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAH hahaha snowy in da house eh? lol

ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

that was pure confusing :uuh:

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum
^ aww atleast i tried my bad :(
am gonna try ma best to do tha other one :X
ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

it had a good flow but just could make sense of the meanin lol i read it 5 times now and the rearrangin old ways part is good mashaAllah

[Kittygyal]

salam.
erm i have sat here trying to come out with ''islamic'' ones but am not good at islamic ones, am just good at genral poems
ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

hey just post whatever you think of, the only way to improve is post crap ones then work your way up. lol trust me it helps!

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum.

How might I tell you what you meant ta me?
All a did both night && Day was i love you
Rulers of my kingdom && My heart
Like gods at last you claimed my painful breath,
Opening the door to mystery,
The final gift of all the gifts you gave me,
Taking what I could no longer give you
Even if a treid wiv all mi heart


:p :p :p :p :p

Ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

Like gods

:X :X :X :X :uuh:

umm....

those dont rhyme :X

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum.
okay now am goign to be more serious && not mess about inshallah well here goes one :p

I Have mastered a method to suppress my pain
No longer will I let my cheeks have a tear stain
I will wake up each day with a smile on my face
Appreciating life's moments for time is no race............

hope thats better :D



ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

now i feel depressed :(



much better :D

[Umar001]

Yep, thats better, plus Ibn Abdul Hakim, bro maybe she has a funny accent and it rhymes the way she says it lol.

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum
OMR... what have i done i always write sad poems am sorry :'( just sharing my hard times :cry:

Making the effort to embellish all 5 senses
Wearily lettin go of the walls I built for defense'z
Now bearing the burden to be something I am not
This is not the happiness for which I ad sought
Outward appearancez r fairly easy to contain
Difficulty arises trying ta mask my internal pain
Repeatedly ma cherished dreams are torn apart
Freely I let the crimson tearz bleed from my heart

Ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

you see sis theres an islamic method
for every haphazard
from eating your favorite custard (:rollseyes:)
to healing those broken wings
you see, these beautiful teachings
taught by the best, have intricate meanings
sealing the doors to shaytaan
he aint roamin in ur heart, that aint his place
his a disgrace and the heart of a mu'min needs not his trace


takbeer :D

[IbnAbdulHakim]

salamualikum
OMR... what have i done i always write sad poems am sorry :'( just sharing my hard times :cry:

Making the effort to embellish all 5 senses
Wearily lettin go of the walls I built for defense's
Now bearing the burden to be something I am not
This is not the happiness for which I ad sought

Ma'assalama

WOOOOOOOOW :uuh: that one was amazin :eek: im out of reps tho!

[Kittygyal]

Yep, thats better, plus Ibn Abdul Hakim, bro maybe she has a funny accent and it rhymes the way she says it lol.

salam.
well il behonest i have a funny accent indeed i do have one well people here in Uk don't understand moi:phew
Ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

poetry is the most beautiful when it fills you wiv this happy feeling lol, lets not turn it into twisted art where they draw creepy depressing stuff all the time :p :vomit:

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum

prayer is da basic pillar of Islam
It is mentioned again and again in the Qura'an
The importance of prayer is in 7 hunddred places
But in da mosque, do u see many young faces? (do we)
Prayin in da mosque gives 27 timez da r-ward
Prayin with da intention dat ur pleasin ur Lord Al-Mighty
When you walk to da mosque, just remember within
You gain a reward and ur losing one of ur sin
For every step towards your destination

ma'assalama

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum

the Qura'an as foretold dat before you are dead
say ur prayers before ur prayers are said.....


someone help me here please

ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

salamualikum

prayer is da basic pillar of Islam
It is mentioned again and again in the Qura'an
The importance of prayer is in 7 hunddred places
But in da mosque, do u see many young faces? (do we)
Prayin in da mosque gives 27 timez da r-ward
Prayin with da intention dat ur pleasin ur Lord Al-Mighty
When you walk to da mosque, just remember within
You gain a reward and ur losing one of ur sin
For every step towards your destination

ma'assalama

subhanAllah!!! MORE!!! :D

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum
^ akhi read my above one please i need help on dat one
ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

the Qura'an as foretold dat before you are dead
say ur prayers before ur prayers are said upon you
before they stand upon your grave
and the angels come to ask you how is it you behaved
before Allah takes into account
the sins which pile up to a scary ammount
say your prayers before you see those two (munkar and nakeer)
who when they come, wont even say boo
azrail (AS) will take ur soul as its due,
so forget this dunya and foget your crew

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum.
^ mashallah.

spreadd this word prayer to Muslim sisters and brothers
prayer will sepearte Muslims from others
prayer is a blessin which Allah subhanwatallah gave
it will intercede && protect us in da grave..

ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

spread the word sis i spread the peace
spread it wiv my heart and tongue
spreadin it now and i've only begone
or hav i? i aint been told my time of death
it could be when im prayin or when im in debt (audhubillah)
while im blastin out tunes or walkin away from a catastrophe i cudda prevented...
for all i kno my life, i might hav already spent it,
last breath, feels like it cud be anytime now,
ok gettin emotional, its time to bow now....

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum

Ayat-ul-kursii reading afta fardh must be read
it will lead u ta paradise *inshallah* afta ur dead
not performin prayer will lead you ta hell
surrounded by serpants in a deep well

ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

memorise the names of Allah
to get admittance into jannah
memorise the lyrix to a song
and the losers of hell you'll be among!

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum

Allah subhanwatallah has showered us with his grace
&& we have ta be worthy to show our face
Whateva we do we’ll pay the price
In da depths of hell or in paradise

ma'assalama

[IbnAbdulHakim]

:salamext:

but lets not take it for granted (his grace i mean)
we dont want Allah sayin its he we shanted
so my brothers and sisters understand
and be prepared for the day where we stand with deeds at hand...

[Mr. Baldy]

this is dedicated to my best friend who gave his life so i could live right

i remember the first time i was shot,
it was my arm that tip was from a glock,
worst thing wasnt the pain it was the tears in mammas eyes,
telling me 'soldier u coulda been iced'
next time got lodged behind my ear,
im lucky it missed my brain and im still here,
mamma cried,
'soldier u coulda died',
third time my closest friend saved me,
took 5 tips to the chest for me,
froma driveby that was meant for me,
took his life to teach me a lesson,
i try to honour his memory by praying to my lord 5 times,
rest easy little godfather.

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum
edit very sowiee indeed :( PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLZ
ma'assalama

[Mr. Baldy]

salamualikum
aww how sweet thank you am always your sister in islam don't worry i save EVERYONE :p mwahaha
ma'assalama

dude have some respect this guy was my mentor, he was like my older brother and i saw him get shot 5 times in the chest to save my life, those bullets where meant for me. today he would have been 20. i expect u to apologise

[Kittygyal]

dude have some respect this guy was my mentor, he was like my older brother and i saw him get shot 5 times in the chest to save my life, those bullets where meant for me. today he would have been 20. i expect u to apologise

salamualikum.
OH lord i am ever so sowiee walahi i am, i thought you was messing or something i never knew he has died i am very sowiee dude :( please forgive me for allah subhanwtallah's sake :cry:

once again am sowiee dude
ma'assalama

[Mr. Baldy]

salamualikum.
OH lord i am ever so sowiee walahi i am, i thought you was messing or something i never knew he has died i am very sowiee dude :( please forgive me for allah subhanwtallah's sake :cry:

once again am sowiee dude
ma'assalama

thats cool man, u didnt know

[Kittygyal]

salamualikum.
^ shukran for understanding plus once again am very sowiee of the loss
ma'assalama

[Mr. Baldy]

salamualikum.
^ shukran for understanding plus once again am very sowiee of the loss
ma'assalama

like my fiancee always says 'if allah can forgive mans sins, how can i not?' its cool dude

[Re.TiReD]

:sl: Sorry for the loss Mr.Baldy...we live in a scary world man! yikes!

man...what's happenin in the world today?
people hurting, people cryin an it wont go away
we gotta save ourselves before we too go astray
what if that was me with 5 bullets to the chest
would I reeally be ready to go, wuda hav passed life's test?
Yo it really makes you think when sum1 makes the journey,
goes back the creator to live for eternity...

[IbnAbdulHakim]

does it seem balistic?
whats happenin to this click?
always acting on rage, reaching for the nearest brick
taking a mans life to impress, its the latest trick
but it makes me sick how thick some of these hicks can be
hicks is wat dey are, gangsta, i say nah!
far from it, they need to be educated
about the true world in which freedom is emancipated
debated and hated are the speeches of truth,
to Allah and his rasool, but we runnin it smooth
its ok to take hits now n den but its uncouthe
when they try hurt us for tryna save em
but can we blame em? when the head satan canes em
and takes away all shame from em at the same time



i feel sleepy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Re.TiReD]

good ryhme....

Who needs a gangstah cult wen we got Islam
who needs violence wen we got dis spiritual calm
who needs dis dunya y'all when we got Akhirah
so then why do we sin knowing that we want jannah...?

yeah Akhee...Im so sleepy :X

[...]

Its the veil, created by shaitan
to keep me from seeing, whats rightfully mine
although the pleasures of jannah, are promised to me
if i follow the quran and sunnah, and do believe
but instead the display of this dunya appears
as the only life with nothing to fear

Dont fall into his plot!
Remember you grave
and what youll say to Allah
on Judgement Day..