Untitled--a poem

[*noor]

Untitled

My troubles have accumulated and peace has depreciated
With nothing to put a smile on my face
And nothing to pull me out of this deep hole
I let my tears falls down, all the way down, down to the ground
I cry my tired eyes out repeatedly in distress
Knowing that these were tears of sorrow, tears of pain
I realize that something meaningful is missing
Something of comfort, of great incitement
Then I see it clearly in my heart
That what I need is a long, meaningful sajdah
Where I can see a lingering glow and endless hope
A sajdah where I can be close to Allah
And ask for the guidance, the love, and the patience
That I need to carry on and reassure myself
This sajdah, oh so relieving, is a gift from Allah
And this gift from our Lord, we must learn to cherish

[SirDemonic]

Untitled

My troubles have accumulated and peace has depreciated
With nothing to put a smile on my face
And nothing to pull me out of this deep hole
I let my tears falls down, all the way down, down to the ground
I cry my tired eyes out repeatedly in distress
Knowing that these were tears of sorrow, tears of pain
I realize that something meaingful is missing
Something of comfort, of great incitement
Then I see it clearly in my heart
That what I need is a long, meaningful sajdah
Where I can see a lingering glow and endless hope
A sajdah where I can be close to Allah
And ask for the guidance, the love, and the patience
That I need to carry on and reassure myself
This sajdah, oh so relieving, is a gift from Allah
And this gift from our Lord, we must learn to cherish

So sweet :) it's a nice poem
If you added my name it make it better :okay:

[*noor]

So sweet :) it's a nice poem
If you added my name it make it better :okay:

no way!...it's my poem and only my name goes on it

[mysticalsilence]

Nice

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[BlissfullyJaded]

:sl:

Wow...really beautiful mashaAllah.

Jazakallah khair for sharing sis. :wub:

[*noor]

assalaamu alaikum

jazakumAllah for the comments!