Chances ....

[chacha_jalebi]

salaam

this inshallah it just like a eye opener innit, realisation thin, get me :p

diggidy diggidy ya best check yaselfs before ya wreck yaselfs

The amount of chances we have, to fix up and change our ways
Yet we persist in the sayin “there is still so much days”
We mess with our lifes, and think all is well
If we persist in our ways we will definitely be in hell

Soon we could die and look back when we had time,
To fix up and repent our crime
Then we will regret and wished we hadn’t been careless
For our life is so so precious

Whatever changes we have to do
Have to be done now, our hearts need to be true
We need to tie our laces
Before we have disgraced faces

We compete in sin, not in good
We cant make excuses and say we have been lured
A wake up call is needed
We need to follow the true way, we way be the last generation breeded

We need to look at our life and question ourself
Do we really want this world with its sadness, pain and so called wealth
Or do we want to be in eternal happiness
Where we will praise Allah (swt) and never say “live is a mess

The amount of chances we have, to fix up and change our ways
Yet we persist in the sayin “there is still so much days”
We need to become humble
Otherwise we may have to go through hell in a tumble . .

[truemuslim]

AMAZING! jazakallah for sharing this!...can someone please read on of mine...(isuggest the iraqi baby)

[Re.TiReD]

AssalamuAlaykum

The first stanza is by far the best Masha'Allah!

[chacha_jalebi]

:p i was on a line makin spree so the startin is always heavy, and in the end it loses the plot lol

jazakhallah though

Hey there! Looks like you're enjoying the discussion, but you're not signed up for an account.

When you create an account, you can participate in the discussions and share your thoughts. You also get notifications, here and via email, whenever new posts are made. And you can like posts and make new friends.
Sign Up

[☆•♥°ąყ℮Տիმ°♥•☆]

Assalam-o-Allikum
MashaAllah... awesome poem
JazakAllahu, thanx for sharing

[Ummu Sufyaan]

:sl:
jazakallahu khair.
did you write it yourself?
:sl:

[Kittygyal]

Assalamualikum.

Not bad, Alhamdulilah... like this bit :)

The amount of chances we have, to fix up and change our ways
Yet we persist in the sayin “there is still so much days”
We mess with our lifes, and think all is well
If we persist in our ways we will definitely be in hell

Soon we could die and look back when we had time,
To fix up and repent our crime
Then we will regret and wished we hadn’t been careless
For our life is so so precious

Whatever changes we have to do
Have to be done now, our hearts need to be true
We need to tie our laces
Before we have disgraced faces

This bit confused me..

we way be the last generation breeded

Shouldn't it be 'we may be the last generation breeded' :?

“live is a mess

Life:?

“there is still so much days”

''there are soo many days''

did u write it up?

Ma'assalama

[------]

:salamext:

Mashaa Allaah akhee, you have talent.

[------]

:salamext:

The amount of chances we have, to fix up and change our ways
Yet we persist in the sayin “there is still so much days”

:bump:

[Re.TiReD]

:sl:

:bump:

:w:

[Souljette]

:sl:

MASHALLAH

[Nájlá]

mashalla
jazakallah khair for sharing this with us