Assalamu aleimum

[abdurrazak]

the star shining bright and high,
watchin tormentfull days go bye,
im still a young child no sense,
running for my life climing high fence,
i ask of you dear god,
please help that old lady in the mud,
in the night im lonely
wishing i was somebody
the star shining bright and high
its time for me to say bye
so remeber next time you happy
thank god for your loving family
(the story of the plalestine kid)
by abdurrazak
jazakallahu kheri

any improvement would be greatly appreciated :)

[MetSudaisTwice]

salam
mashallah a great poem
wasalam

[abdurrazak]

remembering the happy days that went by
the face of my mum before she had to die
now am stuck in darkness listening to the clocks tick
all alone nothing to eat while you waste money on haraam music
i dont understand dear god
i always tried my best and worked hard
oh lisent joyfull person reading this
dont be a fool like iblees
this world is merely a dream
not everything is what they seem
and so i leave
praying and hoping you belive
(story of the orphan child)
abdurrazak

[MetSudaisTwice]

salam
mashallah mashallah

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[Ameeratul Layl]

:sl:

I wrote that poem....only joking ;D

I think I'm going to try and think of a poem
I wonder what it should be about............mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I know.......the Mods. ;D
I'll start on it today and let you know the result sometime soon. InshAllah.

Oh man! This is going to be fun ;D ;D

m3 salaam
Raiyhana :wilted_ro

[abdurrazak]

lol mods are useless hehe chill messin

[Riya90]

Masha'Allah nice poem ;)

[abdurrazak]

jazakalahu kheir

[- Qatada -]

wa 'alykum asalam warahmatulahi wabarakatuh.

welcome to the forum bro and masha Allah subhan Allah really nice poem :) just a few spelin mistakes buh u can sort dem out insha Allah :D


wasalam o 'alykum warahmatulahi wabarakatuh.