Dying for a good reason

[Souljette]

None of us prepared
None of us feared
The one who cared
All of us dared
to do things unimaginable
Exposed to things inadvisable
Western countries make everything available,
No matter how degradable
I sit here disgusted and frustrated
watching documentaries, muslims misrepresented
Brothers and Sisters out there being disrespected
The whole islamic nation affected
Aiding my brothers and sisters
Whether there in Chechnya, Somalia, Iraq or America
In the fight against Islamophobia
We all muslims
united as one
If divided we're gone
Stick by each other, cry for none other,

We all say Life's hard
but Death catches us all offguard
We all sitting here, wondering what we gonna do
Death approaching us today or tomorrow,
Inside we all feel hollow
but can't do nothing just feel sorrow

Our one option is preparation
Reach our goal, having no objections
Complete our obligations
Dying for a good reason
Better be known as a good person
who practised her religion ....


I WROTE THIS A LONG TIME AGO SO GO EASY ON THE CRITCISM lol

[Ali.]

Nice poem and good reminder :)

[Souljette]

Jazakallah bro

[Abu Thabit]

Masha-Allah

thats a nice rap poem sister

I hope that you dont listen to it anymore :)

may Allah guide us all

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[Souljette]

uhhhh I wrote that poem bro i didn't get it from any rap places or anything i was just frustrated one night and wrote it longg time ago..but jazakallah

[Abu Thabit]

I didnt mean sister that you copied it

what I meant is your poem is a rap style poem .. thats all :)

[Souljette]

oooooooo lol yee mostly all my poems are..yes i stopped listening to it but i still rhyme it that mannerr

[Amat Allah]

masha Allah amazing

I loved it so much

you are so cool my dear sister

touchy poem ........I just loved it.

keep it up .....you are a great writer.

Jazak Allah the paradise

Ameeeeeeeeeeen:smile:

[Abu Thabit]

Masha-Allah, thats really good

keep it this way, Islamized poems free from anything thats against the Sharee'ah rulings, and especially free of music.

may Allah bless us all :)

[Souljette]

THanks bro Abu Thabit and sis Amat Allahh....Aww sisss...thanks alotttt jazakumullah khair y'all

[Eric H]

Greetings and peace be with you Souljette;

It is certainly a good rap and full of meaning and good intentions and I liked it,

but!!!

Could the rap have a greater meaning if it searched for justice for all people as well as Muslims.

In the spirit of sharing one God,

Eric

[Souljette]

yes bro Eric...^^ i have written other poems which have been about justice in the whole world in different countries..i rote one for sierra leone and it was posted on free the children..this was just me venting out frustrations of what i was viewing on t.v most of the time but thanks for the idea as well

[muslimah_online]

Assalamualaikum..

Mumtaz to the writer. I think it's good the rhyming goes well with the meaning and not just for the sake of rhyming which in my opinion is marvellous.

[Souljette]

Jazakallah khair sis :D

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i read it back to myself in an ahmed deedat accent loll

it sounds wicked tho! you should try it


Assalamu Alaikum

[------]

:salamext:

Nice one sis!

We all say Life's hard
but Death catches us all offguard
We all sitting here, wondering what we gonna do
Death approaching us today or tomorrow,
Inside we all feel hollow
but can't do nothing just feel sorrow

Loved that ^^^

[IbnAbdulHakim]

the whole things great mashaAllaah.

my first ones use to be terrible, but for a first this is amazing!

Asaslamu Alaikum

[------]

:salamext:

i read it back to myself in an ahmed deedat accent loll

it sounds wicked tho! you should try it

lol it dont sound half as bad... :D

[FatimaAsSideqah]

As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatuhu

Good one, Sister Souljette. :thumbs_up

[Souljette]

Jazakumullah khair Sis Righteious Lady, Sis Ahlaam, And bro Ibn Abdul Hakim.....lollzz hahaha broo u funnyy..yeee whneva i rite poems it's mre like me sayin it...so ye tht's why they sound like raps lol

[true believer]

wow, go sis!
i LOVED it!
i'll be sure to pass it on
great, thanks 4 sharing x

[Nσσя'υℓ Jαииαн]

MashaAllah sis, wicked poem. wonderful meaning..:):)

:sl:

[- Qatada -]

asalaam alaikum


masha Allah, when you read it to yourself in your mind.. or even in real life - you can like, feel the beat of it..


its clever masha Allah

[Souljette]

Jazakumullah Bro Qatada, Sis Jazzy, and SIs True Believer ..:D

[☆•♥°ąყ℮Տիმ°♥•☆]

:sl:
MashaAllah.. great poem and great talent
Keep it up :thumbs_up
:w:

[Souljette]

Jazakallah sis Ayeshaa..i'm not that good as much as you guys are saying it lol..i just try

[Snowflake]

MashaAllah sis, I really liked it. Write some more :D

[Souljette]

l;ol derez one tht says MY NIQAB too..i hv others i jst hvn't had time to post so soon i will tryyzz..Jazakallah sis