to LI members........

now ima dedicate
this time to web state (yeh i made that up, it rhymes gotta prob?)
its neva too late
to sho respect......."mate" ()

now the sista highway_trekka
neva have i met ha (her)
but ima say ah luv ha

coz gurl u my sister in IS-LAM
when i heard yo rhymes, im LIKE-"DAM"!

ima friend tho, so ima stay honest
ur grammar jus aint the wrongest

u spell too perfect nd do all the comma's
i say it aint worth it, too much drama's

get yo mouth off the chain
let it melt in the rain

you'll see ur tru self
you'll feel like ur self

now take no offence, coz i kno u aint bad gurl
but take all defence coz ur heart like a bad pearl (as in u defend!)

that was my rhymes,
that was my times
now take it to the next, i'll thro in ma dimes

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lol yeh sis highway_trekker i dont even kno u but ther ya go, from one poem i heard, nd one siggy i made

format_quote Originally Posted by AhLÄÄM

Lets see what you think about Aunty

actually i already wrote urs long ago just neva had the guts to post it

here

Ahlaam


this ones to ahlaam
aka serene
she loves the rahmaan
may she stay wit mustakeem

she's helped me in the past
nd music i passed
2pac was my first, nd now hes ma last

sista, i wanna say tho
yeh, at times we went way low
forgive me, nd let that go

we went way too deep
too many insults
the love i wanna keep
but they hurt like lightning bolts
see how shaitan creeps?
lets just say its my faults

sis when u bring ur rhymes
they take everyones times

u bring em to the surface
make all the rest a circus

ur rhyme owns
ur heart takes all
ur brain...powns
ur gna stand tall

so sis just forgive me
nd we cn live happily

lets ride on the merry (go round)
then jump on the trolly
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last parta bit random i guess

this would probably be better in the gender sections innay!

^ aw poor u now innay.
gimme access nd we think



ur so mean dont close the thread.
u cant take out my threads nd i cant post no more ima protest!

^ lol ... thank u

ook lemme jus ask u gonna be mean again nd close this or will u be nice.........."again" ...nd lemme continue ?

yeh thats right ... back off...........................(yes im joking)


ook nxt:



Juniooor:

brother ahmed junia
u remind of martin lutha (martin luthor king JUNIOR)

ur poems are of afta
by that i mean they fasta

than all the other autha's
on this blocka's

No more stress,
now ur straight, (as in ur clean. or tryna be clean...not the other one )
now u get it now u take
Time to think before u make
mistakes just for yo my family’s sake
That part of u left yesterday
the heart of u is strong today
No regrets; ur blessed to say
the old u dead and gone away.

i may hav offended u in the past tho
but that was long long ago
mayb a whole week to go

now he's the leader u all follow
u got his style, but cant tak take his flo
the best lines wit him, thats su'in we owe
credit all to you, best poet bro

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i dont even kno but yeh sounds kwl

(sorry that part was a bit random nd doesnt work unless ur singing it about urself, but it rhymed like like hell so i had to do that !)