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    6:am: i prayed after a struggle to wake up
    getting ready... my face barely meets a touch of make up
    tieing the scarf feeling cagey...
    but proudly standing here bravely
    on my right hand i have the pin
    encouraging myself that if i do it..its a win win-
    -situation, the summation is i will evade another sin
    and of my lord im afraid and so i have conviction within
    the whisperer comes when the time is critical
    but my faith is strong tho, his effect is minimal
    'take it off,if you want boys??'
    NO! ,..thanks for the ploy
    im happily covered and not indiscreet
    cus i know in the jungle...what happens to exposed meat
    Vulturous men have free access to see!!
    im still standing here
    from the rushed thoughts i say 'bismillah' to get clearer
    one final look at the mirror
    i see Beauty and a girl so sweet far from being dissolute and bitter
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

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    Good stuff..mashallah
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    That was profound sis
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    Excuse moi

    If I find a rap, a poem, sum lines of freestly offensive I will say so. If people are going to use foul language and ruin something that has the potential to be beautiful I will say so.

    Take it for granted.
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by JolieFleur View Post
    Excuse moi

    If I find a rap, a poem, sum lines of freestly offensive I will say so. If people are going to use foul language and ruin something that has the potential to be beautiful I will say so.

    Take it for granted.
    OK you have the right to say whatever you want,i will just see what advice i can deduce from whatever you say and i will be more be careful of what rhymes i post and what i include in them
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by J.U.N.I.O.R View Post
    OK you have the right to say whatever you want,i will just see what advice i can deduce from whatever you say and i will be more be careful of what rhymes i post and what i include in them
    JazakAllah khayr. I know what you're reffering to bro, but I dont think you saw the posts that have been deleted...only the ones that have been left.

    Continue the freestyle insha'Allah. Yours are a pleasure to read
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    its like i waited my whole life
    all for this one night
    nd u play me wit it
    when to me u give it
    then take it from me
    leavin me blindly
    hopin for u to notice me
    its like my ownself is deadly
    with my heart bein empty
    because love i got falsely
    but i still wanna worship u
    since im worth no value
    nd hopin for ur rescue
    even after my head u slew
    but after this i given up
    all the music i had given up
    nd now my faith i've given up
    nd music im not giving up
    u wanna help my faith build up
    or leave it to break up
    but for me, i can no longer stand up
    coz my soul u've blown up

    :/
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by truemuslim View Post
    its like i waited my whole life
    all for this one night
    nd u play me wit it
    when to me u give it
    then take it from me
    leavin me blindly
    hopin for u to notice me
    its like my ownself is deadly
    with my heart bein empty
    because love i got falsely
    but i still wanna worship u
    since im worth no value
    nd hopin for ur rescue
    even after my head u slew
    but after this i given up
    all the music i had given up
    nd now my faith i've given up
    nd music im not giving up
    u wanna help my faith build up
    or leave it to break up
    but for me, i can no longer stand up
    coz my soul u've blown up

    :/
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    mayb i read it wrong
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    wasnt exactly meant to offend u but if ur offended... good luck!
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    wats wit the negitivity?
    wat happened to gangstitity
    u say its all u've seen
    but cmon u not even in between
    soul is stolen, no mo serene
    speaken of which wheres -serene- ?
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    ayyo answers we have
    will they listen
    cancerous-
    a way of thinking thats suicidal,preposterous
    they dont hear us
    we are too backward they cant bare us
    playing with fire
    loss of belief in the deity up higher
    pornographic like tv shows
    lucifer strikes a pose-
    in their minds and the room for realization is closed
    bad influence influx
    problems they daily create they try to daily tackle, what a paradox!
    in hackles,it irritates me worse than chicken pox
    teenage pregnancy
    inadequate discrepancy?
    looks like no one is disagreeing..so whats their view?
    'its a taboo':enough!:
    Children who are illegaly born
    grow up and go about their ''business'' illicitly to make illegal carbon-copy kids that are reborn
    the cycle continues
    so what can we deduce
    its embedded in their parentage
    thats why the high percentage!!!!!!!!!
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    The cat
    sat on the mat

    it ate a rat
    and got more fat

    it's name was nat
    but changed to Matt

    once it saw a rat
    and gave it a pat
    charged it with v.a.t
    stole it's shiny hat
    and...

    continued to sit on his mat









    *clapping*




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    AWESOME CREATIVE ORGANICALLY RETARDED POEM
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    Bambii! nah lol dont worry am not gna steal that


    _______________________

    i won that fight, i lost that war
    i can still se my life walkin out that door
    who ever thought i'd se this world no mo
    got enough dear homiez i dont want no mo


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    safe to say i paved the way for u jokes to get paid today
    amazin u aint grateful now wat do i hav to say
    u shoulld be thinkin is ther a way for u to possibly repay
    i guess its jus they nd forever to sway away
    even if i back away nd forever on stayed away
    you'd say am hatin all the day everyday
    but homie u in the wrong cafe this wher ppl stay straight
    u forever on gna complain till u shade to grey

    ___

    lol my rhymes to haters never run out. i can rap to haters forever
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    rap till u seventy
    still no catchin me
    yo am n element
    knowin that intelligent
    i come from the future yet am ancient
    i both a begga nd a merchant
    follow my steps
    if u want success
    yo i was here first, am christopher columbus
    yall jus the pilgrims!



    k that was jus a refresh now back to real rhymes

    ran to two three guys wanna start sumthin
    they start hatin
    u start playin
    but now u gushin, ambulan rushin
    u to the hospital wita bad concussion
    paralyzed waist down gna hit yo spine
    nevermind that now u lucky to be alive
    ...

    ahh headache...heres wher i stop :enough!:
    beside it feels like am rappin wit myself nd killin this thread
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    what the hell this is gettin jarrin
    with the same old lyrical sparrin
    starrin wannabe's who shudnt even b carin
    stop flarin like u been starin
    death in the face like ur the last of a race
    facin extinction, man thats waste

    if ur readin this
    read it fast paced
    its a bro tryna keep things chaste
    but i keep gettin mazed, im mazed at things
    wannabe thugz for respect n blingz
    like they cool the way they messin
    wiv peoples lives raping n sh....
    u wanna be bad yeh? wanna be black?
    then go n get shot like tupac....
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    Its me again back on the board
    spamming on all LI ports
    rapping about all sorts
    unique stuff you dont like it then get stuffed
    or else you'll leave with your face puffed-
    up
    salam holla... wussup?
    sister you re name's true
    so keep true
    typing up raps all the way from the red,white and blue
    speaking live and well
    causing more buzz than a behive,locked in this cell-
    called earth
    from the time get... set ...ready BIRTH!
    So keep it real
    and hater keep you're eyes peeled
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    ^ that was awesom lol u kilt me! xcept i didnt get the first three lines ...r u dissin??? ( was at ibnabdulhakim... ) nd junior lol ur raps are awesome!


    my life aint for u entertainment
    u dont watch me while i live it
    i aint for ur amusement
    i dont care bout ur judgement

    try nd walk a mile in my shoes
    you'll se i aint here to amuse
    so understand this is who i am
    dont expect nutin less of me
    coz this gna stay like this till the death of me
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    I aint dead
    I aint done
    I aint scared
    I aint run
    But still i stand
    No matterr what people here i am
    No matter what remember
    I aint break
    I aint fold
    They hate me mo’ (so!)
    Yeah I know…
    Here I go


    Neva have ya seen in ya lifetime
    A more devine eastern rapper wit the flesh like mine
    Facin all kind of time
    But smile like im fine

    You let the blog sites and the magazines tell it
    Im sho to be in jail till 2027
    Rather see me in a cell in
    Stead of this new McLaren
    God'll take you through hell just to get you to heaven
    Grin and still bear it
    Win and still share it

    Life can change ya directions
    Even when you aint planned it
    All you can do is handle it
    The worst thing you could do is panic
    Use it to your advantage

    Make impossible possible
    Even when winnings illogical
    Losing's still far from optional
    Yeah they wanna see you shot up in the hospital
    But one life throw punches, block ya counter like a boxer
    Been locked inside mi casa too long



    sorry wayyy too long my brains malfunctioning today
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