Freestyle Poetry Thread

[Cabdullahi]

6:am: i prayed after a struggle to wake up
getting ready... my face barely meets a touch of make up
tieing the scarf feeling cagey...
but proudly standing here bravely
on my right hand i have the pin
encouraging myself that if i do it..its a win win-
-situation, the summation is i will evade another sin
and of my lord im afraid and so i have conviction within
the whisperer comes when the time is critical
but my faith is strong tho, his effect is minimal
'take it off,if you want boys??'
NO! ,..thanks for the ploy
im happily covered and not indiscreet
cus i know in the jungle...what happens to exposed meat
Vulturous men have free access to see!!
im still standing here
from the rushed thoughts i say 'bismillah' to get clearer
one final look at the mirror
i see Beauty and a girl so sweet far from being dissolute and bitter

[IbnAbdulHakim]

ok.. ok..
tell me wat u been smokin
got me chokin
so let judgedread speak
or maybe judge judy
eiva way im carryin out this duty

i'll make you see dat
criminal minds aint the way to be
criminal minds think God is unfair
coz they make THEIR OWN LIFE filled wiv hellish affairs

how can a man speak of hell
when in blissful dunya he dwells
such a man needs to get tapped
n slapped awake
none o u seen hell so dont gimme that
chattin crap like u kno the heat which eminates
a heat which never sedates contemplate such fury neva felt to date
i feel deep hate for eeejiots.. who think
they kno hell when they sink from their own freewill...

[truemuslim]

lol ok that last paragraph jus kiltttt!

[IbnAbdulHakim]

am i offendin?
im sry
i aint intendin that
im defendin my bruvs who keep things sikk for real
who place their love in the prophetic seal
coz i want THEM to be looked upto
i want them to be loved up by you
coz in them u can see wats tru
they struggle n strive
get locked for life
jus coz they fight for Allah
believe in jannah
get me?.. they... truelly gansta.. if u wanna use that term..

emulate em.. be like em... be loyal to em...
so u make Allah pleased wen u reach the end

[truemuslim]

omg u finally knew the real definition of gangsta!!
k i been kilttttt bad now so ....

[IbnAbdulHakim]

sh... why do i preach?
this mans unfit to teach
i swear mus b a hypocrite
forgiv me for chattin whilst i kno it
coz i kno i dont show it
my many mistakes
i dnt mean to be fake
i get ripped up inside when i wake
up to this fact..
infact its got an even deeper impact..
coz the rippin produces no tears..
what the.. this man feels no fears...

its not right am i even human..
or hav i alredy been taken by satan...

[Cabdullahi]

Yo im living my life like its my last day
to many mistakes the price for i have to pay
strict adherences
not so good perseverance's
i coulda said forget it! WE ONLY LIVE ONCE!
kuffar cats is lauging their head's of
their carry hard hearts but im keeping mines soft
they say im a cheap skate,i dont do wine,eat swine or haram steak
my short cummings i analyze and rake
cant be bothered about tom,dick and what jake say
my life i have to plan for, how will it pan?
too tempted its like not eating food in ramadan
its hard but pay day
will be my eternal heyday
i make dua for all the soon to be champs
we are all one big ummah,now thats a big fam

[truemuslim]

now is it that hard to understand if you listen
either die or go to jail, thats a hell of a decision
but how wrong can i do if my excuses aint important


When your back was against the wall remember where could you go,
Remember who helped you again like he helped you before,
When out his way to let you know that you ain't never alone,
Then disrespect you, you come get who until they left you alone,
They taught you how to be weak, he taught you how to be strong,
Taught you not to accept defeat you go all out if he gone,
But it ain't the same in the streets if u imagine him gone,
He in heaven in the thrown exactly were he belong,

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lol i really need to start rhymin reality :/

[sevgi]

am i offendin?
im sry
i aint intendin that
im defendin my bruvs who keep things sikk for real
who place their love in the prophetic seal
coz i want THEM to be looked upto
i want them to be loved up by you
coz in them u can see wats tru
they struggle n strive
get locked for life
jus coz they fight for Allah
believe in jannah
get me?.. they... truelly gansta.. if u wanna use that term..

emulate em.. be like em... be loyal to em...
so u make Allah pleased wen u reach the end

rap'y stuff really isnt my thing..im really not very hipp...

but i like your style..good going brother.

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ jizakAllah khair for your kind words

[true believer]

AnGaR





im angry, and now im alone





everyone i loved has left me and now i feel cold





bitter and angry





its not fair, why cant i be happy?!





i always feel angry





like theres no cure





i hate life, its hard and cold and lonely





why am i alone in this strugglin?





u cant feel wiz a cold heart





dats wat i done, i cut off my emotions





dat way no one can ever hurt me. so i'll be happy





but im still angry!





i feel like this angar has got a hard grip on me and its taking me down under.





and these stupied tears wont leave





and sadness is slowly killing me





is this all meant to be?





am i condemed to a life of uncertainty?





shakey ground with no support if u fall





cos we all fall in the end.





like broken souljahs.





like tears we all fall from grace.





i am angar and this is my fate.


my poem x

[true believer]

my imaan





ma imaan has hit a new low


i dont even feel muslim anymore


my hiqab is the only thing dat reminds me of allah...nothin more


when ppl feel of surahs i feel so cold....and distant


like its somthin different.


sometyms i think this was meant 4 me


there is no ease


only struggle 4 me


cos no ones cares and no one knows, the feelings i feel when i am alone


the guilt flows to me. and i almost drown in it....den i wake up and its another day, another day to waste.


commiting sins has been almost NATURAl 4 me.


i feel like shayatan has already won. maybe he has


or maybe he hasnt.....maybe when im older i'll change my habits


i commit sins SHAMELESSLY.


like its nothin new to me.


missing prayers has been normal


not even saying billah b4 eating


den only den when im alone, the guilt flows. flows thro me, like blood


shakin me, scaring me to no ends, and i vow to change


den i wake up....another day to waste.


random poem i made up...hope u guys liked peace xxxxx

[Cabdullahi]

^ wow good contribution

[Musaafirah]

You know something?
I would really love to hear the freestyle.Coz reading it isn't the same thing and you can't always get the essence of the rap. Like when a word is pronounced in a certain way or something.
(I hope am making sense...)

[Cabdullahi]

Sister how? are you suggesting we record it?

[Musaafirah]

I don't know. It's just to get the poets view, coz you'd have this kind of beat in your head which you know and link with, but other people may not quite get, you get me?
I wasn't say this is something you should do, just saying it'd sound cool.

[Cabdullahi]

I would love to record a joint but if i posted it ,id probably get banned

[Musaafirah]

Oh, what about if you get permission coz it is wholly original right? You wouldn't swear in 'em though would ya?

[Cabdullahi]

i wouldnt swear but do you think they will allow lyrics with beats and piano??

[Musaafirah]

Oh, I was talking about the rap itself not with music.
I doubt you'd be allowed to use music though.
Is there any need for music? I've hear some good raps without music...
Not commercial of course..

[Na7lah]

i wouldnt swear but do you think they will allow lyrics with beats and piano??

dnt think so but on that topic u dnt need instruments...