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May Allah have mercy on him رحمة الله عليه
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War
The child with eyes bright,
looked up at his father who is always Right.
Father dear, "Why is there war?" he asked with innocence.
His father all wise answered "To correct wrongs and make people act with sense?"
The child looked again and asked "Father dear is it wrong if the innocent we kill?"
The father answered "That seems to not be what we should instill."
Father Dear "Why is there war?"
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Umm Abdullah
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" Its sometimes better people don't get to know you ..
Cuz the more they know you , the less they understand & accept you ..
Alone is better , what say " - SRK
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May Allah have mercy on him رحمة الله عليه
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Re: War
format_quote Originally Posted by
Crazy_Lady
I just put down the words. The order of the words come from the life experiences Allaah(swt) has given me.
In the past most of my poetry was related to Viet-nam. However that is a phase of my life that I hope to keep in the past.
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Re: War
format_quote Originally Posted by
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The child with eyes bright,
looked up at his father who is always Right.
Father dear, "Why is there war?" he asked with innocence.
His father all wise answered "To correct wrongs and make people act with sense?"
The child looked again and asked "Father dear is it wrong if the innocent we kill?"
The father answered "That seems to not be what we should instill."
Father Dear "Why is there war?"
It is very good!
The 3rd and the 4th line are a bit off, they're too long and don't actually rhyme.
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Masha'Allah, it's really nice.
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subhanAllah
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Re: War
Your poem reminds me of this:
Sighh..I love Calvin and Hobbes.
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