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    Out of teenagerism

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    Its just compilation of short and crappy poems i did whilst on holiday please read all of them

    2ypjj2t 1 - Out of teenagerism





    1.blow to the nose

    you took a blow to your nose
    evilness arose
    last throw of the dice
    a stranger soul... break ice
    stay wise
    from bad to religious
    metamorphosis
    struggle for good synthesis
    different guise,lies
    hypnotized
    another blow to the nose
    backward step as far as faith goes
    quick prayer back on two feet
    hardened organ,few heartbeats
    a cycle, physical
    poor mind state
    no rebate
    birth, enjoyment, death
    and fate!




    2.vegetables

    the mind is a vegetation, so you need to keep focus
    insects that wreck good thoughts, LOOK! out for the locust
    god is the best of planners, so stay clean,perfect manners and avoid the acts that hold no benefit... avoid the bogus!

    don’t hold Allah’s rope by the thin strands
    feed the soul, cultivate the land
    even if it may seem boring and bland

    what corrected the previous generations
    will rectify us, we just need to make the obvious preparations
    the five Islamic pillars, starting with the declaration

    we are prisoners awaiting final judgment in this journey
    good deeds and memorization of scriptures are none but our only attorneys
    some will take heed and others say all of this is balonies
    but trust me not doing so is suicidal, like a distraught person on a tall building standing on the edge of the balcony


    to only drop into a sea of bubbling magma
    death is here with us, it sits next to you and me, you don’t necessarily die when you go through the stage of being a grandpa or a grandma
    our final perishing sticks to us like a birthmark or a scar and so that makes it an unavoidable stigma




    3.kulthum

    A Pulchritudinous smile
    fine white teeth you'd think they were smoothly carved with a file
    If there was any competition for tieing scarf she'd win by a mile
    cute giggle,a sweet laugh
    two round dimples
    sporadic pimples
    i could see the slight irritation,she still is confident
    rosy cheeks
    the way she conducts herself is neat
    An age where women with tight jeans look like aliens
    she chose to stick by her feminity,not a part of the new age promiscuity no! no mental ailment
    im just an avid admirer nothing more
    If anything she's the beauty,for her companionship i could implore
    but im the beast and the transformation to a prince is a fairytale nothing more
    kulthum a diamond under protective canvas
    I've been weak i couldnt help but look, my sinned eyes deserve sawdust




    4.struggle(bonus)

    To this odd place i came
    to a luxury i dreamt of coming to but it was incoherent with my thoughts,shame it was not the same


    A new way of living meant things were far from easy
    what is up?? everyone seems glumly and hurriedly busy and the behaviours are sleazy


    As a young innocent child there were things i shouldn't have been exposed to but nonetheless it has left its stain
    dark like a moonless night on my brain


    Peer pressure alongside the harmless tv box was more than enough to magnify
    ugly and inactive thoughts in my mind....demonic propelled urges would then as a result multiply


    ''when i grow up i will rid myself from the clinging spores of society''
    but the common saying above equates to i'll drop in the ocean and further persist that i would stay dry,i guess i lacked piety

    because the earth is the ocean of fitna
    it engulfs you in,whether black,white or yellow all are eligible ..it stretches out vile hands like the cartoon character edna

    its a phenomena absolutely incredible
    and through religion is the only way to stay impermeable

    in this mental battlefield
    the winner is he who sacrifice's that extra bit,and what a great recompense does it yield


    but unfortunately we proceed to be arrogant and proceed to treacherously lie
    despite knowing very well that our tongues,hands and feet will testify
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    Re: Out of teenagism

    small mistake teenagerism*
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    Re: Out of teenagism

    Good stuff! I like it.
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    "I spent thirty years learning manners, and I spent twenty years learning knowledge."

    ~ 'Abdullāh bin al-Mubārak (rahimahullah)
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    Re: Out of teenagerism

    nice brother
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    "O ye who belive! Endure, outdo all others in endurance, be ready, and observe your duty to Allah, in order that you may succeed"
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    Re: Out of teenagerism

    WOW!

    I'm llost for words. All of them are good but I liked kulthum the best!
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    Re: Out of teenagerism


    format_quote Originally Posted by Abdullahii View Post
    3.kulthum

    A Pulchritudinous smile
    fine white teeth you'd think they were smoothly carved with a file
    If there was any competition for tieing scarf she'd win by a mile
    cute giggle,a sweet laugh
    two round dimples
    sporadic pimples
    i could see the slight irritation,she still is confident
    rosy cheeks
    the way she conducts herself is neat
    An age where women with tight jeans look like aliens
    she chose to stick by her feminity,not a part of the new age promiscuity no! no mental ailment
    im just an avid admirer nothing more
    If anything she's the beauty,for her companionship i could implore
    but im the beast and the transformation to a prince is a fairytale nothing more
    kulthum a diamond under protective canvas
    I've been weak i couldnt help but look, my sinned eyes deserve sawdust
    i didnt read all these, but that one i did and i must advice *whilst trying to hold back anger * lower your gaze.
    akhee, when a sister covers modesty it is becuase she DOES NOT want to be stared at, so please respect that. if not for anything else, than for the sake of the sister who shields herself from the gazes of men, because she sure as hell knows she isn't covering no reason.

    and as a side thing as well: even if a woman-Muslim or otherwise-dresses immodestly, doesn't mean she wants to be stared at. and also sisters have brothers and dads and im pretty sure they wouldnt want their daughters/sisters to be looked at either. so how you would want your women-folk to be treated, you treat others' the same as well...
    Out of teenagerism

    ...desperate for husnul-khitaam...


    please make dua that Allah grants me a good end (to my life). please make dua that Allah guides me.

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    Re: Out of teenagerism

    format_quote Originally Posted by Umm ul-Shaheed View Post


    i didnt read all these, but that one i did and i must advice *whilst trying to hold back anger * lower your gaze.
    akhee, when a sister covers modesty it is becuase she DOES NOT want to be stared at, so please respect that. if not for anything else, than for the sake of the sister who shields herself from the gazes of men, because she sure as hell knows she isn't covering no reason.

    and as a side thing as well: even if a woman-Muslim or otherwise-dresses immodestly, doesn't mean she wants to be stared at. and also sisters have brothers and dads and im pretty sure they wouldnt want their daughters/sisters to be looked at either. so how you would want your women-folk to be treated, you treat others' the same as well...
    Sister i would just like to notify you that its just a poem,but lowering of the gaze is something so important its unimaginable...so thanks for the valuable reminder
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    Re: Out of teenagerism

    cool
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    ” إن الأمة التي تحسن صناعة الموت توهب لها الحياة”

    正直・・・微妙
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    Re: Out of teenagerism

    you're good with words. Enjoyed the poems, akhi.
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    Re: Out of teenagerism

    i couldnt be botherd to hightlight da second one cos it was hurtin ma eyes but da rest were nice. well done
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