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  • Poem 2

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  • Poem 3

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  • Poem 4

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  • Poem 5

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  • Poem 6

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    *Poetry Contest - The Poems*

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    Votes are public, u have three days to vote, please do not vote ur own entry or u will succeed in fishing me off. Thank you very much.

    JazakAllah khayr to all the entrants for taking the time to write, all the entries are amazing masha'Allah. Please dont post in this thread, just vote...

    And in no particular order....
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    Re: *Poetry Contest - The Poems*

    Poem 1

    Hardship and Ease


    It’s like a cycle that never wants to end
    Always the same story never seems to change
    How much of her precious tears has she shed?
    1, 5 ,10 litres? These figures don't even compare!
    So many years have gone, a difference can’t be seen
    She makes a compromise and accepts it’s her fate
    The heart has gone ice cold, the tears have all froze
    Imaan hits its lowest point, the haq is questioned
    Back has turned ... why seems to be the only word
    She stands alone, struggling to cope
    What is she looking for? Something is missing
    Who does she turn to when she has no one? ....

    ... It's the same situation but perception changes
    She soon realises the purpose of living
    Is it more worth being rewarded in the duniya or akhirah?
    Remembering Allah down goes her forehead
    Hands raise to the Almighty and sincere duaa are made
    Allah becomes her strength and His words becomes her hope
    How can she deny the truth: “with hardship indeed there is ease” ?
    Impossible is beginning to look possible, Light can be seen at the end of the tunnel
    She smiles and locks away all the pain, no one will ever know her inner struggle
    Trust has been restored, sabr has always been maintained
    I pray that insha’Allah the beauties of Jannat for her await.

    Ameen

    Surah Al-Inshirah (Solace) 94:6-8
    Surely with hardship there is ease.
    with hardship indeed there is ease.
    So when you are free, work diligently
    and turn to your Lord with all your love.
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    Poem 2

    Our silent deal

    Breaking the silence to reach you.
    You really aren’t that far away...
    And if I’m lucky sometimes I feel you
    In and around me- breaking me free


    There’s a passion in that mat
    When it’s 3am and no one knows
    Who knows…
    Where my mind goes…
    As I lose myself in the bliss of joining you in your domain


    There’s a power in your light...
    It draws me away
    To a place where they can’t hurt me
    And you won’t hate me if I stay.


    All I fear is your absence
    All I feel is your essence
    All I want is your presence
    In the emptiness that is me.
    You made me weak but im happy
    Knowing that you are mercy
    To those who cannot run it alone…
    …who are accident-prone
    …whose hearts have turned to stone


    Yes, you are mercy
    And that is all I believe
    That is all I need
    To smile in the morning,
    Go to sleep at night,
    Exhale that breathe and
    Put up with this fight.


    You will not leave me alone,
    It’s our silent deal…
    You promised me when you made me
    And nothing since has been real.


    This world, my world, is coming to an end
    The time when people pretend and
    have hands they do not lend.
    It’s a time where we take up everything,
    Yet we make up nothing.
    To breathe is one thing, to live is another.
    To know is one thing, to believe is his hikmah.


    Let there be no questions, no answers, no sight.
    Let there be no voice, no hand, no light.
    Who needs those when all you need to believe,
    Is the truth the sun carries
    As it reaches the trees…
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    Poem 3

    Sincerity

    i see him in the distance looking so pleased
    a face shining with pleasure and ease
    easy to approach, gentle in speech
    inspirational..
    as though nothing is out of his reach.

    with no knowledge, i speak a word or two
    "Brother, ive never met anyone as amazing as you"
    he tries to smile as his eyes well up in tears,
    and i can feel on his shoulders a mountain of fears..

    and i wish for a second that i hadnt spoken
    as i know just aswell that i wasnt mistaken
    for i heard that brother whisper inside
    "My lord forgive me.. for that which i hide..."
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    Poem 4

    On her respected forehead he placed his lips
    Hugged her goodbye, and wiped her tears

    Reassuring her she needed not to grieve,
    on his comfortable life, he turned his back, and farewelled it readily

    Fearing naught, he accepted unpredictable strife
    Like he king of the jungle he stood his ground, strong in might

    In warning to the invader of his territory, he angrily growled
    Positioning his paws, he stared left and right, ready to pounce

    Fending off the invader he easily achieved
    Protecting his Pride, he fought on heroically

    But then

    But then a noise rang through the air
    As a bullest whistled by, aimed for its victim

    Blood poured, a last growl sounded
    His soul ever alive, yet his body had expired

    And thus the kind of the jungle happily accepted his destiny
    As he was entered into the realm of True Reality

    Not a care in the world had he had when buried in a ditch
    Nay, so tranquil he looked as he was granted his inner most wishes

    His face shone like light, as if witnessing something beyond his dreams
    A smile played on his lips as he enjoyed the delight of eternity

    A concession to the terrors of a Great Day he was given
    In the heart of a green bird he took residence

    Intersession awarded, grievance removed
    A reassured loved one, a well earned promise, fulfilled
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    Poem 5

    Rhythmic Statement

    Sometimes its hard to accept
    what my radar intercepts
    so when its outside i rock my boots
    admiring the ceramics ,listening to quran for a boost-
    when spiritual development has become so static-
    i revitalize my natural foundational roots
    Its hard when democracy is ruling the roost
    it means little or no morality
    that means "common entertainment"
    that draws you to sex,drugs and apostasy to make it a "common sentiment"
    it merely means more unwanted unborn dead babies that lay bloody gouged out by ****ty ladies
    In this cruel terrain its a must i lower my gaze
    to attain the divine shade
    on a day when criminals will be set ablaze
    i know its a big fat duty
    but i'll have to ignore ms fat booty
    may my heart never be put on the guillotine
    by the 21st century maniac girl who wears lipstick maybelline
    and if i fall for devilish ways then may i never be serene.
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    Poem 6

    Into This World

    I’m born
    A clinging form
    Between water and clay
    Wilt Thou release me forth
    Into this world?

    I came forth
    And testified
    But I now forget what my lips once spoke
    Betwixt that glimmering Hope
    And the glamour of this world

    I seek one to reflect my embrace
    But find empty vessels
    And the stone turns
    Black, blacker, blackened
    Until I am quarantined inside

    Wilt Thou release me forth
    From this quarantine?

    I find a vessel
    Its name is Escape
    And I drink from it
    Until I am without feeling
    But, neigh - the vessel drinks me!

    So alone, so cold!
    Falling through time and space
    Trapped inside his mind
    There is no longer peace for him
    In this world

    Existence unravelling
    Adrift in seas without end
    But the one trapped inside
    Cries out from the depths of darkness
    ‘Save me!’

    And he awakens to see the dawn
    With eyes anew
    And embraces those who saved him
    And he stumbles out into the light in their embrace
    Like an old man, reborn

    And he sees himself mirrored
    As an ageless spectre
    Who enquires, ‘Where art that vessel, O Travellers?’
    And they reply to him, ‘It is that way, O Vagrant’
    For that is the way of he who is lost

    And he bids farewell
    To that past
    And he cries forth openly
    Repentant to those whom he betrayed
    And the days are long

    And he remembers those words he spoke
    In a time removed
    And he utters them anew
    And he repents
    And the days are long

    Wandering
    A stranger in a strange land
    He remembers laughter
    And childhood
    And the days become lessened

    And he returns to his home
    And he begins again
    For now he is the Lord’s vessel
    Moving forth
    Into this world
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    Poem 7

    My Divine Saviour

    Drowning in a sea of loneliness,
    The force of death sucking me under.
    The waves of darkness go on for eternity,
    And I am about to be pulled asunder.

    Then comes shining a ray happiness,
    Its brightness opening up my eyes.
    Its beauty stops me from being swallowed into the darkness--
    The fearsome descent halted to my surprise.

    My mind is no longer immersed in the black waves
    The light the most beautiful thing I could find
    Its warmth causes my soul to shed its restlessness.
    I want to take it and make it mine.

    My body is dragged out from the depths of hatred
    My heart is beating faster, I don’t understand!
    As I get closer to my divine savior.
    I feel my body hit dry land.

    Who could have saved me from perpetual self-dread?
    Who could have saved me when I was dead?
    Only a cry can be heard from my creator;
    A cry that disperses all woe.

    "Alhamdulillah!" I shout back,
    As I realize who my savior is to be.
    It turns my pliable soul into a solid stone of purity.
    I have found my salvation,
    I pledge my allegiance always.
    "Alhamdulillah! My Rabb," I say, bowing in peaceful submission.
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    Re: *Poetry Contest - The Poems*

    Sweet tasting mouldy old green cheese
    a burning spoonfull of tuna
    and a diamond encrusted pudding
    all have nothing in common

    People shouldn't fart
    in public places no less
    without waiting to see if the area's clear
    at least

    You close your eyes
    you miss the deadline
    you dread the outcome
    oh, precious sight

    Never again
    blue violets
    and red roses
    and sweet sugar

    There we have it
    a remarkable piece of literature
    of Einsteinic proportions
    awaiting the nobel peace prize for poetic genius
    and a final line to break the pattern
    dot dot dot

    Feel free to vote now insha'Allah

    P.S The above entry isnt included in the contest, just a lil bit of light humour
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    jazakillah khair hafsah for givin us permission to speak!!

    masha'allah all the poems are so good. like really deep. i especially like the one about mouldy old green cheese... how long is the poll up for?
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    format_quote Originally Posted by ajnabee View Post


    jazakillah khair hafsah for givin us permission to speak!!

    masha'allah all the poems are so good. like really deep. i especially like the one about mouldy old green cheese... how long is the poll up for?
    Wa'alaykum As-Salam

    Anything for you dude yeh that one is, ahem, kool?

    Poll is open for 3 days, will close on Fri at 3.30pm'ish I'm sure
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    i think i know which one im voting for, one REALLY impressed me mashAllah
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    Re: *Poetry Contest - The Poems*

    format_quote Originally Posted by Hafsah View Post
    Wa'alaykum As-Salam

    Anything for you dude yeh that one is, ahem, kool?

    Poll is open for 3 days, will close on Fri at 3.30pm'ish I'm sure
    i dunno which one to vote forrrrrr... im torn between two that really "spoke" to me .
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    Vote for the one that 'speaks' loudest? :><:
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    k voted

    im a sucker for any poetry about shuhadaa
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    Re: *Poetry Contest - The Poems*

    Well done everyone, mashaAllah.

    I kinda skipped thru all of them (mashaAllah) but there was one in particular that strucke a chord wit me.
    Last edited by Ansariyah; 11-10-2009 at 10:07 PM.
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    format_quote Originally Posted by IbnAbdulHakim View Post
    k voted

    im a sucker for any poetry about shuhadaa
    raaa thats one of the ones that "spoke" to me. masha'allah, it's so heart-warming.
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    ^ yeah, it took me out of this world

    and thats always what i look for in poetry lol
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    i like 1 and 3...
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    dang... why cant you vote for 2...

    btw, i think the voting should be for 5 days...
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