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    a ryhme that i made,
    hope you like it....

    Young Muslim Male...

    im gonna tell you a tale,
    about a young muslim male,
    hes a prisoner n hes stuck in a jail,
    this world is a prison so hes really on bail,
    hes knos its a test he dont wanna fail,
    he thinks about his deeds getting put on that scale,
    hes so worried its makin him pale,
    right to the very tip of his finger nail,
    he tryin to stay on the straight dont wanna derail,
    sooner or later he'll return to his lord,
    he realises this aint his final abode,
    everyday he goes through a phase,
    where he reminds himself to lower his gaze,
    hes battling against the evil of his soul,
    like as if hes juggling with hot charcoal,
    tryin 2 control his desires,
    cus he dont wanna be in those fires,
    full of hypocrites and liars,

    you can read his life like a book,
    so even if you even took,
    the time to have a look,
    turning another page,
    his life is goin through another stage,
    one minute hes happy the next hes in rage,
    chapter to chapter,
    goin from tears to laughter
    only thing hes after,
    is a better hereafter,
    on this earth,
    where he was given birth,
    hes looking around thinking this its a illusion,
    listening to everything thinking its a delusion,
    tryin to clear his mind of this materialistic pollution,
    slowly but surely,
    his friends are calling him holy,
    they seein a change,
    cus he following the sunnah to them its strange,
    hes the same person with the same heart and intent,
    he jus realises its time to repent,
    before its too late.
    he trys to prostrate,
    and ask for forgiveness when he supplicates,

    tryin to stay true and sincere,
    to the one that everyone should fear,
    deep down from the bottom of his heart,
    right from the very start,
    he knew one day he will depart,
    his death he will meet,
    he'll be wrapped around 2 white sheet,
    in his grave he doesnt wanna get beat,
    with that sorching heat,
    so hes hoping the angels come with glad tidings when they greet,
    saying oh peace be with you,
    a real struggle you've been through,
    u finally made it in one piece,
    dont worry now you got eternity full of peace...
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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Why didn't you enter the poetry contest?



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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Quote Originally Posted by greenhill View Post
    Why didn't you enter the poetry contest?


    sent a PM but got no reply lol

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    ^ Maybe the host hasn't seen your message yet? I am sure you can participate in the competition if you have a poem (but the above one cannot be used!).
    Young Muslim Male...




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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Quote Originally Posted by Muhammad View Post


    ^ Maybe the host hasn't seen your message yet? I am sure you can participate in the competition if you have a poem (but the above one cannot be used!).
    yea its not a problem brother

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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Quote Originally Posted by Simply_Logical View Post
    sent a PM but got no reply lol
    You pm'd faithandpeace?

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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Quote Originally Posted by greenhill View Post


    You pm'd faithandpeace?
    yea, just got a reply...
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    Young Muslim Male...

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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Cool bruv

    But may I give you a suggestion?

    The cockney word 'gonna' makes it sound unsophisticated. Maybe you should think of using the Queens English 'going to' next time?
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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Quote Originally Posted by Bhai View Post
    Cool bruv

    But may I give you a suggestion?

    The cockney word 'gonna' makes it sound unsophisticated. Maybe you should think of using the Queens English 'going to' next time?
    sure ill take that on board akhi

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    Re: Young Muslim Male...



    Brilliant maa shaa Allah , poetry like this comes straight from the heart
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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

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    Brilliant maa shaa Allah , poetry like this comes straight from the heart
    thanks sister JazakAllah Khayran

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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Mashaallah... Excellent....

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    Re: Young Muslim Male...

    Quote Originally Posted by Simply_Logical View Post


    a ryhme that i made,
    hope you like it....

    Young Muslim Male...

    im gonna tell you a tale,
    about a young muslim male,
    hes a prisoner n hes stuck in a jail,
    this world is a prison so hes really on bail,
    hes knos its a test he dont wanna fail,
    he thinks about his deeds getting put on that scale,
    hes so worried its makin him pale,
    right to the very tip of his finger nail,
    he tryin to stay on the straight dont wanna derail,
    sooner or later he'll return to his lord,
    he realises this aint his final abode,
    everyday he goes through a phase,
    where he reminds himself to lower his gaze,
    hes battling against the evil of his soul,
    like as if hes juggling with hot charcoal,
    tryin 2 control his desires,
    cus he dont wanna be in those fires,
    full of hypocrites and liars,

    you can read his life like a book,
    so even if you even took,
    the time to have a look,
    turning another page,
    his life is goin through another stage,
    one minute hes happy the next hes in rage,
    chapter to chapter,
    goin from tears to laughter
    only thing hes after,
    is a better hereafter,
    on this earth,
    where he was given birth,
    hes looking around thinking this its a illusion,
    listening to everything thinking its a delusion,
    tryin to clear his mind of this materialistic pollution,
    slowly but surely,
    his friends are calling him holy,
    they seein a change,
    cus he following the sunnah to them its strange,
    hes the same person with the same heart and intent,
    he jus realises its time to repent,
    before its too late.
    he trys to prostrate,
    and ask for forgiveness when he supplicates,

    tryin to stay true and sincere,
    to the one that everyone should fear,
    deep down from the bottom of his heart,
    right from the very start,
    he knew one day he will depart,
    his death he will meet,
    he'll be wrapped around 2 white sheet,
    in his grave he doesnt wanna get beat,
    with that sorching heat,
    so hes hoping the angels come with glad tidings when they greet,
    saying oh peace be with you,
    a real struggle you've been through,
    u finally made it in one piece,
    dont worry now you got eternity full of peace...
    v good effort I appreciate it.
    Young Muslim Male...



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