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    VERY OLD love poem.....

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    that I wrote on July 13, 2015, according to my computer...

    tell me what you think...

    Shall I entrust you with my heart and key
    As your eyes do, promise, solace and warmth
    Or will you let me down and let me be
    As your lips’ crease itself bring pleasure forth

    Or shall I wait and wait with lover’s strength
    Thy shining name bring forth a gushing stream
    Your spark’ling name was life which grew in length
    And stars lie outshined by lovely eyes that beamed

    For I know I’d hold you in, rad’iant rose
    Friend of early times who taught love to me
    My sweet friend of whom I had rightly chose
    Who I carry, in rad’iant sight, I see

    I know you as my secret first, friend to bloom
    You are a part of me in mem’ry room
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    Re: VERY OLD love poem.....

    format_quote Originally Posted by Mustafa16 View Post
    that I wrote on July 13, 2015, according to my computer...

    tell me what you think...

    Shall I entrust you with my heart and key
    As your eyes do, promise, solace and warmth
    Or will you let me down and let me be
    As your lips’ crease itself bring pleasure forth

    Or shall I wait and wait with lover’s strength
    Thy shining name bring forth a gushing stream
    Your spark’ling name was life which grew in length
    And stars lie outshined by lovely eyes that beamed

    For I know I’d hold you in, rad’iant rose
    Friend of early times who taught love to me
    My sweet friend of whom I had rightly chose
    Who I carry, in rad’iant sight, I see

    I know you as my secret first, friend to bloom
    You are a part of me in mem’ry room
    Take it easy, akhi...

    No love poems till after you get married.

    You write well, though.

    But don't think on such things. No good in it.
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    VERY OLD love poem.....

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