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    Any dream will do

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    Bismillah

    I close my eyes

    See for certain
    Burnt crops resurfacing
    Old material recycling
    Moonwalking through everything
    Daisies picked out by little children
    She comes running towards my arms
    Her fears indifferent
    Her heart beat incognisant
    shoulders cropping at her heartiness
    swing her through the tropical ponds
    sings merrily through my enchantment
    The fishes jump up with the occasion
    birds join in uncharted and chirping
    night not ending,she fears the uncouthness
    The screams , the woods, big tree projects
    The axes, the saws, the timber that hit the deck
    Love actually calming her down a little
    She closes her eyes, the night stands still
    The suffering, the rememberance
    The twirling thoughts of her sheltered existence
    The dawn arrives on the horizon
    She opens her eyes, still blind to the cloudy skies
    overcast skys, still radiating, maleficent
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    Re: Any dream will do

    You know that doesn't rhyme?

    How do u want it?
    How do u feel?
    .......
    I'm 4 real....
    Last edited by Abz2000; 06-02-2019 at 12:41 PM.
    Any dream will do













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    Re: Any dream will do

    Pseudo intellectual.
    Moving chess with the factual.
    Except I never really met with you.
    Holding breath when I be next to you.

    Living in the subliminal.
    Lucid dreaming, thought scheming, up on one finger, down on the other.
    Too jaded to think sister or brother.

    Weakness is criminal when the next move is dictated.
    You could live with my sins but im keen to be faded.
    No actor, fictionless prose.

    Handed me a pen but I already done froze.
    Inception in the mind followed by reality although I do it backwards so who gets the duality.
    Never really played the game or changed it up for tomorrow.

    Living today like its borrowed ain't my scene.
    Crying fake tears ain't what I'm about.

    So we plan this dream to do without.

    The fool moves so awkwardly, but make it real and dont spare a thought for me.

    Freedom from a mind that didnt exist.
    Keeping it in check is like a boast for me, who's counting its finishes and who did the most for me.
    Missed answers confess my stupidity, but I dream in technicolor and feel quite vividly.

    I could get lost in the moment.

    But..Would just feel insincere about it.

    Pseudo intellectual, read up and read down.
    Put the pen in my hand..

    But who wrote me now?



    ...I call this one, an incomplete understanding of living with God.

    If only I could write something positive.

    It was all a dream, but one wants to get back to reality..

    And so, chasing one or the other feels like insincerity.. ?insanity?


    ...Waiting for the dream team to turn up.. and hoping not to wrong ourselves.

    But if it only ever was about winning and losing you might aswell read it again.
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    Re: Any dream will do

    If I have to have an aim let it be you
    if I can have a goal let it be you
    if I have to claim let it be for you
    if I have to fall let me still be yours
    the scheming, the dreaming
    The council numbers for noise pollution
    the race the hair the tower the lair
    the coloured teacups at the funfair
    the children , the fire
    the helicopter , the big foot prints
    the nightingale that sings
    narcistic but I was winning
    your echo , your singing
    i lost the game in a blink
    Fanatic to your blanking
    years of wandering through lost souls
    Whirling away like an Australian tornado
    awoke to every bird that sings
    lamenting your lost foot prints
    Studying your every move hidden
    realising your true destination
    knowing you more but I can’t go like this
    lets end the game and be sincere
    not keen to bring you in fear
    knowing I can only keep you in a lions den
    i want an amurous time without the flowers
    without the note and the hidden messages
    lets restart , let our love ruminate the spring
    two souls without the tip toes,kindred roles
    Celebrate wit antenna on top of the chimney
    No signal interference,no crackling or worries
    like a spiders web in a cave,u and me forever

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    Re: Any dream will do

    Quote Originally Posted by Abz2000 View Post
    You know that doesn't rhyme?

    How do u want it?
    How do u feel?
    .......
    I'm 4 real....
    Its half rhymes

    - - - Updated - - -

    If I have to have an aim let it be u
    if I can have a goal let it be u
    if I have to claim let it be for u
    if I have to fall let me still be urs
    the scheming, the dreaming
    The council numbers for noise pollution
    the race the hair the tower the lair
    the coloured teacups at the funfair
    the children , the fire
    the helicopter , the big foot prints
    the nightingale that sings
    narcistic but I was winning
    Ur echo , your singing
    i lost the game in a blink
    Fanal to your blanking
    years of wandering through lost souls
    Whirling away like an Australian tornado
    awoke to every bird that sings
    lamenting your lost foot prints
    Studying your every move hidden
    realising your true destination
    knowing you more but I can’t go like this
    lets end the game and be sincere
    not keen to bring you in fear
    knowing I can only keep you in a lions den
    i want an amurous time without the flowers
    without the note and the hidden messages
    lets restart , let our spirits ruminate the spring
    two souls without the tip toes,kindred roles
    Celebrate wit antenna on top of the chimney
    No signal interference,no crackling or worries
    like a spiders web in a cave,u and me forever

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    Re: Any dream will do

    Why did u lose?
    Any dream will do













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    Re: Any dream will do

    Quote Originally Posted by Abz2000 View Post
    Why did u lose?
    Not sure bro



    Keep stoning the devil until he’s transfixed
    frozen with his head hanging onto his chin
    if it takes being blind to realise the gift of repenting from sin
    Defintely wrap your scarf around my head
    Retrace the steps to the walls made of choclate
    my lord , my rabb, my lord, my
    love
    i come to thee in night prayer with nothing but love
    asunder thine mountains , let all bow down to you above
    a kid , tantalised by doom and gloom
    dare to be wise they said , dare to know
    now I keep holding on to the bannister by a single thread loom
    rescue me my lord for they do not know
    forgive me lord for I am still fighting within
    let the trumpet blow after you have made me one of your gracious servants
    I am walking to you my lord with every step

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    Re: Any dream will do

    Bismillah
    spinning around like a totem nearing its end
    deep trance , is this a tunnel or a cave
    engrossed so deep I can feel ur face my beloved
    my palms touching your perfect face on the most beautiful night
    my beloved vivisited me in my dream but my totems not spinning and I’m drenched hairs on my neck standing up with pinched skin

    you give me a novel , the daily times
    my hand glances over it ,
    my inner balance collapsing
    the more i ransack your history I discover my own
    your dark ages may be over but I can still remember mine
    jumping from boredom to extinction
    computer games have their own little prairies
    doctors notes for rock bottom
    glandular fever keeping away from summer dairy
    Deliberations the biggest passtime
    no knowing what sock to start on
    discreet enough to distinguish bad times
    Cousin coming over with his motorbike
    cousin coming over with his motorbike
    like gulliver with an even faster horse
    beating the traffic like a juggernaut
    trimming before we get stopped and searched
    he drops me off six in the morning
    just before time for bed and breakfast
    i remember the fun we had singing
    Jumping from rock to stone
    my mind moves faster than the rest of me
    most the time i switch off in search of contemplation
    breathe in ,breathe out, passively
    powder reaches the back of my throat
    say your name three times
    I submit to you and exalt your praises


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    Re: Any dream will do

    السلام عليكم

    Quote Originally Posted by Abz2000 View Post
    You know that doesn't rhyme?
    Poems don't have to rhyme.There are non-rhyming poems. The free verse.

    السلام عليكم
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    Re: Any dream will do

    I have a dream, that one day little white kids and black kids and every other kid will say Salaam to their elders and respect them.... I have a dream that all colours and races of people come together as one under the banner of ISLAM. I've seen it from the mountain top, not.

    Ameen summa Ameen!

    My first attempt at poetry guys no one tell the MLK foundation or they'll sue me...
    Last edited by Ahmed.; 10-13-2019 at 06:33 PM.
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    Re: Any dream will do

    The man at the bottom prays to the man above
    the man doing well positions himself above
    so many stones already gravitated to the ground
    big brother using video technology while in a cast under the ministry of sound
    so many sisters lost to game
    searching for answers they aint found
    So many brothers still on the same deliver
    spent so much time away now they brazen with silver
    I never found the prize to merlin when looking at the Coca Cola bottle wrapper in the mirror
    never found the clue to elevate me to the next round of the Cadbury’s give away voucher
    it’s easy to give up vices but harder to let go of yourself even if u start off vice versa
    its easy to pray as a believer but harder to pray as a sinner
    easier to cry as a witness but harder to cry as a criminal
    the x’s and the y’s lead me back to heaven
    mountains on earth still to be found
    my tears to my lord are a drop in the ocean
    so many withering bodies still crying out Ahad
    my joints can still heal quick, my eyes are oblivious
    Ahmed bukhatir looking out the windows of a bus
    When I think of life sure I think of sad times as well as the happy
    but mainly I thank my lord for all the times he saved me



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    Re: Any dream will do

    Quote Originally Posted by Ahmed. View Post
    I have a dream, that one day little white kids and black kids and every other kid will say Salaam to their elders and respect them.... I have a dream that all colours and races of people come together as one under the banner of ISLAM. I've seen it from the mountain top, not.

    My first attempt at poetry guys no one tell the MLK foundation or they'll sue me...
    LOL this was a joke poem and I got a like for it hip hip horray!!!

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    Re: Any dream will do

    Quote Originally Posted by Ahmed. View Post
    LOL this was a joke poem and I got a like for it hip hip horray!!!
    Assalam o Alaikum rahamutullahi wa barakuthu brother.

    No this is good poem. Children should be taught good manner and greet salaam to people.

    JazakAllah khair
    Any dream will do

    Please don't rep me or like my posts


    I beg Allah peace for us and for you.

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    Re: Any dream will do

    Sawak the lady who will marry you will be so lucky,you will make romantic poems all the time...you have a gift..good good bro

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    Re: Any dream will do

    hi guys,

    Just a quick explanation of my delight at the 'like' (he hee that initself was a rhyming poetry line )

    It's good to chill out at times and have a bit of fun and joke as it's sunnah!

    And @taha_ Jzk brother yes the meanings good but I copied MLK as a joke

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    Re: Any dream will do

    The whirling man salivating at images of heaven
    The role of the fruit seller without one of the apples in his wheelbarrow
    The deen trying to teach online just as thorough
    The sweet smell of jasmine fragrances
    Caught ahead with the summer breeze
    The man with the saw making a doll house for his child as he wheezes
    The fresh smell of fruits captivating the orchard
    The startled man attacked by the mountain lion landing with a thud
    The tears of a man while in connection with his lord
    Oh lord rescue me when I fall from the window
    When I fall down the stairs onto wooden floors
    Mold me without the interference of ultra violet
    Make my tears as sincere as my pledge sets
    Make my remorse as wet as my arms
    Wash my sins as I spit out decayed blood
    Hold me and my shadow at night from harm
    Whisper into these ears of mine
    Promise me the sweet taste of wine
    You can make me pure again

    - - - Updated - - -

    So far away ideally to high to fly
    Like a bird at 5am starting the day
    Clueless maybe too wrecked to stay
    The minarets getting in the way
    Still alive, we hear and we obey
    Covid keeping us back from the melee
    Blogging away like online celebrities
    On the pyre, too toxic to be buried
    He finally comes home after quarantine
    His head spinning, his body's numb
    Basket or a cage, covid the new plague
    Tagging in New members via online escapes
    Hide and seek, flight or fight, hibernating floats
    ​​​The shade under the trees a resting abode
    Rotten corpses lie under portugese plantations
    Masks compulsory fighting weak immune systems

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    Re: Any dream will do

    Very nice indeed --much to think about here!


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