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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
repentence requires sincerity
so make sure you do it with clarity
theres no parity
from Allahs chastity
its a crime to even want to flee
from him, ar-rahmaan, the almighty!
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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lol thats good bro but the rhmyer in me's died
In attaining Allah's forgiveness I think Ima spend my time
this world is nothing, just the blinking of an eye,
a non-existent future bro, a regretfull sigh...
lol no i just thought the meaning to the last rhyme was extremely deep. made me think therefore i exclaimed "mashaAllah"
^^ hehe i know bhai...juz kiddin..
a word said to another
a smile to a brother
yesterdays snow ( )
and the things we know
yo they're all gonna go but we choose to ignore
only waking up when death is at the door...
but what you gonna do then, wen there's not time to repent?
are you from amongst the pious..are you really innoCENT?
innocent, hah far from it
commiting sins is getting plutonic
out of hand and dangerous at fast rates like super sonic
its amazing! isnt it? when we think about it!
the amount of plunges we take yet Allah makes us rise
he could have easily let us fall to our demise
if only humanity realised that Allah is truelly the only one to be cherished...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Just saw the rep bro, (Ameen) the Du'aa goes back to you
it's amazing wot we overlook yet we act as tho we in wudhu...
and by that I mean...we think we're on the path, on the straight and narrow
when we see people hurtin we know how to display the sorrow
but wot bout our deeds, dont we need to build em up?
we think our duties are complete when we put some money in the cup (Sadaqah)
but thats isnt the case..its each man (or woman) for himself
practise Jahad of the nafs and purify your wealth...
jihad un nafs is important yes
but what about our brothers and sisters gettin shot in the chest?
what about our young muslims who have no food in their breasts?
they oppressed so jihad un nafs i shall do wiv every breath
until death inshaAllah but jihad fisabillilah cant be forgotten
when its our babies that the kuffar have trodden
it saddens me to see that our brothers are begetting
children who dont help the ummah in its tragedy...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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we always have had ups && downs
but we always hear sounds
never know who's there whats there
but your heart is bare
am telling you right here && now you need a change
by REding your all point of veiw you gota reange
why don't yh wana be ma side time is flyin sudennly am bounic don't see you don't make don't make lose da faith in me
ROFL!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAH hahaha snowy in da house eh? lol
How might I tell you what you meant ta me?
All a did both night && Day was i love you
Rulers of my kingdom && My heart
Like gods at last you claimed my painful breath,
Opening the door to mystery,
The final gift of all the gifts you gave me,
Taking what I could no longer give you
Even if a treid wiv all mi heart
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