[MODERATOR'S NOTE: This post has been moved to the front of the thread to show how the thread is now being used].
Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
again i think i'll swiftly leave this thread leave it to the pro's....run along Haroon
I had a wrestle with an alligator, i had a tussle with a whale, I handcuffed lightning, thrown thunder in jail! Only last week i murdered a rock, injured a stone, hospitalised a brick, im so mean i make medicine sick
"If you even dream of beating me you'd better wake up and apologise!"
kay:
and it gets deeper
at times i feel like taking a leaper
but shaytaan comes like a seaper
seaping inside destroyin me like a reaper
i dont roll up hate you n your rizzler
know your waste but im a bit busier
strivin for haq inshaAllah gettin happier
recitin the quran straight 2 ur ear
i dont really kno how to freestyle
movin my fingers faster then miles
i dont care i wanna give dawah
thats the road to the power
so dont be sour brother
understand that with ibadah you'll get further
stop slippin cuziiin, make a move before i start dissin cuziiin,
need to realise that this aint nothiiin !
assalamu alaikum, mods may edit if they feel its necessary inshaAllah
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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and i notice that you been slacking
with your boyz round da corner nuckles cracking
im sry to say you need a real smacking
at least this way u wake up to one thing
if u gota mother
get bak home n tell her you love her
giv her a hug, giv her a kiss
let her kno shes the one you miss
coz bro, thats wat matta'z you kno
end of the day to Allah we go
so spend your days the right way
forget the fightin that is the shyte way
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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i dunno, if they mean freestyle then thats what im doing right now. If they mean diss each other (MC battle) then its unislamic lol
not exactly diss each other...as in someone says a topic and mentions a certain amount of lines and allocates certain time...and two people post their own 'freestylr writing' and the one who set the thing chooses the winner...its not really what you would call 'diss each other'
I am ill give it my best u start ill finish LOLLLL kay:
i cannot decide on a topic for myself since if i do, id obviously choose one that i can write better about...thus it wouldnt be fair...if there is another competitor, you and that other person may write...i can give the topic and the certain amunt of lines that you must write...
i cannot decide on a topic for myself since if i do, id obviously choose one that i can write better about...thus it wouldnt be fair...if there is another competitor, you and that other person may write...i can give the topic and the certain amunt of lines that you must write...
a seed planted deep in my mothers womb
i was there, a lifeless piece
until i was breathed upon...
my roots and stem beginning to grow
i felt them...they would grow strong and healthy....oneday
my brain isnt working properly sorry....last day of school...so yeah
a seed planted deep in my mothers womb
i was there, a lifeless piece
until i was breathed upon...
my roots and stem beginning to grow
i felt them...they would grow strong and healthy....oneday
my brain isnt working properly sorry....last day of school...so yeah
Nice here goes mine, Ahem Ahem.....
U where a seed i was a baby We both got blessd by lord above
Now we breathe the air that was sent from above,
Ur roots grow longer mine grow thicker
not left longer till we..... :grumbling
u talk about a root, hek was i the juvenile shoot?
growin up seein wat i see, saying wat must be said
i see my so calld brothers at the time of congregation jus chillin playin all dead
life's short, a test no less
jus a matta of who worships n tries there bes'...
[i really should give up]
I had a wrestle with an alligator, i had a tussle with a whale, I handcuffed lightning, thrown thunder in jail! Only last week i murdered a rock, injured a stone, hospitalised a brick, im so mean i make medicine sick
"If you even dream of beating me you'd better wake up and apologise!"
kay:
^ ye bro its like watchin a disease
spreadin through both ma friendz n enemies
so ma bruvaz please stop sippin on dem keyz
u cant take nothin wiv all u can take iz ur deedz !
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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