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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
Check Islamic Poetry, then look for some stuff called Pre Islamic Poetry theres my rap/street poetry
Here's a couple of lines:
I was a dirty dirty mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem
Musta been keen to be clean
Uttered the shahada, became a brother free from sin
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
awwww heavy thread mujhahid kid lemme spit my lines
its like on a joypad A,A,B i batter all fake and all wannabeez
press pause u dont wanna start me
u cant categorise me in a category, im in a leaugue of my own
now gimme my crown n pass me my throne,
im a prosecutaa, eliminataa i take all manz lik dey minor, p
lol back in d dayz every1 was a rapper
Jaa-Ro-Nee-Mo!!!
"they ask you when will the help of Allah (swt) come! Certainly Allah (Swt) help is always near"
Check Islamic Poetry, then look for some stuff called Pre Islamic Poetry theres my rap/street poetry
Here's a couple of lines:
I was a dirty dirty mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem
Musta been keen to be clean
Uttered the shahada, became a brother free from sin
LOL! You got more... cuz from what I read you're the best!
da youth is lost, they think they kick back, chillin, they havin a larf
if dey dont fix up, they will be outkasts
they wana b slick and sleen, they wana b funny & popular lik mr bean
on that day, when there wont be a screen, Allah (swt) will ask them what they did for d deen
Jaa-Ro-Nee-Mo!!!
"they ask you when will the help of Allah (swt) come! Certainly Allah (Swt) help is always near"
da youth is lost, they think they kick back, chillin, they havin a larf
if dey dont fix up, they will be outkasts
they wana b slick and sleen, they wana b funny & popular lik mr bean
on that day, when there wont be a screen, Allah (swt) will ask them what they did for d deen
Allah gave chances for them to say
the word written back on clay
also the quotes of our beloved
but they werent intrested
the Angels will come- Man Rabuk?
they have no answer, confused n stuk
Its a 'game' where a person starts off with a couple of lines, and the person follows and has to rhyme that, also, for those more advance, you should try to 'multi' which means a rhyme within the line, examples:
I was a dirty Mushrikeen
Till I was guided on the Siratal Mustaqeem
Thats a basic line, heres a Multi,
I 'pray-salah' and 'say-Allah' guide me~
The 'day-aint far' I wont 'stray-Nah!', proudly..~
Used to do this alot before Islaam, sure did increase my vocabulary.
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
Allah gave chances for them to say
the word written back on clay
also the quotes of our beloved
but they werent intrested
the Angels will come- Man Rabuk?
they have no answer, confused n stuk
Then bang, struck, by angels deaf and blind,~
Because they strut their adornments, 'front-and-behind'~
They 'want-to-rewind' to a time, back in the dunya~
So they can obey the way of Muhmmad, and have a beard and kunya~
'Waking, weeping' been dragged by chains,~
'Shaking, seeking' from Ar Rahman's Grace,~
Pace Picks up, disgraced they end up, in the depths of hell,~
Outa luck, face that time is up, into their abode they fell,~
As proclaimed, and named in Al Qariah,~
Their Mother, Ummuhu Hawiyah~
(peace be upon Muhammad)
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
Man is my darling, my love and my pain,
My pleasure, my excitement, and my love again,
My wisdom, my courage, my power, my all,
Oh Man, do not come to me until I call.
In man is my life, and in man is my death,
He is hazard, my pride and my breath,
I sought him, I wrought him, I pant on his worth,
In him I experience indeterminate growth,
Oh Man, Man, of all my animal dearest,
Do not come till I call, though thou weariest first.
Shall I tell you the signs of a New Age coming?
It is a sound of drubbing ans sobbing
Of people crying, We are old, we are old
And the sun is going down and becoming cold
Oh sinful and sad and the lastof our kind
If we turn to God now do you think He will mind?
Then thry fall on their knees and begin to whine
That the state of Art itself presages decline
As if Art has anything or ever had
To do with civilization whether good or bad.
Art is wild as a cat and quite separate from civilazation
But that is another matter that is not now under consideration.
Oh these people are fools with their sighing and sinning
Why should Man be at an end? he is hardly beginning
This new Age will slip in under cover of their cries
And be upon them before they have opened their eyes.
Well, say geological time is a one-foot rule
Then Man's only been here about half an incj to play the fool
Or be wise if he like, as he often has been
Oh heavens how these crying people spoil the beautiful geological scene
some good stuff, im respectin bro Isa, keep it up akhee
and some of the stuff lol, lets maintain hayaa inshaAllah
coz wivout hayaa we aint nothin
and no i aint bluffin
see those half dressed fakes out there
those that r supportin mr blair
coz THEY DONT CARE... about the akhiraah
THEY DONT CARE, about performin a single sajaadah
THEY DONT CARE, about Allaah ! subhana wata'ala !
Glory be to him our only creata
produca,directa and provida
SUSTAINA, so bow, n say Alhamdulillaah !
Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 11-28-2006 at 10:46 AM.
coz wivout hayaa we aint nothin
and no i aint bluffin
see those half dressed fakes out there
those that r supportin mr blair
coz THEY DONT CARE... about the akhiraah
THEY DONT CARE, about performin a single sajaadah
THEY DONT CARE, about Allaah ! subhana wata'ala !
Glory be to him our only creata
produca,directa and provida
SUSTAINA, so bow, n say Alhamdulillaah !
Alhamdulilah, La Ilaha Illa Huwa ~
La Ilaha Ill Allah, what words could be purer?~
Light on the lips, heavy in the scales~
Angels with Tight grips, gonna take you to hell~
If you don't pray in humility get down on it, and testify~
That he inspired to His prophets, theres Noone worthy of worship but I~
Instead you making profit, on riba only to wither back to Him above the Sky~
Whislt we back to Him whilst still alive, attached with sin but still mad high~
Cos am strapped with mercy until the end of time~
That's cos He's merciful to those who bown down to Him only, right?!~
Peace be upon the prophets, and may Allah have mercy on us!
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
may Allah have mercy on us
wiv him belongs our truss
weneva shaytan comes u jus gotta dust
b4 he fills u wiv dat lust
your heart he will rust,
layers upon layers till you bust !
so audhubillah is what we say
to keep that horned freak at bay
comin around and causin dismay
but our imaan shall remain firm till the very last day
inshaAllah we shall follow the prophets way
-
My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
-
may Allah have mercy on us
wiv him belongs our truss
weneva shaytan comes u jus gotta dust
b4 he fills u wiv dat lust
your heart he will rust,
layers upon layers till you bust !
so audhubillah is what we say
to keep that horned freak at bay
comin around and causin dismay
but our imaan shall remain firm till the very last day
inshaAllah we shall follow the prophets way
Till the last day, I pray, we guided the right way,~
The Siratal Mustaqeem, on the straight deen, 'Hey..!'~
'Have you ever seen, him who denys the blessings of Ar-Raheem, could you,~
Show me the way, to a brighter day, never guide me astray~
From the right'a way, lets fight'a elevate, the Kalima~
Best Ummah from mankind, we different callibre~
We The Majority of Jannah, With A Leader who Leads Prophets~
Our Priority is to Enter, that place we bright prospects~
Where every soul shall have what it desires, no backbiting, rude words or liers~
The population aspires to see it's Lord's face and admire~
A place of peace, security, ease, opportunity to speak with those of old~
Eesa, Nuh, Musa, Lut, Ibrahim, Idrees, Harun, Yacub, Sulaiman, Yahya, Zakariya, cant wait to see ya~
Aadam, Ishaaq, Shuaib, Dawud, hey can you? Wait to see the beaty of..~
Yusuf, Ismael, Hud, Salih, who'd think we'd get to see Muhammad, sadly, not all mankind will make it~
Those who hear and obey, provided they bear witness, pray,~
Do hajj, fast and pay zakat, wont be astray inshaAllah.
Am too tired to write more lol.
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
A pirate I was meant to be,
Trim the sails and roam the sea.
We'll all avoid scurvy if we eat an orange..
erm...erm....what rhymes with orange...door hinge?
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