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    I would like to make this thread for posting my humble attempts at capturing timelessness in words. I've been jotting down these lines for quite a few years, at least goes back to 2007. The one's I wrote before, they have sunken into the seas of time and I cannot find their trace. My goal is to post the poems here for you, the reader including myself, to benefit, maybe they will motivate you, or maybe will force you to contemplate. I will also post the date and time when I wrote them so that I can keep track of what modes I went through in those few years. May Allah make it a means of purifying myself and getting closer to Him.
    Last edited by CosmicPathos; 01-22-2010 at 07:56 AM.
    Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    Help me to escape from this existence
    I yearn for an answer... can you help me?
    I'm drowning in a sea of abused visions and shattered dreams
    In somnolent illusion... I'm paralyzed
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    Re: Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    1:56 pm, FRIDAY, DECEMBER 5, 2008

    wrapped around celestial waters

    deepening around us
    were the murky waters
    wrapped in our shared grief
    and collective tragedy,
    but the serpents hath carried
    the waters away from our shores.
    away, far away,
    beyond the zenith of cosmos.

    Only if the serpents
    could see the patterns of
    these blinding shadows of light.
    Only if the serpents
    could feel the pain of
    the mackerel hanging from the shabby branches.
    But whose serpents are these?
    Of our past .... a shared yesternight.
    Forgotten in existence; captured in words

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    I yearn for an answer... can you help me?
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    Re: Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    1:03 am, SUNDAY, JUNE 8, 2008

    requiem

    The dotting rays of the morning light,
    shimmered and flickered
    in the bleak sphere of life,
    Its luminous intensity and
    the vehement savagery,
    all poured in
    like how the rueful tunes
    rush out of the reed of my existence.
    Forgotten in existence; captured in words

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    Re: Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    demotivated

    It was the universe's speck,
    muddled in disorder,
    expanding,
    dilating
    in the canyons
    of my narrow mind.

    On crescents of minarets
    and gothic spires,
    were hung
    the demotivated ones,
    because sorrows and heartaches
    were devil's heresy ....
    Forgotten in existence; captured in words

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    I yearn for an answer... can you help me?
    I'm drowning in a sea of abused visions and shattered dreams
    In somnolent illusion... I'm paralyzed
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    Re: Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    Soul scourge

    these tormenting days have revealed
    unto me the agony of ages,
    the echoes of the past
    are trapped in my ears,
    and call me to the brink
    of the shores of pains
    onto the ledges of
    the cathedrals of my hopes.

    I gaze at the thrashing oceans
    of timelessness below my feet,
    bloody-waters batter against,
    and carve pictures
    on the stone heart of mine,
    its your blessing,
    the universe would collapse
    onto my head in your absence.

    The throes of existence
    and meaninglessness
    and conflict in nature
    penetrate the receptive
    carnality of my body,
    please take my emotions away
    and give back my senses.
    Forgotten in existence; captured in words

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    Re: Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    you

    The vanguard of my chastity,
    this insolent misery
    and its frigid hooks.
    The tapered fissure
    awaits your mercy.

    Spill crimson ichor
    into the gaping senses,
    My opaline vase
    is your turbid casket,
    come, submerge, drown.
    Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    Help me to escape from this existence
    I yearn for an answer... can you help me?
    I'm drowning in a sea of abused visions and shattered dreams
    In somnolent illusion... I'm paralyzed
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    Re: Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    Assalamualikum,
    Mashallah very deep
    Forgotten in existence; captured in words

    “The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.

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