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    Will the misery continue till I cease to exist?
    When the angel comes will I want to resist?
    It’s only for Allah that I really persist…

    This life…
    I got no proper direction
    It offers no protection
    Just one lonely soul y’all
    Roaming in the darkness

    I need someone to guide the way
    Someone to offer kindness
    I don’t want to spend my days wrapped up in worldly plays
    Yet I don’t want isolation, no matter what anybody says

    I want to feel contentment in the things that I do
    I want to feel they’re worthwhile; I want to get my due
    I don’t care if it’s now or in the hereafter
    Because I know where I want to go, it’s to the creator

    But whilst I’m in this prison I need somewhere to spread my wings
    Away from the contaminated life we breathe, I need my soul to feel at ease

    Don’t want to be soaking oppression with each lungful of air,
    Don’t need the barbaric torture, I know for sure its there

    So do you believe me when I say, this life offers no protection?
    Its misery upon misery, corruption upon corruption
    Unfortunately we have nothing, with which to cancel them out
    No mercy, no compassion, just enmity and doubt

    I feel like a caged bird but I think I’m ready to fly
    I need the wind under my wings, to see life passing by
    But I don’t want to be part of that desired ‘essential beauty’
    The mansion, the Porsche and the plasma screen TV

    I need simple simplicity, not lavish luxury
    Just me and my wings for when my Lord calls for me
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    Re: Caged Bird

    s...S....SUBHAN"ALLAH! oh:

    this is incredible Masha'Allah! oh:

    I need simple simplicity, not lavish luxury


    Just me and my wings for when my Lord calls for me
    Caged Bird


    And as for the one who fears standing in front of His Lord and restrains the soul from impure evil desires and lusts, verily, Paradise will be his abode [79:40-41]
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    Re: Caged Bird

    This life…
    I got no proper direction
    It offers no protection
    Just one lonely soul y’all
    Roaming in the darkness
    Such deep! oh:

    Masha'Allah! I love that one.

    Jazaak'Allah Khair huni.
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    Re: Caged Bird

    mashallah Top notch!!!
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    Re: Caged Bird

    Mashallah sis!!
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    ‘Say: He is God, the One and Unique;
    God, the Eternal source and support
    Of everything;
    He begets not, and neither is He begotten;
    And none is His equal.’
    (al-Ikhlas 112: 1-4)
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    Re: Caged Bird

    BarakAllah feekum
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    Re: Caged Bird

    cool rhyme sis,


    but we all only cage ourself after Allah set us free
    the irony of it all..
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    My tears testify that i have a heart
    yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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    Re: Caged Bird

    I think I get where you're coming from.

    I wrote this in 2006 btw
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    Re: Caged Bird

    WOW! I can so relate to being caged. You put across your feelings really well mashaAllah.
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    Re: Caged Bird

    masha Allah excellent poem. I can so relate to it. I am starting to love this section of the forum. It is amazing how many poets we have in our midst. Alhamdulilah
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    Jazakumullah khayran peoples
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    Re: Caged Bird

    I is soooo stepping aside.

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    Re: Caged Bird

    No way Akhee!

    Plus you havnt shared your talent with your fellow LI'ers yet, let them be the judges insha'Allah =D
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