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    How can we live in a society that is built upon lies?
    Treachery and deceit- Surely we must be insane
    We constantly kill each other- not realising the pain.

    We claim to help the poor, help feed them
    Indeed this is true; we feed them to the soil
    After having destroyed them and their beliefs

    We claim to have the best technology-
    but after 2000 years still we cannot save lives
    Rockets, nukes. It don’t matter no more
    So much destruction - it is a bore

    A nightmare we live in.
    A continuous dream
    One that we will never awake from
    One that is unseen

    You see, this piece is not about just you or just me
    It is about every one - from the CIA to the police
    But maybe I have gone a bit too far-maybe I have crossed the line
    For I have mentioned the one word which has no place in this rhyme

    You are all the same - and will never awake.
    But I-I am different. For I have done the impossible - awoken from my dream.
    I have done the impossible - I have seen the unseen.

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    :awesome:

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    Re: Unseen

    aslaam alykum,

    very good, i liked that... infact im'a have to borrow that.......... if that is ok?

    wa alykum aslaam
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    Re: Unseen

    format_quote Originally Posted by Mr. Baldy
    aslaam alykum,

    very good, i liked that... infact im'a have to borrow that.......... if that is ok?

    wa alykum aslaam
    as long as you say it was written by aamirsaab - i dont want people stealing my stuff and not givingme credit for it.
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    Re: Unseen

    yeah sure dont worry yaar^^^ kya shyri
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    Re: Unseen

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    mashallah!!!! thats very good!

    we have soo many poets in here mashallah,

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    Re: Unseen

    format_quote Originally Posted by aamirsaab
    as long as you say it was written by aamirsaab - i dont want people stealing my stuff and not givingme credit for it.
    MashaAllah may Allah give you the credit you deserve in this world and more importantly in the akhira, for helping your brother.
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    Assalamu'Alaykum

    SUbhanallah that was very nice Mashallah... and inshallah dont expect anything from ppl Allah will give u all the credit u need inshallah...~ameen~
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    Re: Unseen

    You may understand my POLITICAL posts better after having read this poem.
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    nice poem brother
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    Re: Unseen

    warhmatulahi wabarakathu

    I like that very much especially the last line, beautiful!

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