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    Hello everyone,

    I wrote this poem and would like thoughts, comments, suggestions, etc.

    Thank you!


    The Key
    by. Latif Tanner

    The*world*will*know*peace,*
    only*when*the*discord*of*ignorance*
    no*longer*transcends*
    the*heartbeat*of*
    compassion.
    When the rememberance of Duaa,
    Quells the tragedy of ignorance,
    And suppresses*
    The pull of a*
    Trigger.
    The world will know peace,*
    When the passion for hate
    Can be dissipated by understanding,
    And replaced by
    Unconditional
    Benevolence.
    Only when we are*
    so quiet,
    And*
    so*still,*
    that*we*hear
    The*rhythm of our*
    Own hearts, will we know*Peace.
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    its nice without all the stars
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    nice poem mashAllah

    thanks for sharing
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