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Lateralus63 poems
I embrace my desire to feel the rythm, to feel connected, enough to stop deciding to weep like a widow but to, feel inspired and to fathom the power, and witness the beauty to bathe in the fountain, and to swing on the spiral of relativity and still be a human.
Last edited by Lateralus63; 04-29-2005 at 02:13 PM .
Reason: ARRR ME MATEY, ME DONE A SPELLING MISTAKE, ARRRR
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The poetry that comes from the squaring off between,
And the circling is worth it.
Finding beauty in the dissonance.
There was a time that the pieces fit, but I watched them fall away.
Mildewed and smoldering, strangled by our coveting
I've done the math enough to know the dangers of our second guessing
Doomed to crumble unless we grow, and strengthen our communication.
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MasahAllah
br. u cud make ur mark in the poetry section :applaud:
Last edited by Far7an; 04-29-2005 at 10:57 AM .
My heart, so precious,
I won't trade for a hundred thousand souls.
Your one smile takes it for free.Rumi
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Oh look, it is in the poetry section !, MashAllah wonderful moderating lol
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i didnt realise okay
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Your one smile takes it for free.Rumi
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mashallah very talented bro
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format_quote Originally Posted by muslimahimprovin
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i didnt realise okay
No sister, I moved it after you made your comment
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AHA!
there u go
i knew summat dodgy happend to my post
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Masha'Allaah very nice poems...I liked the first one especially. Btw, I didn't know that windows weep!
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thank you, i was meant to type "widow" , aaah.
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Lol, thats ok...it flowed quite well with 'window' aswell.
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just had a creative thought, maybe windows weeping could relate to the fact that its raining ! aah, thanks again
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I was also thinking...glass is actually a liquid not a solid, therefore after a very long time, the glass in a window will start to flow downwards (maybe this only happens in some glass)...therefore there IS some validity in your statement since we could think of that flowing motion as a weeping action I think we are thinking too much now lol.
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no no, its very good to reap the fruits of creativity.
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You have a very creative mind Masha'Allaah...I like that. Please show us your artwork aswell, it would be very interesting to see.
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mashallah very talented and creative, eagerly waiting for the artwork
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artwork? well i have my photography if you want to see that
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Go on then, although both would be nice
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yep bro waiting
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dont really have my artwork in digital form, but hey, i guess i can show you the photgraphy
I apologise for the quality of these photos, it was taken with my camera phone, which hasnt even got a megapixel
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4.../Moonlight.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...y/fishtank.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...rayoflight.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...dzmedia006.jpg
thats all i have online for now, ive been trying to upload some other photos but it never responds, anyawy, just click em, they should work
Last edited by Lateralus63; 04-29-2005 at 02:38 PM .
Reason: Vhat? Vhat? I made a mistake yaar , (urdu)
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