Heaven or Hell?

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this is another poem by me. i don't know if some one already has this title but i hope its okay. well...here it is. :D :shade:

Heaven or Hell

A blaze so terrible and searing,
All you'll see is people fearing,
Who will care for you?
There is no possibility of being saved through dying.
Now here is your punishment for all the days you've been lying.

So choose your destiny, Heaven or Hell,
In which would you rather dwell?


The evil-doers are yoked toghether in chains
Look at them crying cuz' of their pains.
It's food is the infernal tree and the bitter thorny bush.
The people of the fire wear shirts of tar
From Paradise they will be far.

So choose your destiny, Heaven or Hell,
In which would you rather dwell?

A great Kingdom
Blessings all around,
Having died once the righteous shall die no more
and their bodies shall no longer be sore.
The righteous shall abide therein forever,
cuz' they have been so clever.
No weariness or fatigue shall be experienced.

So choose your destiny, Heaven or Hell,
In which would you rather dwell?

There is unlimited happiness
and total comfort
It is incredibly vast
and will always last.
There is fine dwellings and high-ceilinged halls
Never will you worry about any falls.
There is no cold or heat that would disturb one.
There is cool and everlasting shade
that will never fade.

So choose your destiny, Heaven or Hell,
In which would you rather dwell?

Oh!, Brothers and Sisters
let this question Echo in your mind.
For you only get what you have worked for.
Leave your worldly games
and join in Jannah's hall of fame.
You have a choice
So choose your destiny!
I pray for all to unite and meet in Heaven!
Ameen!!!!

Well thats it....hope you liked it. :p :D

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Oh!, Brothers and Sisters
let this question Echo in your mind.
For you only get what you have worked for.
Leave your worldly games
and join in Jannah's hall of fame.
You have a choice
So choose your destiny!
I pray for all to unite and meet in Heaven!
Ameen!!!!



ur poem is great

May Allah bless u :wilted_ro
 
Assalamu 'alaikum

Jazakallah khair for sharing those :)

MashaAllah they were good
 
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Jazakallah khair sister...

Masha'Allah your poem is really nice and soo true :thumbs_up
 
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Oh!, Brothers and Sisters
let this question Echo in your mind.
For you only get what you have worked for.
Leave your worldly games
and join in Jannah's hall of fame.
You have a choice
So choose your destiny!
I pray for all to unite and meet in Heaven!
Ameen!!!!



ur poem is great

May Allah bless u :wilted_ro
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Thanx all of you!! And may allah bless you all!!! :D

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:sl: Aameen! I liked that Masha'Allaah that was a great reminder Jazakallah Khayr.
 
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:D :D :D :D

Ameen. Insha allah all of us will be together in jannah and i'll keep all of you in my prayers. Ameen.

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Assalamu alaikum wa rahmatullah,
My names, Shazeb. I am here in Chicago IL. where the youth are in need of a lot of assistance. Now a days the youth is following the way of the kuffar, dating, bating, greed, and the vile act of masturbation, which the worst thing is that they will admit to it, in public
:(. Sister who wrote the poem, im an individual brother, 17 years of age in one month Insha Allah. But my request to you is if you will let me transform your poem into a Islamic song,with NO MUSIC, as Music is described in this hadith, of course summed up by me, "music grows hypocrisy in the heart as rain grows crops." auw kama qala alaihis salaatu was salaam.
So with your permission, i would like to target the yourth and spread my word out to them
Jazakumullahu Khair.
Was salaam
Shazeb
 
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I am sorry to hear the horrible conditions there!!
I pray that things will improve inshallah!!

Bro I wrote this poem!!
I am more than happy to let you use this poem for a nasheed since there will be no music!!! I am very excited to hear this!! Jazaakalah bro!! You have my permission!! May i ask to be notified if things go well!!? :D :sister:

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:sl: masa allah it was very nice poem

..龍 Our Lord! Forgive us our sins and efface our bad deeds and take our souls in the company of the righteous 龍..

May ALLAH bring PEACE and BLESSING into Our LIFE and home!" :) Amiin amiin

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MaShaAllah.....it was a nice poem...thanks sis for sharing it with us....
Allah Bless you to remind us the truth of life....
Can't wait to hear the nasheed...let me know people when the nasheed is made.... :) :applaud: ;)
 
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Ameen!!
Jazaakalah!! :D
Inshallah we will!!
May allah 4give us all for our sins and make
us among those who enter paradise!!
Ameen!!
May allah bless all of you!!

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Insha Allah, im working on it, for me it seems to be a little difficult and worst part, im a SOLO, no one wants to particepate in bringing the youth back, hence i have no singers.!
Dear sister,i will do my best insha Allah.
Jazak Allah for your permission.
If anyone wishes to keep contact about this nasheed if in case i am not on
you may email me at
[email protected]
 
Sister, i will change, and add here and there, so please forgive me for that, since this is a poem it is VERY large to have a chorus.lets see what i can do. By the way, no one laugh at me, this is my first time posting a nasheed, ive sung many in performances, but for people to listen to ALL over the world of my OWN productional tune. is a bit intimidating. Please do not laugh Jazak Allah
 
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Masha'Allah brother you are doing an excellent job in trying to bring the youth back to Islam. I hope your nasheed is successful and don't worry, I am sure nobody will laugh Insha'Allaah. May Allaah keep you strong on His faith and help us all in all our affairs, Aameen.
 
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Ameen @ dua!!

Wa'iyaakah!!
I hope inshallah that things go well and do not become difficult for you!!!
I also think that it's okay if you change somethings!!
Like bro Muhammad said , Don't worry no one will laugh at you bro!!
May Allah keep you in the best of health and be with you all the way!!


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Assalaamu Alaykum!

I choose Jannah!...Insha Allah we should all prepare to make our journey!

Masha Allah excellent poem. May Allah reward you with good sister.
 

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