[Cabdullahi]

Dear,
future wifey
wherever you might be
im doing alright but my life is a tad empty
finally seeing you beside me will be my volupty
hijab tied tightly
lowered gaze and a face sparkling so brightly
and rightly so thats what i imagine
how long more do i wait is it by a big margin?
i hope we form a good bond
to build upon and nothing goes wrong
i see a steady graduation of love
like a dove
flapping its wings above
reaching for the heights
free from encountering smite
Holding hands we can get through this whatever life throws at us
staying emphatic but not carried away, keeping cautious
like the couple on the titanic its as if we are conjoined at the limbs
close like siamese twins
Im not perfect no one is
i cant cook and im ashamed of this
you probably hate the dishes
im ready to do everyone of ur wishes
including housechore basics
i guess i have to say bye bye to being bachelor lethargic
you are probably thinking marriage
we are on the same wavelength im contempleting it too.so lets start this bricolage

 

[Re.TiReD]

Dear,
future wifey
wherever you might be
im doing alright but my life is a tad empty

Cute ^ I like it. Masha'Allah

 

[Güven]

MashaAllah ! oh:

 

[chacha_jalebi]

awww

*pats your green head*

 

[FatimaAsSideqah]

As Salaam Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatuhu

Masha'Allah! Such good letter.

 

[Ansariyah]

wow.:sunny:

 

[SixTen]

Nice, but I think you went overboard with

im ready to do everyone of ur wishes
including housechore basics

Come on, no woman's going to buy that!

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!




i liked it MSN NOW

 

[Cabdullahi]

Nice, but I think you went overboard with



Come on, no woman's going to buy that!

Its easy you can make them buy it! but after you do so, you have to deliver!,you cannot be a conman

 

[FatimaAsSideqah]

Nice, but I think you went overboard with



Come on, no woman's going to buy that!

Lol! I am not sure if hes really mean it! ^o) But good letter though!

 

[Ibn Abi Ahmed]

Brilliant! Very enjoyable and sincere!

 

[Re.TiReD]

Nice, but I think you went overboard with



Come on, no woman's going to buy that!

Lol why not? There are plently of brothers competent enough to find their way to the kitchen and wash a load of dishes.

 

[Na7lah]

lol that was cute

 

[Cabdullahi]

^ i knew you guys were gonna find it hilarious lol at first i posted it as anonymous in the help section but i said nah forget it no point

 

[Ummu Sufyaan]

i cant cook and im ashamed of this
you probably hate the dishes
im ready to do everyone of ur wishes
including housechore basics

never thought id hear a guy say that :hiding:

Come on, no woman's going to buy that!

i must admit, i have to agree :hiding:

 

[buddy1]

Awwww! thats cute!!

but I dont believe the house chores bit either!!! lol!!!

 

[Sahabiyaat]

^ psst, no one does!!

your poem has gone off the cheesy-o-meter

 

[Cabdullahi]

bump

 

[czgibson]

Greetings,

I like the adventurous use of vocabulary here (especially "lethargic" and "bricolage").

Well done.

Peace

 

[Cabdullahi]

Greetings,

I like the adventurous use of vocabulary here (especially "lethargic" and "bricolage").

Well done.

Peace

Yay! i got thumbs up from an english teacher d.amn!!