LI Poetry Contest '08 - The winner is...

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With Poem Number 5

I sit here, day by day,
pensive, my heart captured by dismay,
I watch the world pass me by,
the howling wind, the rain falling from the sky,
The people I see, the people I hear,
many distant, only a few near.

I think to myself, what if I don't survive?
Where's my dedication; what happened to my strive?
Was I not the one who aimed high; And,
the one who always took a stand?

Again I fear I'm too late,
lost my perception, I fall for the bait,
As a bird that once knew how to fly,
now with broken wings, can only desire for the sky.

Reminiscing now, I try not to grieve,
consoling myself, I strive to perceive,
where I went wrong, how did I behave,
what seems to be pushing me towards that empty grave?

Awaken, I must, before its too late,
patiently, my desires I must sedate,
In between two swings of the pendulum I stand,
the past and the future; how can you fail to understand?

Rectifying the former, the latter falls into place,
regret plus resolve saves even the most wretched from disgrace.
A common destination, followed by two more,
life followed by death, followed by life evermore.

Now I can clearly see, my sights no longer blinded,
I can wait no longer, about my Lord, I've been reminded.
I soon have a meeting, one that I cannot delay,
it's either peace after that, or an eternity of decay.
This much at least, I must remember everyday,
I hear it one more time,: "And who despairs of the mercy of his Lord, except for those astray?" {al-Hijr; 56}

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It was him? I never would've guessed - I voted for you! Mabrook. It was pretty hard to choose, though, as they were all really good.
 
JazakAllah khayr to all those who participated, I'll be making a seperate thread announcing all the participants and which poem belonged to whom. All poems were fab masha'Allah! :D
 
yayyyyyyy I voted for it too!

Mabrooks to bro Abu Sayyad. MashaAllah!
 
lol I would have never guessed, Mabrook Akhee , And I voted for you !! :ooh:
 
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lol winner buys icecream for everyone! Isn't tht right Joiie? :p

These are my favourite parts frm this poem

I think to myself, what if I don't survive?
Where's my dedication; what happened to my strive?
Was I not the one who aimed high; And,
the one who always took a stand?
Touched me deep. :'(


Rectifying the former, the latter falls into place,
regret plus resolve saves even the most wretched from disgrace.
A common destination, followed by two more,
life followed by death, followed by life evermore.
amazing insight here.

This much at least, I must remember everyday,
I hear it one more time,: "And who despairs of the mercy of his Lord, except for those astray?" {al-Hijr; 56}
Beautiful use of the Qur'anic ayaah, mashaAllaah.
 
:offended: i voted for poem 11,who is the author. i want to buy your poem

congrats akhee! you got your name in shiny red letters,well done u ! :D
 
Sister jolie when is the next poetry contest!!!

and well done to bro abu sayyad
 
Mabrooook :D


it really was an amazing poem and i KNEW IT WAS ABU SAYYAD :D lol i cud tell the style :p
 
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:-[ Jazakallah Khayr everyone..I feel humbled as I really didn't expect to win. Thank you to everyone that voted :) It was fun writing the poem and I'm looking forward to the next contest!

Special Jazakillah Khayr to Sr. JolieFleur for taking the time and effort to organize it all. :thumbs_up
 
BarakAllah feekum!

I'm announcing the other names soon insha'Allah :D

The next contest is as soon as you'd like insha'Allah. Although some people wanted a short-story contest.

WassalamuAlaykum
 
Great I'll get my brain in gear and start thinking about how best to execute ze plan insha'Allah :)

But for now, lets get mabrook'ing the bro :p

Lol and btw I havnt announced the other names yet coz I'm waiting for sis Jawharah to do summin first :mmokay: :p
 
thing is, it has to be the "half a page" story contest


or we wont get many voters.

how many people willin to read loadsa short stories n then take time to vote?
 

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