Poetry Contest '09 - The Winner!

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Who entered the poem, Sincerity! :D


Poem 3

Sincerity

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i see him in the distance looking so pleased
a face shining with pleasure and ease
easy to approach, gentle in speech
inspirational..
as though nothing is out of his reach.

with no knowledge, i speak a word or two
"Brother, ive never met anyone as amazing as you"
he tries to smile as his eyes well up in tears,
and i can feel on his shoulders a mountain of fears..

and i wish for a second that i hadnt spoken
as i know just aswell that i wasnt mistaken
for i heard that brother whisper inside
"My lord forgive me.. for that which i hide..."
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It won with 10 votes masha'Allah.

JazakAllah khayr to all the other contestants for entering, my personal fave was poem 2, our silent deal :p masha'Allah.

Wassalam

P.S PM for prize insha'Allah
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:ooh: Amazing Poem MashAllah! I loved it! :D
Congratulations IbnAbdulHakim! :statisfie
 
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masha'allah. congratulations ibnabdulhakim. well done! :D

u should also get like a 'lifetime contribution to poetry award' lol
 
:sl: Mabrook bro! MashaAllaah your poem was short and sweet! Well-deserved. ^_^
 
Mabrook.

I actually voted for 2...I would really like to know who wrote that..if u are reading this pls let me know:embarrass

Why were the other poetry removed tho, I understand theres a winner but shudve left it up...some of those poems were beautiful.
 
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Mabrook.

I actually voted for 2...I would really like to know who wrote that..if u are reading this pls let me know:embarrass

Why were the other poetry removed tho, I understand theres a winner but shudve left it up...some of those poems were beautiful.
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Hey dear,

I wrote poem no. two. Thanks for your interest and support. And thank you also Hafsah dear. Im glad you liked my poem.

But honestly, mabrook ibnabdulhakim. I think your poem was absolutely beautiful. :)
 
Sincerity

i see him in the distance looking so pleased
a face shining with pleasure and ease
easy to approach, gentle in speech
inspirational..
as though nothing is out of his reach.

with no knowledge, i speak a word or two
"Brother, ive never met anyone as amazing as you"
he tries to smile as his eyes well up in tears,
and i can feel on his shoulders a mountain of fears..

and i wish for a second that i hadnt spoken
as i know just aswell that i wasnt mistaken
for i heard that brother whisper inside
"My lord forgive me.. for that which i hide..."

MashaAllah very nice poem. Mabrook Akhi, and to all of you who entered.
 
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Oops, you guys wanted the thread back, I totally forgot, I'll get onto it right away insha'Allah. I'll PM the entrants so they can choose whether or not they'd like to reveal their identities.
 

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