random poem i wrote

[true believer]

what is a man to a woman?

what is beauty to eyes?

what are thoughts to a mind?

how can u see the truth when u r blind?

how is love to a broken heart?

like keys to a lock...like hands to a glove

like pen to paper...like ink to an eraser

how u love with an empty heart?...how can u speak with empty words?

how can actions speak louder den words?, how can unspoken words be heard?, how can a poem be a poem if it dont flow?

 

[Cabdullahi]

superb poem i like the rhetorical approach ...... its top notch

 

[true believer]

thank u bro....ur da man when it comes to poems tho
i like ur poems alot, they really good mashalla, keep it up.

 

[Cabdullahi]

thanks but im just average but anyways ur writing nice poems so keep it up