The Middle Man

[IbnAbdulHakim]

the middle man


he wants me to help
i see her yearning

innocent eyes
see both hearts burning

i look around
already missed my turning

i see broken pieces
in pain they glaring...

i want to fix it
i wish i could

but i love them so much
i dont know if i should

my hands shaking
my heart so scared

i know when this ends...
they'll think i never cared...​

 

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:salamext:

Sikkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Güven]

omg MashaALLAH this was Amazinnnnnnnnnn! oh:

subhanAllah......

 

[Na7lah]

subhanallah :thumbs_up

 

[truemuslim]

mashallah thats nice!!

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

jaza/jizakAllaah khair oh:

 

[Re.TiReD]

You know what I thought :mmokay:

Masha'Allah.

Who is the middle man though?

Is he a figment of your imagination or did he exist?

 

[Güven]

you inspire me to begin with poetry !
If i could show my feelings into words that is

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ im sure you Can bro u got an amazin heart



sis jolie curiosity killed the fish oh:

 

[Re.TiReD]

you inspire me to begin with poetry !
If i could show my feelings into words that is

Bro....one tip...Dont try to write, you'll kill it all like that...just take a moment to reflect and the words shall come flowing from within....Blah that sounds lame but you know what I mean.

^ im sure you Can bro u got an amazin heart



sis jolie curiosity killed the fish oh:

Satisfaction brought it back

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

Satisfaction brought it back

that would have worked if i said "CAT"

 

[Güven]

Bro....one tip...Dont try to write, you'll kill it all like that...just take a moment to reflect and the words shall come flowing from within....Blah that sounds lame but you know what I mean.

no That sounded Awesome its like i know what you mean :thumbs_up

 

[Curiosity_]

Ooo, mashallah!
That was awesome.
So many talented poets here!!

 

[Re.TiReD]

Was searchin for ur kids thread and came across this again. Brought back memories.

 

[Güven]

SubhanAllah ! oh: Definitly one of the best poems around here

 

[Na7lah]

the middle man


he wants me to help
i see her yearning

innocent eyes
see both hearts burning

i look around
already missed my turning

i see broken pieces
in pain they glaring...

i want to fix it
i wish i could

but i love them so much
i dont know if i should

my hands shaking
my heart so scared

i know when this ends...
they'll think i never cared...​

sounds like someone stuck between arguing parents :-[
its really nice though