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It looks like it is the poem season....:D

Life has rendered me senseless

Kept me chained and shackled in darkness

In the midst of sorrow I profess my weakness

To a world completed deprived of kindness

Even the blind see the everlasting wickedness

Of Cold Hearts molded by the hands of the ageless

Through forgotten memories I’m able find forgiveness

As I stood alone they think I am fearless

But standing on the verge of the cliff I feel careless

Soon I shall be walking among the faceless

I time of mine has came to past to make me of the heartless​



Don't judge me harshly :scared:
 
:sl:

We wouldn't be harsh, specially me cuz I can't even do poetry. Anyways it's cool! I like how it all ends with 'ess. :thumbs_up
 
Jawharah said:
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We wouldn't be harsh, specially me cuz I can't even do poetry. Anyways it's cool! I like how it all ends with 'ess. :thumbs_up
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:w:

Thanks

We have something in common. Poems need to be constructed in a profoundily flowing manner, but i just abuse that rule.


Thanks
 
:sl:

Thanks bro Haron and sis Sahabiyaat

I thought my whole existence was to massacre the beauty of poetry. :-[
 
no way girl, you are fab

do u want to explain the meaning

the meaning i derived was 'joining the faceless masses' , being mislead and being very aware of it and being afraid. thats the meaning i took anyway lol :) i always take my own meanings out of poems and how i percieve them.
 
In the midst of sorrow I profess my weakness
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losing emaan



Even the blind see the everlasting wickedness

Of Cold Hearts molded by the hands of the ageless
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the ageless>> devils :uuh:??


Soon I shall be walking among the faceless

I time of mine has came to past to make me of the heartless
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becoming amongst the heedless.



thats my interpretation :)
 
Sahabiyaat said:
no way girl, you are fab

do u want to explain the meaning

the meaning i derived was 'joining the faceless masses' , being mislead and being very aware of it and being afraid. thats the meaning i took anyway lol :) i always take my own meanings out of poems and how i percieve them.
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lol You are close

My first line was "Love has rendered me senseless" but i changed it to life I don't know why :blind:

but the last line kinda gives it away I time of mine has came to past to make me of the heartless

Hope that helps
 

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