Visions of a prisoner...

[Re.TiReD]

Visions of a Prisoner
by ilmwear​

Prisoner
the vision of
gun metal grey –
Galvanized wayward strays,
Social dismay.​

No reprise
No surprise
Democratic decay corrodes to
moral disarray -
juristic delay.​

Morale ebbs away
Gaols wail with prey
…and we Pray. ​

Semantic Semitics echo hollow
in wallowing ethics
sorrowful sceptics joust
in the court of
carnal aesthetics.​

Wounds turn septic whilst
hearts hard - neglect this.​

Deceptive is the mind
lined eclectic with compassion
- of a fashion
epileptic with reflection.​

Protected
and now dejected
Affected –
but not effective
we seek to reach the
alms of the protected.​

The inhumane
play with the subhuman.
Freedom and Jurisprudence
stifles and rifles civil movements.​

Prisoners of the body
Confined of the mind
Captive from our heart
and voluntarily blind.​

Allahu Akbar – God is greater
than the raper of our tribes -
the paper tigers of our times.​

until the quill scribes
Who will earn the favour and
decide if our lives are worthy
of our Creator?​

 

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:salamext:

It sounds well kool...but my english is not this advanced :-[

 

[Re.TiReD]

:wasalamex

Lol same I guess, its through reading stuff like this that my English has improved slightly. Lol some parts are just deepness though:

Protected
and now dejected
Affected –
but not effective
we seek to reach the
alms of the protected.​

The inhumane
play with the subhuman.
Freedom and Jurisprudence
stifles and rifles civil movements.​

Prisoners of the body
Confined of the mind
Captive from our heart
and voluntarily blind.​

Allahu Akbar – God is greater
than the raper of our tribes -
the paper tigers of our times.​

until the quill scribes
Who will earn the favour and
decide if our lives are worthy
of our Creator?
​

oh: my fave parts​

 

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:salamext:

Protected
and now dejected
Affected –
but not effective
we seek to reach the
alms of the protected.

Sik rhyming...